Stories of Tie Up Games

More on the peninsula myself.

As ever nicely done, also nice little AFL tie in :lol: So glad you’re enjoying it my friend, I’m into being led around on a leash too if you’re ever interested 😘 If I was anywhere near Australia, I would happily take you up on that offer! As for your question, I love both the bondage scenes, and the...

Honestly the ratio of bondage to drama is great, though allow me my guilty pleasure in that a little more bondage would be a delight ;) . But at the end of the day your the boss :D Thanks Ossassin, I appreciate the feedback haha. The next update will be purely bondage since Ryan and Jack still need...

Honestly the ratio of bondage to drama is great, though allow me my guilty pleasure in that a little more bondage would be a delight .
But at the end of the day your the boss

One of your strengths as a writer, is that you have a talent for bring into your experiences to bear. For instance the chatting and exchanging fantasies is something most couples do (new and frisky couples) and the causal cuteness of that dynamic comes through.

Non-traditional for a story on this site, but delightful none the less.

This made me remember one of my firsts, you’ve captured the feel of it well, the anxiousness and the lack of certainty. And most realistically for a good first, the capacity of the other person to accept when you just don’t like/don’t feel ready for something.

I’m loving every inch of this, that conversation testing boundaries was a delight. Very charmingly brash main POV, hiding intentions for all of half a minute and then bam cards on the table honesty, love it.

Best place to be

Ah justice ... if Andrew noticed how much this was being enjoyed and put an end to that, alas we will settle for amusing.

Ah ... well can’t argue with that
Always a delight to see another Melbournian.

Loving your writing so far, and I greatly appreciate reading a piece with names that feel familiar (ish I’m more suburban) and terms of speaking that strike more true.

Also the upmost sympathy, perpetually, for the weather up in Alice Springs.

I could really go either way, mystery rewards very fun but suffering is also a delight.

Yikes losing your job over that is quite unfortunate.
Still if anyone is deserving of payback ...

I’m starting to see how we got to that ever so awkward end point

Darn younger brothers always a menace.

Welcome to the club one can never be to late to join .

Everything about this is awesome. Though my favourite bit (barring the collar and prod) is the texts at the end.

As mistakes go not earring someone of were you are going is pretty high on the list.
Good read so farm looking forward to the next portion.

It’s a delight to see you back, and god I forgot how much I loved the creativity inherent to your style.

D

Now I wonder, will the boss be receiving a most valuable gift from his kids or will the kids just hold this over their new babysitter’s head to keep him.
I’m looking forward to finding out.

10 to 14 year olds, you’ll be fine no worries ... however a mysterious thing known as foreshadowing has approached and warns of great peril in hubris.

Your dialogue is a work of art, specifically loving how everyone reacted to Ray’s attempt at dirty talk (gotta agree with them about the discomfort of the crudeness).
Also love your title card.

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