Stories of Tie Up Games

Oh, this'll be good!

In general, I do not care for M/M stories but you made me care about your previous effort - because it was written so effing well! If this is half as good as that one was, we're in for a treat.

wolfman wrote: ↑3 years ago I have to say, this is an excellently written story. It flows well and the characters have substance. I really enjoyed this.

Thank you for posting.

You're welcome. Coming from you, I really appreciate this.

Proteus75 wrote: ↑3 years ago This is richly-detailed, smartly written, dramatic story -- you should turn it into a screenplay!

Thank you for the feedback.

Ookay, so obviously Hidden Hills is the 'real' reality, but apparently the two 'bleed' into each other... Whatever that ends up meaning.

For some reason, I keep thinking of the movie 'Shutter Island' when I read this, but that's just me.

This story is good - though the end is very dark. I liked that you leave the gruesome part to the readers imagination. Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, the ending is grim. I tried a different one, but the given the story, this one just seemed to fit better. I tried to imply (rather than show) as much...

Here goes, my first story. Written in response to (and, to be honest, in collaboration with) [mention]Qwerty123[/mention]'s story request (http://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=42&t=12166&sid=9500a3ae6cd710d922ce814924ea7c3f). English isn't my first language, so there will probably be errors...

Please continue this lovely tale

Bandit666 wrote: ↑3 years ago That makes three of us all thinking the same

Guess we've all been around long enough to know that no matter what we expect, there will always be a curveball...

Reading and the occasional comment. Working up to writing.

Caesar73 wrote: ↑3 years ago Laura deserves a happy end ,:)

And Zoe deserves whatever Helena can think up.

I wonder about Kim .... something seems a little off ..... Of course, it could be that she just doesn't want to be a victim/target any more (she's had plenty of that in the recent past)... and given what kind of people her extended family are, it's entirely plausible she's trying to emulate them. T...

Oh, I hope Amy gets to talk some sense into Charlotte - after turning the tables on her!

I think part of it is just how 'iconic' the ball gag has become. Over time, for whatever reason, it has shown up so much in bondage pics/videos that in a way, it has become almost the definition of bdsm gag.

If the sequel is anywhere near this good, it'll be worth the wait

I'll give this one a go.

If Jude wasn't already off her pretty little rocker, well, Dr McAvoy isn't necessarily helping her any with that. Then again, is Jude really, well, crazy? And are her 'wardens' sane?
Mortal Kombat reference, nice!

The staff in that place would be enough to drive anyone insane, if they weren't already...
I'm very interested to see just how deep this rabbit hole goes.

Always nice to read a good 'revenge on a bully' story. This is one of those. Thank you.

Good question; Where is that dammed phone? I suspect, Maria might need some persuasion to reveal its location. I have the feeling some tickling will be involved, that I object of course ;) Even if Carla wasn't intererested in putting Maria through the same treatment she herself had to endure, I'm f...

I know 'Truth or dare', but how is 'Choice, truth or dare' played?

Now, why am I not surprised that Maria can't take what she's been dishing out on Carla? Classic bully.
Now, will Hazel keep Carla's vindictiveness in (in some degree of) check - or fan those flames? And where oh where is that phone?

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...and it just keeps getting better and better...

That was good. Thank you. Wouldn't mind seeing a sequel - Sarah showing Alexis what she'd done, Alexis trying it all by herself, Sarah tying Alexis, Alexis tying Sarah... or something else entirely?

A black spider with a Russian accent? Natasha Romanoff (aka Black Widow, she of the Avengers of fame) would approve

Sorry, couldn't resist. A fine continuation!