Overall nicely written, but if I may be honest, I think you could describe the tickling more.
Also, I'm a bit at odds with maybe having over-read it, but what exactly do Andrew look like?
I also like that Jean is starting to use tickling utensils here. ^^
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- 2 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: The spirit week [(1:f/m);(2:m/fm);(3:f/m);(4:f/mm);(5:fm/fmm)] [last Part added]
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- 4 years ago
- Forum: True Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Jamie Gets Payback On Me (Parts 1, 2 & 3) (f/m)
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Re: Jamie Gets Payback On Me (Parts 1, 2 & 3) (f/m)
Wonderful Story, will you write a story, where Jared being tied up and tickled, also?