Stories of Tie Up Games

[mention]Mineira1986[/mention] Ah, you're right. That would have been good. Guess it's a missed opportunity. Chapter 9 [/b] Sweet Becky closed her eyes, and Aziyah opened them. She sighed. Her tablet was beeping at her frantically, but Aziyah knew what it was trying to tell her without looking at th...

This is a fun story. I'm very curious to see where it goes.

Lesee... I remember liking one from one of the James Rollins books. I think it was Subterranean . Boy gets tied up by the bad guys, and I remember when he was trying to call for help, it was described as barely reaching his own ears. That details really conveyed a sense of helplessness. There was a ...

[mention]Ovi1[/mention] Could be, could be... Thanks for the comment. 🙂 [mention]Beaumains[/mention] Thanks! I hope the coming chapters will live up to your expectations. [mention]GreyLord[/mention] I appreciate that! I was worried I had let the attention to detail slip a bit, partly due to the natu...

I'm going to go with B, though I also like the idea of C. Can we do approval voting?

Chapter 8 Sweet Becky furiously threw herself against the barrel's walls but to no effect. It was too heavy for her to tip, at least with so little space to maneuver. Her stomach sank as she realized the truth of the situation. She was helpless, and nothing was likely to change that soon. Hidden aw...

[mention]Quintus09[/mention] Glad you're enjoying it!

[mention]Mineira1986[/mention] Glad you're still enjoying the story so much! I've been trying to keep a back-and-forth going between them.

[mention]GreyLord[/mention] Thanks! I'm not planning on stopping yet.

[mention]Ovi1[/mention] There are different types for players to choose from. The most popular is a typical cowboy revolver, which is what Sweet Becky tends to favor. But in this case, she was using Wild Nellie's gun, and Wild Nellie favored something slightly more appropriate for a hunter. Back in ...

Chapter 7 "So, what's the plan, boss?" Shy Sarah asked smugly as she leaned with one hand against a tree. About nine paces away, Ranger stood, grazing on the grass, waiting to be mounted. Sweet Becky hesitated, her pilfered charm-shooter still aimed at the nonchalant bounty hunter. She wa...

Just out of curiosity, what is "The T?" No idea. I was drunk when I posted this :lol: 😂 I asked a British friend where in the UK it might refer to. My best guess was "The Thames", his was "a cup of tea." Then we got to reminiscing about that Simpsons episode where the ...

Just a question: if they get to the 10 hours reset and they are in prison, when they come back, are they still in prison? Or do they spawn somewhere else? Thanks for the worldbuilding question. :3 They log in to the prison until their sentence is up. I guess I never made that explicitly clear, but ...

Just out of curiosity, what is "The T?"

Thanks everyone. I'm actually glad that people thought the field of poppies was clever rather than a deus ex machina. Next chapter might not be for a bit. Been sick, but I'm on the mend now, thankfully. As I said before, I won't say what I have in store for Shy Sarah and Sweet Becky, but I'd be curi...

Finally got around to reading this, after it had been on my list for a really long time. It's a great story! The premise is original and the characters are strong. As others have said, Giselle stands out because of her cynicism and outsider status. Looking forward to more.

Fun story! I hope to see more from you in the future.

[mention]Caesar73[/mention] Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! [mention]Ovi1[/mention] Oh, I definitely wouldn't rule out another encounter with Wild Nellie in the future. Nah, she lived a quiet life in a remote part of the forest. If the Summer Campers knew she existed at all, they had no ...

Chapter 6 Sweet Becky’s heart pounded as she continued to move through the forest. The further she got, the more apparent it was that she had no idea where she was or where she was going. As hard as she tried to retrace her steps to the highway, it seemed like she was only getting deeper into the f...

If I have not slipped up, I wrote that she put on the handcuffs on her wrists and ankles herself, and the other two pairs were put on by someone else, whom I decided to denote as 'it' in the gender tags. btw if this 'it' is the wrong denotation for a mysterious unknown person, someone should let me...

Ah, yeah, that makes a lot of sense. I was wondering how something like that would attach.

Still could make an interesting prop in a story even if it wouldn't be any good for real life play.

[mention]RopeBunny[/mention] Thanks very much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. [mention]trainer[/mention] Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've more-or-less decided that more details about the real world can wait until the first day's over and the girl's wake up. Focusing on other characters dow...

https://i.imgur.com/DzkY7Zx.gifv A gun that can wrap up a standing target. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UV4FNBIYeG4 A machine designed to tie packages closed, but that works equally well with wrists as demonstrated in the video. I just thought this was cool because I've never seen devices like th...

Disney's Pocahontas was the first to come to mind.

That one weird Kenan and Kell movie. It wasn't the main villain, just a couple of henchmen.

Yogi's Great Escape had a sequence where that happened with some robbers .

I see you guys' point. I should stick to details that serve the plot. You're right that there's an element of wanting to show off the details I've created, and I don't want the story to suffer because of that. I've probably been throwing in too many irrelevant notes into the text as it is. I'll save...

Thanks everyone for the comments! [mention]Mineira1986[/mention] Thanks! I tried my best to make this world neither utopian nor dystopian. It's an organized and peaceful society outside of the game, but it can feel stifling and there are still some people who just don't fit in. I'm considering somet...