Stories of Tie Up Games

It was a splendid idea to create this Arc where the Youngsters stand centrestage. The first paragraphs were breathtaking: I could see Kim scaling the cliff before my inner eye @wolfman ! Thank you for your kind words Caesar73 . It was a risk putting them front and centre. I am really pleased this r...

Playfullness, danger, revenge, loyalty and the erotic mysteries of ancient egypt. This chapter encspsulates everything that this tale has been about in terms of its greater themes.

A masterpiece.

Another fantastic entry that highlights the way that to tell a good scifi story, the golden rule is that the more fantastical the world, the more grounded the story must be.

This is a master class in human drama and I salute you.

Bravo

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Small rocks tumble into the chasm below her, where her shoulder brushed the sheet rock face. Kim smiles to herself, fingertips barely gripping the tiniest of hand holds and the toes of her boots in small cracks in the rock. She feels the rock before her, ever...

Caesar73 wrote: ↑2 months ago What an impressive Chapter again @wolfman - this time I will refrain from single out a sequence. It would destroy the balance to do so. My Compliments.

Thank you for your kind words @Caesar73.

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky “Tell me about these items.” Angela commands, gently. Angela stands before a small table of objects, dressed in a classic toga, next to Anya in more functional grey overalls, with her hair tied back in a ponytail. “They haven’t got names as yet. The smaller o...

Wow that Chapter was a rollercoaster. First Tara's awakening ensnared by wires, how very cruel. Incredibly the descriptions how Tara strikes back. My personal favourite is the last third in the Controlroom. Masterful, @wolfman ! Caesar73 I wanted to have some fun with Tara and showcase how scary a ...

A bit longer than I would normally post, however, I hope all who read have fun with it. Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky 4 months later (4 weeks, Atlantean Standard Time.) “Something isn’t right.” Tara thinks, pushing the last wisps of sleep from her mind and stretching. Except her limbs won’...

A perfect end to this epic, with a timeless sound track to matxh.

Bravo

Thank you @GreyLord and @Caesar73

I an looking to do a little world building and explore who the girls are as individuals. The next few chapters will likely be quite long and in some ways a story in and of themselves, but hopefully will be a fun read.

Lucky for me, you are a creature of habit. This afternoon i laced a bottle of red wine with a sedative and now it is a matter of waiting. You pass out on the sofa after a dinner for one and i slip in through the patio window. I quickly handcuff your wrists and elbows behind you and padlock a ball ga...

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Kim carefully picks her way across the rocks, alongside Oscar along a coastal path on Daemos, Atlantis. She looks across the water to the military structures of Garnos. Despite the stark barren landscape behind her and the imposing buildings across the water,...

Once again I return to find a multitude of fabulous and wonderfully well written updates with what can only be described as the work of a grand master, and just to add one more remark, yes your comment to Caesar73 response, you were indeed vague enough wolfman ;) Thank you Bandit666 you honour me w...

Caesar73 wrote: ↑2 months ago Very intriguing no doubt! But I am not sure about Oberon´s Intentions - we will see Do carry on - Grand Master!

Oberon is somewhat grey in this section, but over time his motivations become clear. (Hope that is vague enough)

Perfect.

When something is this good, no other words are needed

Oberon sits back in his chair, with his back to the dining area. The high walls of the room add a classic majesty to the space, that is only enhanced by the tapestries that adorn them. The restaurant is busy, most tables have a party of at least two dining and drinking, whilst the burble of conversa...

This will be a chance to give each a clearer voice and maybe explore some one off plot lines That sounds like a good approach to me - at times Characters for which we thought only to have limited use are developing a larger Role, than originally intended. In my Verse Merit is such a Case :) Precise...

That you @Caesar73 We have seen what Kim and her sister have done together. I thought it might be interesting to see how they work alone. This will be a chance to give each a clearer voice and maybe explore some one off plot lines

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Two weeks later, Temporis realm, Ministry of Education, Conference room twenty four. The air of the waiting room, is heavy with disturbed dust, catching beams of sunlight as they stream in. Few adornments, grace this room, save for a table, chairs, bookcase, ...

And that is how it's done

Round of applause and standing ovation from the crowd

@Caesar73 and @GreyLord thank you for your very kind words.

I have always strived to create interesting and engaging characters and tried to keep the story fresh. Thank you for your support and kind words

Bandit666 , Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Dani hovers in place above the city, the lands of Haven spread beneath her. Shadows of the dead swirl around her, silently. She feels the souls of the dead, pass through her on their way to the Great Beyond. She flexes her power and commands the remaining d...

This was fantastic,, this imagery was perfect and the banter spot on. All I ask is please let Winona be alright.

Unfortunately I am running behind on reading this story (been binge watching the Shetlands TV series). I should really read more, but it pulled me in... 2 more seasons to watch... aarrgghghhh.. I'll finish reading this story some day. I understand the lure of Shetland, it is a great series. I am so...

OldTUGger wrote: ↑3 months ago Wow. Just.....wow.

It's really great to hear from you. I am pleased that you enjoyed this latest chapter. I hope you are well.