Stories of Tie Up Games

Angela looks down at Dani, stroking her face gently with the back of her hand. “I can guide you to the truth, but it will be a hard road. Nod if you want to do this.” Dani stares up and Angela and thinks for a moment, “I should tell her to fuck off. But why didn’t I free myself, for that matter, why...

Will we hear more about the long night? Whatever Grand Master @wolfman decides will be best. That was an excellent interlude. You might be in luck. Will we hear more about the long night? Whatever Grand Master @wolfman decides will be best. That was an excellent interlude. Not much left to add Grey...

Masterfully done. You really capture the sense that the battle between Anna and Amun begins when they both enter the arena and the visceral descriptions of action.

I also really like the way that Anna is true to her noble heritage and beliefs despite every instict telling her not too.

Bravo

You dont hear me sneak up behind you on the deserted street. Before you know it a cloth is pressed to your face and you lose the fight not to inhale the chloroform on it. I carry you a short distance to my van and lift you into the back. I make short work of your shirt and skirr leaving you in your ...

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Kim flops back on the makeshift camp bed and stretches out. Tara sits on the edge of her bed exhausted. Anya cracks her neck and falls forwards on to her bed. Ali yawns and scratches the small of her back. As if of one mind they all change into t-shirts and s...

Dani's character has been troibled for some time but can't get to the heart of the issue. Maybe Angela will help her in more ways than one.

@Caesar73 @GreyLord Thank you once again for accompanying this tale on its journey, there are ever more twists to come.

Dani shifts uncomfortably on the bed, hearing soft footsteps crossing the room. She feels the side of the bed slightly compress, as someone sits down next to her. “Easy, just relax. I am not here to hurt you.” The woman says, gently. “Sorry about this, it’s all a bit last minute. I am King Halpron’s...

The End was really a surprise :) Dani seems to know the Woman - who may it be? Excellent! Indeed, a slightly familiar voice in the darkness. How can I put this, awesome, intriguing, fantastic and delightful. With yet another one of your little twists at the end. Keep it and we will all be waiting f...

GreyLord wrote: ↑3 months ago The nonstop action and adventure continue. Unexpected ending with Dani. Well done.

You know me, @GreyLord, i like to throw in a surprise every so often.

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky From the moment she and her sisters stepped out onto the control room floor, they had no rest. Kim, Anya and Ali would take a pod of four dispatchers each and take them through the dispatch process. Until all were comfortable and then they moved to the next. ...

@GreyLord @Caesar73

It has been a nice challenge to write characters who normally are up to their necks in conflict showing a different side to their characters.

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Nikita settles back in her seat at the head of the table and closes her eyes. With a thought she connects the direct neural interface of her suit with the mapping software generating the hologram above. Kim relaxes in her seat and connects to the sheath netwo...

@GreyLord @Caesar73 thank you for your kind words.

I wanted to show a little of what everyone brings to the party and this will be explored more over coming chapters. We will see some different kinds of action from everyone

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky All eyes in the room turn to the door as Halpron opens it and strides across the room to take a seat beside Nikita. Under the table, he subtly squeezes her hand as she whispers an update on the meeting so far, before connecting his comms to the meeting. “Gree...

Masterfully done and perfectly paced.

I cannot help but wonder with all the focus on the Aztec delivery, if the sight of wolves is an omen of ill fortune closer to home.

@GreyLord @Caesar73 thank you for your wonderful comments, i am glsd you are still enjoying this tale. There will be some action soon, but not the violence you are used to from me. We will get a chance to see the characters save lives for a change

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Nikita stirs slowly, her hand creeping across the bed. She snaps to wakefulness not feeling Halpron at her side. It takes a moment for her mind to catch up, until she realises Halpron is on the phone. With a worried look she whispers, “All OK?” He returns her...

You bring such wonderful surprises, @wolfman. I never expected to run into a Nephilim here. You know me, I like to throw in something unexpected every so often. I do really love the last part of this chapter: This intimate moment when Sasha talks to Kurt. It is captured so perfectly. Sasha ia only ...

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky The babies sleep in their bed, while under the darkening sky, all the other members of the family are gathered around the fire pit as Halpron speaks, with powerful sweeps of his arms, “So we are charging through this forest on the back of a rhino, the size of...

I always like playing with phrases that native speakers use but those not familiar struggle with, just for a little levity.

Dani has a long and tough road, but she is not alone and she is starting to realise that.

@GreyLord i have quite a few plans for where we will go on this journey. Watch this space

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Sasha leans across to Halpron, watching the girls as they canter around the field. “I love my sister very much.” She whispers to him. “So do I.” He says glancing at Nikita across the field, before turning his gaze to Sasha. “I don’t want to see her hurt. If y...

@GreyLord @Caesar73

Thank you for your wonderful comments. Nikita has suffered so much and deserves a happy ending. There is a way to go before it all plays out but we will follow her and her sisters journeys to see the futures that they have

Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Kim and her sisters, stare at Sasha and Nikita with a combination of awe and admiration. Dani smiles at their hero worship, “It was a hell of a fight, but Sasha only won because Nikita held back.” She thinks, with a shrug. Halpron smiles at Nikita and winks. ...

GreyLord Caesar73 thank yoi for your comments. Sasha and Niki are both formidable fighters ans it was a challengebto write this fight between them. In a flat out fight, Niki has so many advantages over Sasha, but Sasha is not without her own abilities. I wanted a brutal fight where they went for ea...