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by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: THe Old Hut (M/mm) Jimmy and Paul - A revelation : added.. Just an epilogue
Replies: 29
Views: 21722

THe Old Hut (M/mm) Jimmy and Paul - A revelation : added.. Just an epilogue

The Old hut by Frank Burns "Paul, you said this place had only junk. Come look at this." "Look at what?" "This you idiot!" Jimmy responded. Paul moved carefully across the dust covered floor of the loft area of the old scout storage hut. He wasn't sure that it was actau...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 5 added Sept 29
Replies: 10
Views: 13596

Re: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 3+4 added Sept 18

Part 5 [St Abb's Village - Tuesday 01:00am] The sergeant, in his wisdom, knew that his best hope would be to get to St. Abb's some dozen or so miles south of Cocksburnspath. From there he could set up an encampment at St Abbs Head, north of Mire Loch. The headland there would be a good lookout and a...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Part 6 added Sept 16]

Part 7 [Test 6] Simon had interlocked his fingers behind him. Five horizontal loops carefully placed and gently pulled tight and tied of. Using the same rope four vertical loops were added, these pulled tight and tied off. Moving back in front of Simon he teased him with a little tweak on his nose. ...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 5 added Sept 29
Replies: 10
Views: 13596

Re: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 2 added

Part 4 [le faucon - Monday 9:00am] It turned out that this day would be start uneventful. Fransoir unbound the boys and was to spend most of the day with them, as was the orders of the captain. He knew the parting would not be easy for them. [Cockburnspath village - Monday 9:00am] Likewise on shore,...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 5 added Sept 29
Replies: 10
Views: 13596

Re: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 2 added

Part 3 [Advocate McGrady Household - Sunday 1:30pm] Mrs McGrady was almost in a panic when her husband told her of what seems to have happen. Mrs Poole likewise, shedding tears. "Pull yourselves together. No anger or sorry will change anything." McGrady said kindly. "I have spoke word...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Part 5 added Sept 10]

Part 6 It was eight o'clock in the morning when Wilhelm came in. Simon, dressed in a track suit, was sat playing paitience with the cards, having got up early and showered. He looked up at Wilhelm who had a tray of bacon, eggs and a pot of tea. He looked really upset as he placed it on a table at sa...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Part 5 added Sept 10]

Thank you so much for your comments. Please allow me to add another little twist to the tale.

Part 6 to follow:
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 5 added Sept 29
Replies: 10
Views: 13596

Re: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm)

Part 2 [Advocate McGrady Household - Sunday 5:45am] Advocate McGrady; the sergent at arms; Mr and Mrs Poole, Williams parents; and Mrs McGrady stood talking. Rory McGrady was speaking. "Sergent, Jamie seems to have gone off playing again last nigh. He took young William with him. I fear they ha...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 5 added Sept 29
Replies: 10
Views: 13596

Re: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm)

[mention]wataru14[/mention] Thank you for the comments. As a point of interest: The palces do exist; Cockburnspath is there, the cove is there, the caves are there. Even the boats did exist at that time. You have to cross the north road to get to the cove. (Alas I have never been there).The clothing...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Quite a Boarding School! (mm/mm) New! January 16th
Replies: 122
Views: 114185

Re: Quite a Boarding School! (mm/mm) New! September 12th

[mention]Bondwriter[/mention] I most certainly am enjoying it.. Your tails are 'right up my street'. I have followed the tail of the school from the beginning. And your other stories. Most of which I have copy/pasted to my removable disk. (yes I know I don't normally comment- SHAME ON ME!) I have no...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 5 added Sept 29
Replies: 10
Views: 13596

Sightings at Duns Cove (Multiple M/mm) Part 5 added Sept 29

[Cockburnspath - Scotland - 1704 - 8:45 pm] The two youngsters had sneaked out to check up on what one had seen each Friday for the last few weeks. Alone he had been to afraid to check it properly, but with a friend comes courage. By travelling almost north east they moved steadily towards the cove...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Part 4 added September 03

Part 5 Simon was awake early showered and dressed in his jeans and shirt from one of the drawers. For several minutes he inspecting the door. He had no real intention of staying Wilhelm's prisoner any longer than he had to and he didn't trust that Wilhelm would actually give him money and let him go...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Part 4 added September 03

Veracity Please don't take this the wrong way and I'm not trying to open a debate, I love, and need, input and critism (good or bad/private or public). And I never take offence. As a new writer, it is the only way to improve. And as I have shown, I enjoy correcting errors, such as the cell phone, no...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: We are going to win this time (mm/m)
Replies: 9
Views: 13221

Re: We are going to win this time (mm/m)

Thanks for the responds. Praise indeed from the 'Professionals'. It's much appreciated.
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: We are going to win this time (mm/m)
Replies: 9
Views: 13221

We are going to win this time (mm/m)

. "I'm telling you Jack. We just have to win." "And I'm telling you, there is no way. Their goalie is far too good. He's only let in 4 goals all season." The two boys were in the park, sitting on the swings. Not swinging on them, but there wasn't anywhere else to sit. John, the o...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Parts 1 - 3]

Part 4 Food was soon finished, equipment - the ropes, bandages, bags of other stuff all went into the boot alongside the spare wheel some odd tools and some overalls that were already there. Simon was glad he wasn't going in the boot. He glanced down the little dirt track. "Now now, Simon, don'...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m

Part 3 Simon's eyes slowly opened as he woke from his pitiful sleep. He'd been tied up like a pretzel for several hours and his arms and legs were starting to hurt. He groaned knowing there was nothing he could do unless Wilhelm untied him... Wait a minute... where was Wilhelm.. His bed was empty. S...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m

Part 2 Forty minutes later a slight groan uttered from Simon's lips as he started to come out of the drug infused sleep. Instinctively he went to get up and realised that he was stretched out and tied to a beam of some sort. A wriggle of his legs told him his ankles were also bound. He looked from l...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m

Part 1 It was a pleasant evening, dusk just starting. The bird song dimming to the sounds of crickets, Simon's favourite time of the day. He was walking slowly down the tree lined lane towards the circus camp site, occasionally stopping to the sounds of the woodland transitioning from day to night. ...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m

Having given the matter some thought. I felt that it would be best if I re-jigged the story so it would follow on from the others. This should keep the purests happy and not detrack too much. It's simple enough to turn items about. And explaining the inner workings of a tipler cylinder in the storyl...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m

:cry: Fat wrinkly old men then. :cry: I don't care Phone stays. Oh hang on... Have you never heard of a Tipler cylinder? :D The thought first arose in the mind of Mathematician Willem Jacob van Stockum in 1924. (But they misspelt his name in the theory books his real name was WILHELM.) That was all ...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend m/m

BC99: Well they have aged.. but a mobile phone isn't much of a clue, that would put Simon somewhere betwwen 11 at 90 :) It is somewhat explained in part 5. I assumed (and I might be very wrong) that Simon was early teen at the Birthday Party and Wilhelm about 15. Then it was about 3 years later that...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Re: Simon and his old Friend

Part 1 It was a pleasant evening, dusk just starting. The bird song dimming to the sounds of crickets, Simon's favourite time of the day. He was walking slowly down the tree lined lane towards the circus camp site, occasionally stopping to the sounds of the woodland transitioning from day to night. ...
by frankburns
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]
Replies: 37
Views: 40307

Simon and his old Friend m/m [Final and Epilogue for Simon and Wilhelm]

By means of introduction~:- I've missed Simon so much that I thought someone else must be missing him... Wilhelm! So I decided to write a story. Boundwriter, the owner of the characters Simon and Wilhelm has given me permission to publish this. I wont pretend that my scribblings will be as good as h...
by frankburns
4 years ago
Forum: Suggestions and Comments
Topic: Site speed
Replies: 44
Views: 41303

Re: Site speed

I just logged on stats showed 5 users and 101 guests. Clearly there seems to be a huge bot, tracker or scanner problem. I'm not sure if it can be done but if you can make it members only and go straight to the log in page. Guests could then be directed to a register page automatically that should ke...