Stories of Tie Up Games

Had the chance to catch up to your stories. I remember reading the first few parts awhile back but haven't been on the site for awhile till now so glad to see you still got some really good updates out. Keep up the good work! Thank you so much, it's great to hear that you're enjoying the story! I i...

First things first...sorry for the lengthy delay in posting. Sometimes they are planned. This one was not. There has been a massive amount of tumult at my place of employment and I've been working early mornings to late nights for the last two weeks. And that might continue for a couple more weeks....

charliesmith wrote: ↑9 months ago A really nice update. I am very invested into this story now

Thanks, I'm glad that you're enjoying it - there's plenty more to come!

Really interesting to see how that played out, it obviously wasn't going to end well. I actually don't think that either Elisa or Courtney come out of this particularly well. With Elisa, it's kind of expected, though I think she was just being her usual brand of reckless and stupid rather than outri...

It certainly seemed like a chapter focussing on Jessica and Greg was in the works after the latter's earlier appearance, and I'm glad to see that's the case. You did a good job providing a lot of background and insight into both of them this part without it dragging on, and a lot of Jessica's reflec...

Another great part, and Elisa continues to live up to her reputation. I really do think she could do with taking a leaf out of Courtney's book on this occasion, though - people aren't going to continue cooperating with her requests when she dishes out this kind of treatment (though it remains to be ...

Firstly, I think this thread might be helpful for you - Tips For Beginners: Storywriting My personal advice would be to read other stories wherever you can, and think about what you liked about them, and what you can learn from them. I would also suggest focussing on what you enjoy, rather than what...

Really enjoyable story, I think Maya and Jack complemented each other well. I especially liked the reveal that the insurance fraud plan was mostly just a ruse on Maya's part, it seemed like you were hinting as much early on without giving it away, so the story progressed nicely. Great work!

[mention]Fandango[/mention] Thank you, this is very high praise coming from you, I'm glad that you're continuing to enjoy the story. When selecting chapters to group together, I try to pick scenes that I think will complement each other, and as you point out, it can alter the view of the characters....

Elisa really doesn't seem to be messing around (not that she ever does, from what we've seen so far). From the looks of things, Courtney is going to have her work cut out for her when her turn rolls around. And if I remember correctly, there wasn't any discussion on who would win if Trent can't esca...

Note: Sorry for the delay in getting this next part out, I was hoping to do so before I had a bit of travelling lined up, but I didn't quite get around to finishing the edit until now. Anyway, enjoy! Part 17 March 2019 “…you’re staring at my boots, aren’t you?” I blink a couple of times and refocus...

Nice story so far, well-paced and an intriguing premise - looking forward to seeing what happens next

I like the set up that you're putting into this part, the negotiations between Elisa, Trent and Courtney are fascinating, especially because they all seem to have egos. It was good to see Trent actually drive a tougher bargain at various points, I think he would have negotiated differently at the be...

Very nice setup for the chapter. I don't necessarily think that Elisa and Courtney will take advantage of Trent's cooperation here, but I wouldn't be surprised if they do, especially given that the same thing happened in just the last chapter. That said, we've still not seen what he'll be getting in...

Great to see you back, hope you enjoyed your trip! I really enjoyed this part, seeing how both Tabitha and Dominic are moving on from the earlier events in the story. It's not a dynamic that I expected to crop up again, but I'm glad that it has. Dominic didn’t know where this road was heading…but he...

Neat story, I like the playful dynamic you've established between the characters. I would definitely enjoy reading more of this!

Interesting follow-up to your previous story! Lizzie sounds like she was a lot of fun, and it seems like you took a lot of positives from the experience, which is great to hear

Really cool chapter, fascinating to see things circle back to the heist and hear about it from a different perspective, which definitely helped make the characters involved even more well-rounded. Plus, learning about Tabitha's involvement in the No Proscenium show was a nice surprise. There's clear...

This was a great update. I enjoy bondage stories from most genres. But there is obviously a special place in my heart for revenge tales. However, the rollout of this story toys with the very way in which I read revenge stories. A normal story will present me with a wronged party in need of justice....

I really like how both Abbie and Trent handled this in the end; it rounded off the chapter nicely. It's great to see the different relationships develop with each passing chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing that continue. This was definitely one of my favourite chapters so far overall - it ha...

Act 1 Chapter V – The Stranger [/u] Tara waited with bated breath for Lucas to return from the bathroom. As she was someone who loved to live in the moment, for Tara, this whole escapade with Lucas was about chasing some kind of thrill. A thrill that she could recollect and relive whenever she felt...

Just caught up with this beautifully written story. It’s well written and I love the exploration of the relationship the narrator has with other characters. Even bits which doesn’t have bondage are very interesting to read. Looking forward to read the future chapters! Thank you very much, I really ...

Another excellent story from you - intriguing, gradual buildup, followed by a very satisfying payoff when the bondage arrives. I like the relatively ambiguous ending as well - the reader knows moreorless what has happened, but is still left with questions to consider. Did Adriana's experience help ...

You've rounded off this chapter nicely, as well as setting the stage for what's still to come. As for the upcoming POVs and chapter 12, I think waiting until chapter 11 before making any suggestions makes sense, seeing as there are still five more POVs that we haven't seen yet. I'm assuming one of t...

Another excellent story from you - intriguing, gradual buildup, followed by a very satisfying payoff when the bondage arrives. I like the relatively ambiguous ending as well - the reader knows moreorless what has happened, but is still left with questions to consider. Did Adriana's experience help h...