I always like playing with phrases that native speakers use but those not familiar struggle with, just for a little levity.
Dani has a long and tough road, but she is not alone and she is starting to realise that.
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- 4 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
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- 4 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
@GreyLord i have quite a few plans for where we will go on this journey. Watch this space
- 4 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Sasha leans across to Halpron, watching the girls as they canter around the field. “I love my sister very much.” She whispers to him. “So do I.” He says glancing at Nikita across the field, before turning his gaze to Sasha. “I don’t want to see her hurt. If y...
- 4 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
@GreyLord @Caesar73
Thank you for your wonderful comments. Nikita has suffered so much and deserves a happy ending. There is a way to go before it all plays out but we will follow her and her sisters journeys to see the futures that they have
Thank you for your wonderful comments. Nikita has suffered so much and deserves a happy ending. There is a way to go before it all plays out but we will follow her and her sisters journeys to see the futures that they have
- 4 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Kim and her sisters, stare at Sasha and Nikita with a combination of awe and admiration. Dani smiles at their hero worship, “It was a hell of a fight, but Sasha only won because Nikita held back.” She thinks, with a shrug. Halpron smiles at Nikita and winks. ...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
GreyLord Caesar73 thank yoi for your comments. Sasha and Niki are both formidable fighters ans it was a challengebto write this fight between them. In a flat out fight, Niki has so many advantages over Sasha, but Sasha is not without her own abilities. I wanted a brutal fight where they went for ea...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Not for the feint hearted Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Sasha rolls her shoulders and tries a couple of test punches in the Sheath. She frowns, slightly, “It’s not bad, but it’s a bit loose for my liking.” “Look at the underside of your left fore arm and tap the panel.” Nikita says, helpin...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
@GreyLord @Caesar73 @slackywacky thank you for your very kind words and messages of support over the years.
Without your patronage, I am not sure, I would have kept posting and got to this milestone.
Without your patronage, I am not sure, I would have kept posting and got to this milestone.
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Well, after a long road this story has reached 500,000 views. I would like to take this opportunity to thank everyone who has followed this tale since its inception. With special mention to Caesar73 , GreyLord , slackywacky and Bandit666 for your unwavering support of both my story and mtself. This ...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Caesar73 GreyLord and Bandit666 thank you for taking the time to read and comment. The possibilities for this tale are many and varied, the challenge is making them feel real and grounded in the characters. I find the quiet moments, make the action of all types feel more impactful. This is one of a...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord slackywacky Kim frowns for a moment, “What about Auntie Dani? Can she come too?” Sasha inhales slowly, “To be fair, we haven’t spoken to her about it yet.” “Why not? She has to come too. It wouldn’t feel right without her.” Kim says, fearfully. Sasha takes a seat on the ...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord With these characters, I could write endless action scenes, but they would mean nothing without the quiet moments. I often find it hard to create bridges between events in this story, but I find it is always worth it. The characters have a reason to be where they need to...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: The games that we play. Part 13 added, (2/5) m/fffff
- Replies: 179
- Views: 146987
Re: The games that we play. *NEW* Part 11 added (23/11) m/fffff
@Bandit666
Welcome back, with a storming return to form. That was a great start to my day and painted a tapestry rather than a picture. I really enjoyed the imagery and playfulness you display without crossing the line. Bravo
Welcome back, with a storming return to form. That was a great start to my day and painted a tapestry rather than a picture. I really enjoyed the imagery and playfulness you display without crossing the line. Bravo
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
If you wish to be added to list, please let me know slackywacky Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord Halpron wakes slowly, reluctantly, languidly. In reaction to the light burning his eyes he squeezes his eyes closed and rolls away from the light. His powerful arm, wraps around his bride to be and he pulls h...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
@Caesar73, the short answer to your question, is yes. But she will show up when you least expect it and i think you will be pleased.
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Well done @wolfman - I like the interaction between the family members - and to see Steve in this role is indeed delightful. Halpron and Steve seem to get along well. Thank you Caesar73 , Steve and Halpron are similar in a few ways. Both lifelong soldiers, men of integrity and honour and very disci...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
New chapter as a little morsel and if you wish to be added to list, please let me know slackywacky Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord Nikita flicks the kettle on, which Sasha closes the door to the living room. Dani opens the back door and steps across the threshold, to light a cigarette. Sasha looks Nikit...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
GreyLord Caesar73 Bandit666 Thank you very much for your comments guys. This was fun to write, there has been a lot of darkbess lately and I wanted something fun. I liked the idea that Nikita was more worried about facing her family than facing a horde of monsters. I also liked the idea of her and ...
- 5 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
New chapter for the weekend and if you wish to be added to list, please let me know slackywacky Bandit666 Caesar73 GreyLord The Jaguar SUV purrs, passing a sign for Leicester southbound on the M1. The afternoon sunshine, streams through the passenger side window. Nikita reclines in the passenger sea...
- 6 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: The Files of Art. Inc.: The Hunt for the Lost Scrolls: Chapter 116 (01.04.2024) (FFFF/FFF/ MM/F)
- Replies: 860
- Views: 419797
Re: The Files of Art. Inc.: The Hunt for the Lost Scrolls: Chapter 91 (09.11.2023) (FFFF/FFF/ MM/F)
Anna is playing this like a game of chess. Checking the layout of the board and the limits of her movement, while subtly arranging the pieces on the board.
Wonderfully done.
Wonderfully done.
- 6 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
GreyLord Caesar73 slackywacky Thank you for your kind words. There are a lot of options for the future and I have a few ideas on the way forward over the next story arc and possibly beyond. Slacky, I understand how the fight may have been hard to follow. It was in part intentional to convey the cha...
- 6 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Next chapter and I have tagged regular commenters, if you wish to be added to list, please let me know Bandit666 GreyLord slackywacky Caesar73 Dani wakes slowly. She reluctantly opens her eyes and stares at the alarm clock. “Five? Damn it.” She says under her breath, thumping the snooze button on he...
- 6 months ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
- Replies: 1257
- Views: 676145
Re: Revelation (M/F) (F/M) - A sequel to Devastation
Have some catching up to do, so I started with your latest chapter @wolfman - I love the introdcution, the atmosphere you create with describing the weather. Somehow the elements seem to reflect what is going on. Steve is a great teacher it seems - or legend, as Hunter puts it. The conversation bet...