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by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: A Grey Area (M/F) (Chapter 4 Added - Complete!)
Replies: 35
Views: 28694

Re: A Grey Area (M/F) (Chapter 4 Added - Complete!)

Yes, I am very late finding this story. WOW, Eve has a really good friend. I, at least, take them out of the grey area and cast no blame. Deep needs were satisfied in a most delicate manner. Thanks a lot, I'm glad the story was to your liking. It's always interesting to hear different people's pers...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94795

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

Great stuff, this chapter is building very steadily towards a conclusion, but it's going to be fun to see what happens next with Lexi before then. I also get the impression that 'Harris' and 'Jane' are going to feature again later in the story somehow, but otherwise it's very tough to call where thi...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94795

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

The playful vibe in the last couple of parts has been really enjoyable to read, and obviously quite a significant shift in tone from the previous chapter. Lexi just sounds like she'd be a blast to hang out with in any context, and I enjoyed her teasing of Greg. You've actually got me invested in whe...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

I love the level of creativity you put into each chapter - the use of the paint was really cool and I don't think I've seen anything like it on here before. Everything was described really well too - you did a great job of conveying a very chaotic scene clearly enough that it was easy to picture eve...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F, Chapter V Added)
Replies: 17
Views: 6602

Re: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F)

A very intriguing start. I love the way you describe your characters. I am invested in this story now :D Thanks a lot, I try my best to make my characters distinctive, so I'm glad you like it! Loved the first part Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! I have to say, the start is very intriguing Niamh pre...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F, Chapter V Added)
Replies: 17
Views: 6602

Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F, Chapter V Added)

Disclaimer - this story is going to be a bit different to what I normally write, and most if not all of the bondage that occurs within it will be non-consensual - needless to say, I don't condone or endorse any such behaviour, and that all of this is completely fictional. I realise that it won't be...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Great to see more of Courtney in this one, and to see some of Jackie's own handiwork finally. It's definitely interesting to see Jackie in a situation where she's out of her comfort zone for once, but maybe she'll change her tune once Trent reveals what his 'games' for them are - sharing the experie...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Nice build up for the rest of the chapter - it's going to be interesting to see how Trent takes things out on Jackie given that we know how much she enjoys being tied up, and more so than the other characters we've met (at least based on what we've seen so far). As for what Jackie is suggesting (and...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Red Phone Booth (F)
Replies: 7
Views: 3420

Re: The Red Phone Booth (F)

I really like how something as ordinary as a phone booth was at the centre of something strange, and the whole story had a really mysterious air because as the reader, we only know as much as Angela does about what's going on. You've got a real knack for writing suspensefully, looking forward to wh...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94795

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

I've had a lot catch up on with this, but still really enjoyable. Chapter 4 was every bit as intense and dramatic as I had expected, and it was great to see you execute a different sort of tone extremely well. You handled a sensitive situation very tastefully, and it was easy to sympathise with Kyli...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Red Phone Booth (F)
Replies: 7
Views: 3420

Re: The Red Phone Booth (F)

I really like how something as ordinary as a phone booth was at the centre of something strange, and the whole story had a really mysterious air because as the reader, we only know as much as Angela does about what's going on. You've got a real knack for writing suspensefully, looking forward to wha...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Gaming Tournament F/M
Replies: 3
Views: 6818

Re: Gaming Tournament F/M

I really enjoyed this - the dynamic between Douglas and Serena was a lot of fun. I don't know if you have a continuation planned for this, but I would enjoy seeing more if you do!
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: In The White Room (?/F) (POV Vote Story)
Replies: 29
Views: 13434

Re: In The White Room (?/F) (POV Vote Story)

Since she has already seemingly explained herself, I'd say option A. The question then is what do we do with the keys, maybe releasing her would allow the game to continue elsewhere?
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Elisa's payback was great, and it was good to finally meet Sam in this chapter, can't think for a more awkward way for him and Trent to have met but they handled it well enough. I feel like Elisa is ready to drop the pretense of it being a game with strict rules now. She seems to want someone who wi...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Really enjoyed that chapter, it was great to see Elisa brought down a peg, and to get a greater insight into Dale's character. It sounds like Elisa is going to come back hard though. As Courtney is still relatively new and has made such a big impression on the group, she's the current flavour of the...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: In The White Room (?/F) (POV Vote Story)
Replies: 29
Views: 13434

Re: In The White Room (?/F) (POV Vote Story)

I really like the concept for this story! First few parts have been very enjoyable

At this point, I think curiosity would get the better of me, so I'd opt for option B
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 18 Added - 30/10/23)
Replies: 81
Views: 87217

Re: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 12 Added - 22/03/23)

[mention]Fandango[/mention] Thanks again for the feedback, it's great to hear your thoughts on this. I'm tempted to add a chronological list of the scenes for that purpose, but if you do reread any parts I'd be really interested to see if it changes anything for you, because like you say, there's mo...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94795

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.) [Nonsense Poll Added]

Finally caught up with this, a lot has happened in the latest chapter! It's obviously taken a more serious turn than what I've gotten used to seeing from you on here, but you write it very well. I think the tension of the scene really came across while Lawrence was trying to find a way out of the si...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Really nice conclusion to the part, I love how Courtney has made such an impression so quickly, it's definitely going to shake up the group. I like that she didn't just allow Trent to make his assumptions about her reasons for the deal or misrepresent her (whether he meaned to or not). Her attitude ...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 18 Added - 30/10/23)
Replies: 81
Views: 87217

Re: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 11 Added - 03/03/23)

Part 12 July 2018 I can’t point to a specific moment where I fell under Louise’s spell, but as I look up at her now, I know one thing for certain – I am enraptured by her very essence. I’m still tightly secured to my own bed, my limbs outstretched in an ‘I’ shape. Every detail of my situation feels...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

[mention]Fandango[/mention] This was a really great part - I loved Courtney's creative torture, and the little touches like how she positioned herself on top of Trent or how she lifted his face with her thigh were great, I think she has a cool attitude and I'm eager to see more of it. As for the dea...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Courtney proving again why she's a great addition with the way she handled that situation. I think Trent should have seen that coming a mile off though - if he really wanted to cooperate he and Erica should have taken turns with each other's knots, but I think his overconfidence got to him here. He'...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94795

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF. F/M. F/F, etc.)

Caught up on the latest parts - that was pretty intense! I think you did a great job of conveying how stressful and humiliating the situation would have been. The game definitely seemed rigged, especially given Julie's involvement at the end when she was 'helping' Brendan - I wonder if she was the a...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291152

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

I love the way Courtney is going about this; she's supremely confident for someone new to the group but has the game to back it up. It's also nice to see Erica make a return, it sounds like she and Trent are in for some real torment together. I'm looking forward to seeing how Trent handles having an...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94795

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF. F/M. F/F, etc.)

Nice part, it does seem like Brendan is making a mistake, but I can't really blame him for not trusting anyone involved in this game - I feel like it's surely rigged in favour of the girls so that they get at least one capture. Whatever happens though, I'm looking forward to seeing it play out!