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by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Kinky Girl(s) From the Western Wear Store (F/M, M/F, FF/M)
Replies: 9
Views: 5205

Re: The Kinky Girl(s) From the Western Wear Store (F/M, M/F, FF/M)

One last chance before I pull this one down for lack of interest in any continuation……… Try not to be discouraged, there's definitely interest in your story, based on the responses you got when you posted the first part, and by the views it's had. I'm sure you'd get more responses if you continue t...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

I'm really enjoying seeing the early stages of Brendan and Julie's relationship like this, and even though he's not being as sadistic, it's great to see him exact some payback. It remains to be seen if this will change over the rest of this encounter, but had Brendan been crueler here they might not...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291054

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Great update, you continue to come up with creative situations to put these characters in. I'm not sure they'll manage to beat Trent's game, but it will be interesting to see how they continue to work as a team, especially Erica. Can't wait to see the rest of it unfold!
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F, Chapter V Added)
Replies: 17
Views: 6602

Re: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F, Chapter II Added)

Note: Apologies for the lack of bondage in this part, which is mostly intended to further set things up. Chapter IV will have a much greater focus on people getting tied up, as will the rest of Act 1. Act 1 Chapter III - Hook, Line, and Sinker [/u] “You know Nick and Amy, right?” Tara said into Nia...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291054

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Fantastic start to the chapter! Trent is lucky to have a friend like Jackie who is so quick to help him get what he wants. Whatever game he has planned I'm sure is going to be fun, though maybe not for all the participants. I can imagine that Elisa will be pretty envious when she finds out about thi...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

Great update, it seems like we're building towards a crucial moment in Julie and Brendan's relationship - the fact that the night of Brendan's initiation is still hanging over them is a definite obstacle, but hopefully they'll be able to put it to bed after Julie's had her revenge, which I'm very mu...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

I'm really enjoying the complexity of these characters and the interactions with one another. The sessions with Kylie clearly add another complication to Brendan and Julie's relationship, but I can understand why it might help Kylie. Obviously she and Brendan have been through ordeals with some simi...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 18 Added - 30/10/23)
Replies: 81
Views: 87211

Re: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 14 Added - 07/05/23)

These were three very informative segments that gave me a new perspective on several things. I like the way the narrator is able to remain submissive but assertive. I think I read a good many stories where it seems like the dominant person is driving the scene and the relationship. Part of me feels...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Book Tour — New Assistant (M/F, M/FF) Part Thirteen Added
Replies: 54
Views: 22209

Re: Book Tour — New Assistant (M/F, M/FF) Part Twelve Added

Great stuff, things are progressing nicely, and it seems like Emily's methods of motivation are working. The ending to this latest chapter was great as well, looking forward to the next part!
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 18 Added - 30/10/23)
Replies: 81
Views: 87211

Re: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 13 Added - 23/04/23)

Part 14 January 2019 “Satisfactory,” Louise says dismissively, but the look in her eyes betrays her true feelings. I know that she isn’t the type to deliberately make me genuinely feel like I haven’t pleased her, hence the look, but part of me likes to think that her glowing complexion is involunta...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Lovers of Kala Magai (M/F, fantasy)
Replies: 20
Views: 8941

Re: The Lovers of Kala Magai (M/F, fantasy)

Great stuff, I really like the fantasy setting you're creating here. I can see some real chemistry developing between Daxos and Kadya; this has got the makings of a very enjoyable read all round!
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

I really love what you're doing with these two characters, and how their story is being linked back to Kylie's. It's fascinating to see Julie struggle with hypocrisy and guilt, but I wasn't expecting to see her eagerness to support Kylie be what pushes her to accept Brendan's offer. For Brendan's pa...
by Rtj65
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

Really good part that provided plenty of insight into both Brendan and Julie. I really liked that Brendan stood up for himself there, it's clear that he was understandably slow to trust Julie. Seeing where they end up only makes it more intriguing to find out how that happens, given how they got off...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

Another great part, giving us more of an insight into the dynamic in Brendan and Julie's relationship. I actually found myself warming to Julie more in this part, because although she is absolute in the things she does, it's clear that she does also care about Brendan. I don't get the impression tha...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F, Chapter V Added)
Replies: 17
Views: 6602

Re: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F, Chapter II Added)

This story seems right up my alley. Maybe a little bit of a darker alley. But I like to wander down those sometimes. There are dozens of stories on this board where we see somebody fall into a meticulously planned and well-executed trap. I'd never complain about that. I love those stories. But ofte...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Book Tour — New Assistant (M/F, M/FF) Part Thirteen Added
Replies: 54
Views: 22209

Re: Book Tour — New Assistant (M/F, M/FF) Part Ten Added

I've just caught up on this - really love your style of writing, and you've created a really fun dynamic between Simon, Emily and Greta. I also enjoyed seeing Simon become more confident as the story goes on. Keep up the good work!
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F, Chapter V Added)
Replies: 17
Views: 6602

Re: Vindicta (M/F, F/M, MF+/F)

Act 1 Chapter II – Honey Pot [/size][/u] Anywhere but here. Actually, scratch that. There was one place that Niamh wouldn’t rather be at right now, but that wasn’t saying much. Outside the closet, there was the faintest suggestion that the noise was dying down; perhaps her torment was soon to be at...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

Once again you've shown how well you can pull off different tones with the latest part, as promised it's a lot more sexually driven than the previous chapters, and those weren't exactly PG all the way through either, but it's done extremely well. The descriptions and level of detail you've provided ...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291054

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Even though Jackie didn't really owe Trent an apology, this was an apology from her. So she was always going to give him what he wanted. What he wanted was Courtney. And Courtney was also somebody that he couldn't get himself. Not for another week at least, as he'd made her a promise. I don't see J...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 18 Added - 30/10/23)
Replies: 81
Views: 87211

Re: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 13 Added - 23/04/23)

Each part of this story takes another step in some very interesting directions. I love the way that it moves forward and shows the relationships from different angles. I recognize that at the forefront of this story there is a relationship between two people, but I always appreciate in any story wh...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

Nice conclusion to the chapter, and I like how it seems as though both Greg and Lexi have learned a few things that they didn't know at the start of the chapter, which sets things up nicely for the rest of the story. Also, your dialogue is top notch - snappy, engaging, and it feels like real people ...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Replies: 369
Views: 291054

Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)

Courtney is just an incredibly likeable character, I like how straight up she is about everything. This was a great conclusion to the chapter, and as always set up the promise of a few scenes we can look forward to seeing. There was some really great insight into the characters throughout, I really ...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)
Replies: 213
Views: 94782

Re: Kaleidoscope: No Proscenium (M/F, FFFF+/M, MM/MF, F/M. F/F, etc.)

That was a nice conclusion to the game, and very satisfying to see Greg and Lexi work together to figure it out, on top of all the good natured teasing beforehand. There's also been some nice character development in this chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing how Greg and Lexi affect the story ...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 18 Added - 30/10/23)
Replies: 81
Views: 87211

Re: Causality (F/M, FF/M) (Part 12 Added - 22/03/23)

Part 13 January 2019 “I know… it has been a long time, hasn’t it?” Louise says as casually as possible into the phone; her level of composure is remarkable all things considered. I can’t quite make out the reply, but in truth I’m not really listening, as I’m somewhat preoccupied. Well, preoccupied ...
by Rtj65
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Book Tour — New Assistant (M/F, M/FF) Part Thirteen Added
Replies: 54
Views: 22209

Re: Book Tour (M/F): Part Three

I really enjoyed the first few chapters, you're got a nice style of writing that's easy to read. The premise is really interesting too, and the playful, if initially awkward, dynamic between Simon and Emily is a lot fun