Snug and Warm (F/m)

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Post by Deleted User 1255 »

Fantastic story!! I’m a big fan of blanket mummification and facesitting, so it’s nice to see a story incorporate both.

Keep up the good writing!
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No need to apologize! I think every story needs at least some detail added to it, you can’t just jump right to the tie ups off the bat.

You’re pace for the opening of the story and setting the scene was really good, it didn’t drag on. You built up some nice anticipation through the opening half of your story
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Post by MaxRoper »

This is great! Blanket mummification isn't usually one of my hot buttons but you've made it quite interesting.

Do I see little shards of writer's block lying in the gutter?
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Post by ZTVFemdomtales »

Very nice. Glad to be reading your works again,
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Post by sockgaggedsissy »

Great story!
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