IT’S THAT TIME AGAIN


It’s time for the next short story competition.

The topic is “It Was That Time again” or, if you prefer, “It’s That Time again”.

Look at the rules in the February 2020 folder before posting.

Good luck.

Who's The Dom(mme)? (M/F)

Stories that have little truth to them should go here.
Roboticrobin20
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Post by Roboticrobin20 »

I really enjoyed this story, I never knew the chapters would come flying in so fast.
You're writing talent is amazing. I think I should learn from you. My writing isn't nearly as good. I should learn from you. :D

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A very good tale, with sneakiness winning, lol!

Love it!

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Thank you from us both for the kind words, [mention]herdfaninrva[/mention], [mention]RopemanSteve[/mention], [mention]Caesar73[/mention], [mention]Roboticrobin20[/mention], and [mention]BindPam[/mention]!

Roboticrobin, I've learned something by posting hubby's stories over the last year (which will explain how all three chapters came out so fast, lol). In the past, I would post a chapter almost as soon as he made the final edits or changes. Then he would write the next one, and so forth.

Sometimes, though, weeks, even a couple months would go by before he was done. He's a busy man, and has to make time to write these stories. He doesn't want to just scribble something down for me to post, he wants it to be a story he would want to read. He takes his time with these stories.

For this story, I just waited until he had the whole thing finished before I shared it here. I broke it up in three parts anyway, for two reasons. First, it's long! Even what I posted as Chapter One was too long, I think. Second, I like cliffhangers. The earlier chapters may not quit be that, but I do love typing out, here on this board, To Be Continued...

And he's already about halfway (I think) done with his next story....
Don's Stories, Posted by Emma, Are Here!:viewtopic.php?f=46&t=5915

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Post by Bandit666 »

I have to agree both of my contemporaries here Emma and of course yourself Don, great story well worked as always and certainly leaves me and the other readers wanting more. :)

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Post by TightsBound »

Loved this story! It was really original and flipped the dom/sub labels on their head. And the little shyamalamamian twist at the end showed there was more sub to this domme than she lets on, and created a nice circle in the plot. Great work!

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Shanya
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Post by Shanya »

Great story! I enjoyed reading this! :D

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