Re: It's a Business (M/M+)
Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2020 9:56 pm
All good things must come to an end but what a wonderfully satisfying and happy ending it is.
Glad to see that Andy, Evan and Reed all enjoyed their Christmas presents. Nice to see the different ways they go about training them and how their relationships develop.
Loved how Kenny and Garrett responded when Caleb returned to the office after Christmas and so glad they decided to stay with him (of course they did!). It's great that Caleb is finally able to take them home with him and so they can be with him all the time. Also nice to see that Cole is doing well with Arden.
The scenes depicting the reunion between Caleb and Jamie were really nicely done. I like the fact that Jamie has developed so much since his early times with Caleb and that they are now on a much more equal footing. Caleb submitting to Jamie is such a powerful moment between them and really shows how much he loves Jamie. Of course he can't submit forever and turns the tables later on! Also great catching glimpses of their boys playing together whilst their Daddies work things out - nice to see that they all get along.
The final role play scene was very enjoyable with everyone entering into the spirit of it. I love Caleb slowly rounding up the boys and taking time to reassure Clark and Deke. A fitting end that his final 'kidnap' is Jamie. Loved the way he carried them all across the threshold to start their new lives.
Nice to have a final roundup of where everyone is now. It's a shame four of the guys we saw captured didn't get a chance to become part of this loving household but I guess you can't have everything. It's amazing that you've managed to turn a story about someone who kidnaps people for a living into such a positive and life affirming tale. A shame so many of these guys had to be captured to realise their full potential.
Wonderful writing, so many fun and clever little details, lots of characters but all with their own unique personalities. So much great bondage - you'll always win me over with straight jackets and sleepsacks! I also love the contrast between the improvised bondage during the captures and the much more professional stuff later on. An incredibly complicated main protagonist - I think I'm going to have to take some time to think about his character alignment!
Garrett is still my favourite character although Cole is up there as well. I just feel I got a bit more chance to know these guys compared to some of the others and I felt I could relate to them the most.
It's been a privilege to read and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work [mention]Volobond[/mention]
Glad to see that Andy, Evan and Reed all enjoyed their Christmas presents. Nice to see the different ways they go about training them and how their relationships develop.
Loved how Kenny and Garrett responded when Caleb returned to the office after Christmas and so glad they decided to stay with him (of course they did!). It's great that Caleb is finally able to take them home with him and so they can be with him all the time. Also nice to see that Cole is doing well with Arden.
The scenes depicting the reunion between Caleb and Jamie were really nicely done. I like the fact that Jamie has developed so much since his early times with Caleb and that they are now on a much more equal footing. Caleb submitting to Jamie is such a powerful moment between them and really shows how much he loves Jamie. Of course he can't submit forever and turns the tables later on! Also great catching glimpses of their boys playing together whilst their Daddies work things out - nice to see that they all get along.
The final role play scene was very enjoyable with everyone entering into the spirit of it. I love Caleb slowly rounding up the boys and taking time to reassure Clark and Deke. A fitting end that his final 'kidnap' is Jamie. Loved the way he carried them all across the threshold to start their new lives.
Nice to have a final roundup of where everyone is now. It's a shame four of the guys we saw captured didn't get a chance to become part of this loving household but I guess you can't have everything. It's amazing that you've managed to turn a story about someone who kidnaps people for a living into such a positive and life affirming tale. A shame so many of these guys had to be captured to realise their full potential.
Wonderful writing, so many fun and clever little details, lots of characters but all with their own unique personalities. So much great bondage - you'll always win me over with straight jackets and sleepsacks! I also love the contrast between the improvised bondage during the captures and the much more professional stuff later on. An incredibly complicated main protagonist - I think I'm going to have to take some time to think about his character alignment!
Garrett is still my favourite character although Cole is up there as well. I just feel I got a bit more chance to know these guys compared to some of the others and I felt I could relate to them the most.
It's been a privilege to read and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work [mention]Volobond[/mention]
