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Re: Simple English (F/F) FINISHED 21.4.21
Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2021 5:48 am
by Boundcurious
Seriously? Oh crap, I had no idea... Well, I can't speak for anyone else, but I think Ingrid would be inclined to think so.
I didn’t notice whilst reading, only afterwards. Once I did, it tickled me
Re: Simple English (F/F) FINISHED 21.4.21
Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2021 11:13 am
by NotSeen
Boundcurious wrote: ↑3 years ago
I didn’t notice whilst reading, only afterwards. Once I did, it tickled me
I'll bet! Tell you the truth, when I first read that, I wasn't sure whether to think it was hilarious or horrible. But in the end, so? Let's just consider it some kind of perverted serendipity.
Re: Simple English (F/F) FINISHED 21.4.21
Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2021 12:40 pm
by Boundcurious
NotSeen wrote: ↑3 years ago
Boundcurious wrote: ↑3 years ago
I didn’t notice whilst reading, only afterwards. Once I did, it tickled me
I'll bet! Tell you the truth, when I first read that, I wasn't sure whether to think it was hilarious or horrible. But in the end, so? Let's just consider it some kind of perverted serendipity.
Hilarious. I’m 100% team hilarious!
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2021 1:37 pm
by Boundcurious
I am sorry if I made you feel awkward though
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2021 2:08 pm
by NotSeen
Boundcurious wrote: ↑3 years ago
I am sorry if I made you feel awkward though
No need to apologize. Looking back on it, it is hilarious.
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2021 1:07 am
by Trickster
Excellent wrap up a well-told story. I like how you explained the background and how the escape was affected. Her comeuppance at the end was great and I'm intrigued by the people se t to punish Evelyn. Great story!
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2021 3:22 am
by NotSeen
Trickster wrote: ↑3 years ago
Excellent wrap up a well-told story. I like how you explained the background and how the escape was affected. Her comeuppance at the end was great and I'm intrigued by the people se t to punish Evelyn. Great story!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
...and who knows, should you stick around, you might run into some of them at some point down the road...
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2021 3:10 pm
by Beaumains
Although this story invludes a lot more pain/BDSM than I usually read, I enjoyed the story a lot. The lack of unncessary details mdae the story fast-paced but without feeling like younjust described scenes without any "real" characters. A few good plottwists and well-timed explanations helped a lot. Thanks a lot!
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2021 5:15 pm
by NotSeen
Beaumains wrote: ↑3 years ago
Although this story invludes a lot more pain/BDSM than I usually read, I enjoyed the story a lot. The lack of unncessary details mdae the story fast-paced but without feeling like younjust described scenes without any "real" characters. A few good plottwists and well-timed explanations helped a lot. Thanks a lot!
Thank _you_! I'm very pleased to hear that the story was good enough to keep your interest despite not really being the kind you like. Frankly, that is high praise indeed.
Many thanks for reading and especially taking the time to comment.
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2021 8:29 pm
by Trickster
I am most certainly sticking around!!! No doubt about that at all!
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2021 1:29 am
by ChelseaEevee
such a good story!
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2021 1:29 am
by ChelseaEevee
such a good story!
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2021 1:44 am
by NotSeen
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2021 8:08 pm
by run2win98
That was another GREAt story! Man, I love your writing. Very detailed to the point where the reader is "there" in the moment watching things happen. Fantastic!
Re: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2021 1:23 am
by NotSeen
run2win98 wrote: ↑2 years ago
That was another GREAt story! Man, I love your writing. Very detailed to the point where the reader is "there" in the moment watching things happen. Fantastic!
Many, many thanks!
