A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Mon May 25, 2020 1:19 am
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A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
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Re: The Game (Edited and Moved to this Forum) F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Mon May 25, 2020 1:23 am
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Re: The Game (Edited and Moved to this Forum) F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Mon May 25, 2020 1:50 am
Great idea, but could you have them talk in more conversational language? They talk very formally. Slang, contractions, that kind of thing would really help.
But you have a great concept here, please continue....
But you have a great concept here, please continue....
Re: The Game (Edited and Moved to this Forum) F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2020 4:31 pm
I dunno. The story and concept is a lot of fun and interesting but...
I just couldn't give any less craps about her backstory, her parents backstory or her grandma's backstory.
I understand you're wanting to build a story with Characters with depth and such but I just don't think it fits in at all with the story itself.
I just couldn't give any less craps about her backstory, her parents backstory or her grandma's backstory.
I understand you're wanting to build a story with Characters with depth and such but I just don't think it fits in at all with the story itself.
Re: The Game (Edited and Moved to this Forum) F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2020 1:35 am
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Re: The Game (Edited and Moved to this Forum) F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2020 12:53 pm
Re: The Game (Edited and Moved to this Forum) F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2020 1:47 pm
I agree wholeheartedly.Dr_Depravo wrote: ↑4 years ago I dunno. The story and concept is a lot of fun and interesting but...
I just couldn't give any less craps about her backstory, her parents backstory or her grandma's backstory.
I understand you're wanting to build a story with Characters with depth and such but I just don't think it fits in at all with the story itself.
Re: The Game (Edited and Moved to this Forum) F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Mon Jul 13, 2020 12:02 am
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Re: The Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2020 7:00 am
Soo good to read you again 
This story gets better and better!
This story gets better and better!Re: The Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2020 8:20 am
Amazing story. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to hear the next part.
Re: The Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2020 5:54 pm
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Re: The Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2020 8:40 pm
Great Update!
Re: The Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2020 9:10 am
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Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2020 5:25 am
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Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2020 9:09 am
Excellent writing and story. Love the twists and turns of the plot. Keep up the great job.
Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2020 2:56 am
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Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2020 7:21 am
Poor Amanda - in trouble again
Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2020 10:36 am
love it. great twist and character addition.
Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2020 3:02 am
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Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2020 4:58 am
Great part! I liked the conversation in the shower between Amanda and Shannon. I hope Erika will get some of her own medicine. Beautiful Outfit for Amanda!!
Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2020 10:33 am
Great addition. Love the story. Can't wait for the next part. Keep up the amazing work.
Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2020 2:17 am
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Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2020 8:17 am
Things are about to get even more intense
Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2020 10:41 am
awesome chapter. great twist. very creative.
Re: A Game F/FF, FF/FF, etc.
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2020 8:47 am
I enjoyed this chapter very much
The complete Story is great.