Help to Write

[Krashnamsa]

Hi !, How are everyone ?, Some time ago i wrote this Story called "Ransom"

http://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=8 ... 373#p39177

In the last time i dont have any time to write so i decide give me time to finish but I am in a creative jam, I am completely open to tomat suggestions and criticisms, Anyone who wants to help me feel free and send a message