EASY PREY: AN UNPLANNED SLEEPOVER PARTY (m+/MM) *COMPLETE*

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excellent ending even if I hope there will be a sequel with the vengeance of the big brother and his friend, or when they will again be dominated by the younger ones lol
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I hope Andrew and Matt get their revenge
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Stinks that Matt had to lose his job, but man my horny self is still jealous of his experience getting dogpiled by young jocks and stuffed with raunchy socks and taking a fart to the face!

I really loved this story!
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Again, thank you for time and effort you have put through on this story. It surely was an eventful sleepover party. Hope Matt and Andrew gets an opportunity to get back at their captors.
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Short but sweet, and all but begging for a reversal sequel. Unlike too many cooks, too many socks have never spoiled the broth.
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What a great story, absolutely loved reading it. These are the stories that keep me visiting the site over and over again!!
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@bondagefreak enjoyable tale, even though bags weren’t the highlight the image or two writing masses of strapped upon nylon impotently squirming and muffled scream is a powerful imagine that I’m quite jealous of
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Just discovered this one.....a little late.

Uffffaaaa. The combo of sock gag that Matt had to experience. Humiliating that the gag was formulated from his buddy and his father. Brilliant!

The description of Matt's surprise, then realization and then ultimate take down....Priceless. Great tale @bondagefreak :mrgreen:
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Thanks so much for sticking with me 'till the end, guys!

I know that the bittersweet ending is not what all of you were hoping for, but the mix of humoured, remorseful and empathic reviews is what I was aiming for. In any case, I'm glad Ethan's actions succeeded in making you feel bad for the two older guys, and I'm glad some of you feel this is ripe for a revenge plot 8-)

Really appreciate the extra time you all took to drop me a note after reading.

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FelixSH wrote: 1 week ago Ethan feels like a bit of a sociopath, I think? He just hurt the good relationship with his brother, and enjoyed the rush so much that, despite realizing what he had done, he feels the need to do it again. It is quite a chilling thought.

Again, if Andrew would enjoy the whole situation, it would be quite a nice fantasy. Being stuck for the whole night, and probably being afraid that it might happen again, would be something I'd sign up for. But considering that Andrew did not enjoy the situation, it feels pretty dark.

I hope I didn't get to real here. The story was, as always, well written. It might be my favourite of the stories you have produced so far.
Thanks, buddy!

I don't know about the sociopath part.
To me, Ethan just sounds like a normal, rowdy-jockish teenager.

As far as Andrew goes, we actually don't know if he secretly enjoyed it or not. Some of you would've no doubt enjoyed the predicament he was faced with, but in the heat of the moment, most of you have probably fought as well. It's not easy for an 18-year-old to be taken down and have his pride hurt by a bunch of younger jocks.

But then, that's the beauty of first-person narration. It provides readers with a narrow vision and fills their heads with unproven assumptions, theories and ideas.

In any case, I think it's safe to assume that Andrew and Ethan will be back to their regular brotherly tussles in no time.
This is definitely not the sorta thing that would permanently break two brothers apart. Andrew should be better prepared the next time his parents leave him in charge. Hell, he might even try to return the favour.

If I was him, I'd call up as many reinforcements as possible for the next sleepover party.
And if I was Ethan, I'd also call up as many reinforcements as possible in anticipation for my older brother's possible revenge move :lol:


Some serious potential for further teen vs teen conflicts in the future 8-)
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bondagefreak wrote: 1 week ago I don't know about the sociopath part.
To me, Ethan just sounds like a normal, rowdy-jockish teenager.

As far as Andrew goes, we actually don't know if he secretly enjoyed it or not. Some of you would've no doubt enjoyed the predicament he was faced with, but in the heat of the moment, most of you have probably fought as well. It's not easy for an 18-year-old to be taken down and have his pride hurt by a bunch of younger jocks.

But then, that's the beauty of first-person narration. It provides readers with a narrow vision and fills their heads with unproven assumptions, theories and ideas.
Yeah, I never was particularly ok with the way teenage guys tend to treat each other. Not to get too much into it (as it is, of course, a matter of taste - as long as you know how far you can go, do as you please), I never got along with people who mocked and pranked each other. So I probably read Ethans behaviour harsher than many other people here.

That's probably also the reason, why I read Andrews reachtion as being actually hurt. It's probably how I would feel in his situation, if I wouldn't actually enjoy being tied up and captured.

But I'm certainly looking forward to whatever happens with the two guys in the future.
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FelixSH wrote: 1 week ago That's probably also the reason, why I read Andrews reaction as being actually hurt.
His ego was most certainly bruised (as any senior highschooler's would), but I wouldn't go as far as saying he was hurt.
Pissed would be more like it 8-) Some nasty revenge plot is no doubt brewing in that nerdy gamer head of his.
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Very cool story and definitely worthy of a sequel
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FelixSH wrote: 1 week ago
bondagefreak wrote: 1 week ago I don't know about the sociopath part.
To me, Ethan just sounds like a normal, rowdy-jockish teenager.

As far as Andrew goes, we actually don't know if he secretly enjoyed it or not. Some of you would've no doubt enjoyed the predicament he was faced with, but in the heat of the moment, most of you have probably fought as well. It's not easy for an 18-year-old to be taken down and have his pride hurt by a bunch of younger jocks.

But then, that's the beauty of first-person narration. It provides readers with a narrow vision and fills their heads with unproven assumptions, theories and ideas.
Yeah, I never was particularly ok with the way teenage guys tend to treat each other. Not to get too much into it (as it is, of course, a matter of taste - as long as you know how far you can go, do as you please), I never got along with people who mocked and pranked each other. So I probably read Ethans behaviour harsher than many other people here.

That's probably also the reason, why I read Andrews reachtion as being actually hurt. It's probably how I would feel in his situation, if I wouldn't actually enjoy being tied up and captured.

But I'm certainly looking forward to whatever happens with the two guys in the future.
I felt the same as I was reading the story, especially since the brothers haven't talked at all in a couple weeks. So I'd say Andrew being pissed was an understatement...maybe if it was just him, but Ethan's antics cost Matt his job, so I think he would actually be more hurt and/or upset.

And while he might not be a sociopath, Ethan showed little-to-no regret for what happened to Matt and would want to do it all over again...so to me, he's not likable lol.

But again, if this story continues, I'll be curious to see what happens.
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gaggedfeety wrote: 1 week ago I felt the same as I was reading the story, especially since the brothers haven't talked at all in a couple weeks. So I'd say Andrew being pissed was an understatement...maybe if it was just him, but Ethan's antics cost Matt his job, so I think he would actually be more hurt and/or upset.

And while he might not be a sociopath, Ethan showed little-to-no regret for what happened to Matt and would want to do it all over again...so to me, he's not likable lol.

But again, if this story continues, I'll be curious to see what happens.

We always seem to be on the same wavelength @gaggedfeety.

Throughly enjoyed Andrew's tie-up scene, but felt so bad for Matt, knowing he needed to get to work and these little shits wouldn't let him get a word in.

I was definitely hoping for some consequences, but I don't feel like there really were any. Ethan cost a man his job, and his attitude is basically "oh well, I'll do it again." Send that little brat (I originally had a different 4 letter word) to military school! (or something, I don't know what to do with sociopathic teens)

Amazing work as always BF! Can't wait for a sequel. Hope by then Matt has a nice new job, and manages to get some revenge!
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Post by sniffingyoursocks »

Just finished the story right now, and like most of the other ones here, that wasn't really the ending I was hoping for of course.

But isn't some realistic twist what it sometimes really does for such stories?
I wouldn't go as far as others to call Ethan a Soziopath but it could be that he somehow "challenged" the relationship with his brother.
The big question is if tied up Andrew liked it or not - if he did, he probably won't be inviting more of his friends over for the next time ;-)
I wouldn't, for sure :-P

Thanks Master @bondagefreak for another great, short, lively story.
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huff amazing story, albeit well, I'm quite a vindictive person and seeing that Ethan had no real consequences for his actions makes me urgently need a sequel where Andrew gets his revenge and where Ethan pays for what he did.
bondagefreak wrote: 1 week ago If I was him, I'd call up as many reinforcements as possible for the next sleepover party.
And if I was Ethan, I'd also call up as many reinforcements as possible in anticipation for my older brother's possible revenge move
oh and this sounds like stuff for a great new story like a war between two sides, taking each other prisoner, which side will be the winner?
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I got behind on my reading lol.
This was great, loved it. Thank you 😊
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