Re: "Arrested" by my Ex-girlfriend (F/F) - Updated Part 19
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2021 2:28 pm
Exciting stuff, now what will happen, I think all of Carla's chances rest on who has rung the doorbell.
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We'll find out just now.
Thank you so much! I was going to give Carla a little hope, but I decided to wait just a bit more. Poor Carla =(Caesar73 wrote: ↑3 years ago First, [mention]Mineira1986[/mention] , good to have you back, I hope you are well again
I begin with the End of this Chapter: Finally the point of no return. Carla showed, or had to show her hand. But what now? On the plus side, Carla is restrained, but so, that she has a chance to attack Maria. Second: Whoever rang the bell? Maria has to take care of that first. That was most definetly not the way she wanted that. If Maria is lucky, it is one of her friends, who might help her to subdue Carla, of it is one of Carlas Friends things might get more complicated for Maria. I think the Party was always the weak point in her plan, the part which she could not plan as Carlas Captivity till now. Controlling Carla up to that point was much easier.
A lot of open questions, I try to keep my hopes, that Justice prevails! Looking forward to the 20th Chapter!
No surprise to anybody that I disagree on this account Maria has gone way too far, that has stopped being fun a long time ago. And If I see the development of the characters, I do not see Carla being the submissive pet of Maria. And I hope, that the whole bunch of Maria and her "friends" get a healthy dose of their own medicine. Though it looks like that will not happen anytime soon, and I see no way for Carla out of this mess - which I regret
It seems Team Carla is pretty short of members, hehe. But she will get her revenge. Or not. We shall see.Caesar73 wrote: ↑3 years ago [mention]Mineira1986[/mention] You make it really really hard for Carla. I suspected that it would be not that easy for her - but now? Honestly? I have not much hope that Carlas resilience will be rewarded. Obviously Maria and her guests will humilate her some more. And how shall Carla have any Chance now? What a pity .... but beautifully written [mention]Mineira1986[/mention] And I have to say: I really despise Maria at this point.
Let's hope so. Although I am pretty sure Maria has thought about it.
Oh, thank you so much for your kind words!! I feel so proud!CyanG1 wrote: ↑3 years ago Ok, I created an account just to say this. This is hands down the best story on the site, I've been following it for about two months now. Please keep going and your work is really appreciated. Much love.
I'm actually rooting for Maria in this. She deserves her victory over Carla. Can't wait to see what Maria has in store for her captive when the party comes. Carla will learn her place in the end and accept her position
Thank you for following this story! =)jackradical wrote: ↑3 years ago I'm liking the updates and glad this story hasn't been abandoned, it's just a thrill ride everytime
Thanks!
Hehe, that's why it's in the fictional secion, hehe.Beaumains wrote: ↑3 years ago Sorry, I missed a few chapters and since then Maria's wickedness and perversion multiplied a few times. The party seems doomed for Carla, and I assume theother guests will start gathering blackmail shortly. The only silver lining for Carla is that this story is in the fictional stories for everyone section.
I don't know, if there's at least two friends of Carla at the door, plus Carla is being untied, that would make the situation pretty even. Not to mention Carla and her friends are the more sporty types. She will take any shot she can at this point, I think. It will be fun to see what happens. I have a feeling that Maria's hidden phone will play a role in determining the winner. In any case, may the best captor win (that's Maria btw)Caesar73 wrote: ↑3 years ago I think, Carla had her fair share of torture - and if Carla wants to press criminal Charges she has every right to do it. And Maria has totally lost it. But I see no way how Carla will be able to turn the tables - not at the moment. Maria must have taken some precautions to prevent Carla from any mischiev. As much as I would like to see Carla get the upper hand, but it seems like an uphill battle now. But hope dies last
That she does I agree with [mention]CyanG1[/mention], that the Mobilephone is the Key - and you are right [mention]CyanG1[/mention] the Numbers are nearly even. At least we have now a situation which Maria cannot totally control.
Thanks!CyanG1 wrote: ↑3 years ago Another great entry to the series. So interesting to read. Can't wait for the next part.
Looks like the final showdown is approaching. Will Carla make another attempt to flip the tables now that her friends are here? Maria seems pretty careless to untie Carla when her friends are arriving, but we know Maria better than that, surely she must be prepared. Or did she finally drop her guard? Is it really even Carla's friends at the door or did Rosa lie to give her false hope? So many possibilities. Well I can say one thing, I hope Carla doesn't behave only for things to get really bad after the party! Muhahaha! Go Maria!
Technically, she could press charges, but where is the fun in that? (At least in the story) Take in account that she doesn't want her friends and people at college to find out that a chubby, shorter girl got to beat her and kept her captive for a couple of days. So, if charges are out of the question, now it's all about what Carla can accomplish during and after the partyCaesar73 wrote: ↑3 years ago I think, Carla had her fair share of torture - and if Carla wants to press criminal Charges she has every right to do it. And Maria has totally lost it. But I see no way how Carla will be able to turn the tables - not at the moment. Maria must have taken some precautions to prevent Carla from any mischiev. As much as I would like to see Carla get the upper hand, but it seems like an uphill battle now. But hope dies last
Thanks! We shall see. The party is coming!
Indeed, the change of pace is nice and imho it does not hurt, that no tie ups do happen in this chapter, agreeing with [mention]Beaumains[/mention] on this The numbers are indeed a problem. Difficult to say at this point, who will win. I think it is very clear, that I would like to see Maria and her two helpers in crime should pay the price for their transgressions But everything is possible .... still.CyanG1 wrote: ↑3 years ago This was a nice change of pace, and we get to see some more interaction between the characters outside of tie up games. A little breath of fresh air for Carla, and she managed to secure an ally. She's still outnumbered, but she has to strike before the party ends and the guests leave, otherwise she'll end up tied up again (hopefully ) Also I wonder where Andrea stands in all this? Is she gonna side with her girlfriend? Does she know about Carla's predicament, and why did she ask for her? So thrilling!