Page 2 of 2
Re: A day of rest! (f/m)
Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2021 10:36 am
by Killua
Your story reads way better with all those paragraphs you made now. The ending seems to be a bit more realistic now. After such a long time tied to the tree, he surely walks a bit wobbly and needs a little help to get inside. You described it nicely. Good job!
Re: A day of rest! (f/m)
Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2021 10:35 pm
by Gemtie
Thank you for your kind comments. Bearing in mind I wear glasses for reading/writing/other close up work, I am slightly embarrassed I didn't pick up on the layout issue before.
Gemtie (Gemscot)
Re: A day of rest! (f/m)
Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2022 10:05 pm
by tiedinbluetights
I really enjoyed reading the original posting and much loved re-reading the reformated version. Thank you for writing these wonderful stories!
Re: A day of rest! (f/m)
Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2022 10:49 pm
by Gemtie
Thank you for your kind comments.
There was a couple of occasions around this age when I could have actually made this story a real story, and I did wonder what it would be like to do it. I didn't actually do it and now with a hopefully more mature head on my shoulders I wouldn't want to do it!
Gemma
![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif)
Re: A day of rest! (f/m)
Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2022 4:51 pm
by mig137
I would never let a woman tie me up.
![Twisted Evil :twisted:](./images/smilies/icon_twisted.gif)