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Re: Caught (f/ff)
Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2018 11:56 pm
by Deleted User 1005
8 chapters is a good size story. Each chapter was well written and descriptive. You never dragged on, each chapter told a part of the story perfectly. You have gift when it comes to writting at only 15.
Re: Caught (f/ff)
Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 2:25 pm
by Tieup1
Totally agree with the post above. It was a good fun story, good idea though, to end it there.
You can always write another story, with the same characters.
Well done, and thanks for letting us take part.
Re: Caught (f/ff)
Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 5:11 pm
by radarlove67
I liked the interaction, and I agree it was the perfect length.