Let's go extreme (m/M): *COMPLETE*
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Tuckerton7
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Thank you for your comments 
I am really happy that someone likes my extreme tie-up story!
Here's the final part:
11.
How many days did Jeremy keep me here? I couldn't remember. I wasn't feeling well. Actually, I was feeling really bad and very weak. There were dozens of painful abrasions under my stained clothes, as well as bruises from Jeremy's belt strikes and kicks. I haven't gotten a good night's sleep since he locked me down here. Also I didn't eat anything but awful and spitted sandwiches. I was hoping the chocolate would make me stronger, but it didn't. In fact I felt even worse with each passing hour.
In the middle of the night, I woke up shaking with cold on my dirty sleeping mat. I felt ill and I realized I must have a fever. I wasn't panicking. Instead, I tried hard to survive until Jeremy returned. I didn't know what he would do when he saw me in such a bad shape, but I had no options anyway. There was no chance of rescue from someone else.
12.
- "Oh shit!" - Jeremy's eyes widened at the sight of me. Obviously I must have looked as bad as I felt.
- "I'm taking you out of here. You have a fever!" - he said and instantly covered me with his sweatshirt.
Then he pulled out his cellphone and went outside. I've only heard parts of the conversation. Jeremy was apparently explaining to someone how to get at this place.
- "...and I want you to be here in half an hour at the latest! Understand?"- he ended the talk in a such strict and firm tone that I began to wonder who he was actually talking to.
Then something completely unexpected happened: Jeremy took my chains off
He led me outside and sat me down in the sunshine. Then he sat down right behind me and hugged me, ignoring the stench that must have come out of me after all those days without a bath.
- "I'll try to warm you up a little" - he explained as I looked at him suprised.
- "And yes, you stink." - he added and burst out laughing.
While waiting for the rescue to arrive, Jeremy fed me another chocolate bar and gave me several cups of hot tea, which he had brought in a thermos flask, as if he expected to find me ill.
- "Jeremy?"
- "What?"
- "I swear I'll do whatever you tell me to do."
- "Yeah, I know."
- "No. I mean seriously. I will do whatever you tell me, even when you release me."
- "Shut up. You have a fever and you don't know what you're talking about. Besides, I released you already. "
I heard a car stopping somewhere nearby. Jeremy jumped up and ran in that direction.
- "Oh shit!" - said Jeremy's friend as soon as he noticed me lying against the tree.
He was slim, very tall, with long blonde hair, and he looked about my age.
- "Are you totally crazy?" - He shouted at Jeremy - "What have you done to him?"
- "Watch your words!" - Jeremy snapped - "He has a bit of a cold. Yesterday he was still quite well."
Then I found myself in a car. The stranger guy was driving while Jeremy and I were sitting in the backseat. He let me rest my head on his lap.
- "Who is he?" I asked softly pointing at the driver.
I wasn't chained anymore, but I instinctively raised both my arms at the same time.
- "You don't guess? He is the bug-eating guy" - Jeremy whispered in my ear.
This time it was me who widened the eyes in shock.
They gave me some antipyretic medication, and by the time we got to our destination I felt a little better. I've been escorted to my apartment and Jeremy waited for me to take a bath, just in case. We also put my dirty clothes to the washing machine. We've done a couple of hours before my mom returned from work. After the antipyretic drugs and a warm bath I felt well enough that I didn't look like I was going to die anymore, so my mother didn't suspect anything unusual. She prepared a delicious broth and the next day I only had a runny nose.
13.
Well, it was definitely an extreme experience and my crazy tie-up game ended quite abruptly and unexpectedly. Fortunately no one was actually hurt. Not too much, anyway. After all of this, I was afraid of Jeremy as if he were the devil himself. I never dared ask him to tie me up again. Although he made allusions in the backyard and was ostentatiously showing me his belt.
Never seen the "bug-eating guy" either. I wondered if he was really that poor teenager who had apparently become Jeremy's slave. Or perhaps Jeremy had mocked me again and the guy in the car was his cousin.
It doesn't mean that I gave up tie-up games at all! But I've never met such a ruthless sadist like this 14-year-old kid after that.
THE END
I am really happy that someone likes my extreme tie-up story!
Here's the final part:
11.
How many days did Jeremy keep me here? I couldn't remember. I wasn't feeling well. Actually, I was feeling really bad and very weak. There were dozens of painful abrasions under my stained clothes, as well as bruises from Jeremy's belt strikes and kicks. I haven't gotten a good night's sleep since he locked me down here. Also I didn't eat anything but awful and spitted sandwiches. I was hoping the chocolate would make me stronger, but it didn't. In fact I felt even worse with each passing hour.
In the middle of the night, I woke up shaking with cold on my dirty sleeping mat. I felt ill and I realized I must have a fever. I wasn't panicking. Instead, I tried hard to survive until Jeremy returned. I didn't know what he would do when he saw me in such a bad shape, but I had no options anyway. There was no chance of rescue from someone else.
12.
- "Oh shit!" - Jeremy's eyes widened at the sight of me. Obviously I must have looked as bad as I felt.
- "I'm taking you out of here. You have a fever!" - he said and instantly covered me with his sweatshirt.
Then he pulled out his cellphone and went outside. I've only heard parts of the conversation. Jeremy was apparently explaining to someone how to get at this place.
- "...and I want you to be here in half an hour at the latest! Understand?"- he ended the talk in a such strict and firm tone that I began to wonder who he was actually talking to.
Then something completely unexpected happened: Jeremy took my chains off
He led me outside and sat me down in the sunshine. Then he sat down right behind me and hugged me, ignoring the stench that must have come out of me after all those days without a bath.
- "I'll try to warm you up a little" - he explained as I looked at him suprised.
- "And yes, you stink." - he added and burst out laughing.
While waiting for the rescue to arrive, Jeremy fed me another chocolate bar and gave me several cups of hot tea, which he had brought in a thermos flask, as if he expected to find me ill.
- "Jeremy?"
- "What?"
- "I swear I'll do whatever you tell me to do."
- "Yeah, I know."
- "No. I mean seriously. I will do whatever you tell me, even when you release me."
- "Shut up. You have a fever and you don't know what you're talking about. Besides, I released you already. "
I heard a car stopping somewhere nearby. Jeremy jumped up and ran in that direction.
- "Oh shit!" - said Jeremy's friend as soon as he noticed me lying against the tree.
He was slim, very tall, with long blonde hair, and he looked about my age.
- "Are you totally crazy?" - He shouted at Jeremy - "What have you done to him?"
- "Watch your words!" - Jeremy snapped - "He has a bit of a cold. Yesterday he was still quite well."
Then I found myself in a car. The stranger guy was driving while Jeremy and I were sitting in the backseat. He let me rest my head on his lap.
- "Who is he?" I asked softly pointing at the driver.
I wasn't chained anymore, but I instinctively raised both my arms at the same time.
- "You don't guess? He is the bug-eating guy" - Jeremy whispered in my ear.
This time it was me who widened the eyes in shock.
They gave me some antipyretic medication, and by the time we got to our destination I felt a little better. I've been escorted to my apartment and Jeremy waited for me to take a bath, just in case. We also put my dirty clothes to the washing machine. We've done a couple of hours before my mom returned from work. After the antipyretic drugs and a warm bath I felt well enough that I didn't look like I was going to die anymore, so my mother didn't suspect anything unusual. She prepared a delicious broth and the next day I only had a runny nose.
13.
Well, it was definitely an extreme experience and my crazy tie-up game ended quite abruptly and unexpectedly. Fortunately no one was actually hurt. Not too much, anyway. After all of this, I was afraid of Jeremy as if he were the devil himself. I never dared ask him to tie me up again. Although he made allusions in the backyard and was ostentatiously showing me his belt.
Never seen the "bug-eating guy" either. I wondered if he was really that poor teenager who had apparently become Jeremy's slave. Or perhaps Jeremy had mocked me again and the guy in the car was his cousin.
It doesn't mean that I gave up tie-up games at all! But I've never met such a ruthless sadist like this 14-year-old kid after that.
THE END
awesome really excellent this end
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spandexman
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So nasty, but erotic and very realistic. Thanks. 