A stormy night (M / mm)

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A stormy night (M / mm)

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Javi, did you see what time is it? Where’re you?

Yeap mom… I’m in Pablo’s home but the rain hasn’t stop yet.

You must be arrived at home since hour and a half and you can see it… you’re a smart kid, eh!

Yeap, ma, but like I sayed you, the rain hasn’t stop yet… and rain very hard.

But nothing Javi, you should already be in home!

But mama… what did you want I did? It’s being raining all the day. The time I got arrived at home all wet you be mad at me because I did’t stay inside during the rain, because I walk to home and ended all wet, remember… who understand you, mommy?

Don’t begin it Javi? But what are you waiting? I want you here!

Mama… i-t’s r-a-i-n-i-g… lot of raining, very hard raining. Also, at entrance where Pablo lives when rains so hard it always floods…and it stay like this for long hours… and still raining.

Well… then I say your father go for you?

Mom! Understand me! Its raining… It hasn’t stopped raining since 6pm and when the rain came down and I wanna to go home, the entrance at Pablo’s neighborhood was flooded. Why are you going to send my dad? He will not go on Pablo’s neighborhood and it’s still raining very hard.

So you call me to send your dad to go for you…

Mom! The rain will not going down… still raining and the rain hasn’t stop. You better let me spent the night here in Pablo’s house and I arrive at home tomorrow at morning.

Don’t begin Javi!

But mommy, … what did you want I do? It’s okay… I left Pablo’s home and arrive wet at home. That’s not matter, I go inside and cross the dirty water at neighborhood entrance and were Pablo lives.

No! No! No!... Don’t begin Javi…

But then, what I do, mommy?

It’s okay… But are you don’t say me what your friend is home alone?

Yeap mom… his parents went on a trip because their wedding anniversary… but his older brother is here.

I don´t want you sleep late!

No mam… that’s not gonna happen… Pablo´s brother needs wake up earlier because he gonna work and enter at 10.

And what time are you going to return at home?

Idk mommy… but Pablo’s bro sayed me he ride me near to home… so I think I arrive around at 11 by to late.

Ugh kid! And why don’t you answer the phone?

Because Pablo and me were playin in his living room but I left my phone charging in his room and I didn’t hear it.

How much times I tell you what you must keep the phone near to you and you can listen if I or your father call you?

Just like you who always answered my calls, mommy?

(Uncomfortable silence) Oh kid… but we will talk tomorrow, eh!

Yeap mom… see you tomorrow.

Javi only can hear the typical sound what his phone made when a call were hung up.

How intense is your mom!

Yeap… she always is like this…

Are you ready?


Javi moves his head saying yes. Javi can’t see whats happen around and in front of him, he only hear the sound what ducktape made when was ripped from the roll.

In a matter of seconds Javi felt the tape sealing his lips and round his neck and mouth some times. Maybe 5 times or maybe more times.

Javi had already being tied up just over 3 hours. And now he was going to spent the whole night like this. And his friend Pablo was also sharing the same fate.

A few hours earlier Pablo had challenge Javi to an escape challenge. Javi was beginning to be tied with ducktape by his friend when Alvaro, the 23 YO Pablo’s brother arrived at home and discovered the kids.

Alvaro ask to the kids what where they doing and later proposed to change the challenge. So Alvaro left the home for few minutes and when he returned he had several meters of rope and 2 more rolls of ducktape with him.

Alvaro tied the kids wrists and ankles, blind his eyes and gag them with ducktape and then sayed them they have a half hour to free by them self. The 13 years old kids began to protest and sayed it was shot time. So in the end they reached an agreement of 2 hour to finish the challenge. If anyone of both kids don’t escape, they gonna spent the whole night tied up and more restrained like a punishment.

Alvaro done it with lot of maliciously, plan a shot time for made the challenge at the beginning and later negotiate and accept more time. At in the end, he know the kids never going to be able to free by them self in 30 minutes or 12 hours. Alvaro was clever and very skilled at tying and hiding knots.

Thus the kids spent the 2 hours without being able to lossen a single knot. Alvaro celebrate and made fun of his lill bro and his friend. Javi expected Alvaro release him when he say he need to return to home, maybe this would be enough to be free. But Pablo start to demand he can’t left him alone.

Pablo and Javi were talking about to ask to her mother for left him spent time in his friend home and at the same time the kids began to hear the rain, a very hard rain. And the rain gave him the pretext for, at least, not getting in his home on time.

And whit the hard rain, who made the entrance of his friend neighborhood get flooded, was the perfect excuse for Javi to stay in his friend home all the night.

Alvaro take more rope to tied his lill bro and his friend more strict. Tied his arms to his torso and tied his legs from over and lower from the knees kids.

Pablo and Javi were ungagged for take the dinner and when Alvaro was gag his lil bro again he hear a strange noise. The 3 boys keep at silence until Javi say “mi phone”.

Alvaro went to his lil bro room and found the phone of his lil bro friend charging and watch an entrance call, 5 more lost calls and in the screen say “Mommy”.

Alvaro took the phone to the living room where the 2 kids were still staying and when the phone rang again he answer the phone and activate the speaker…

Alvaro gag Javi again. The kid know he his chance of free by himself were none. Javi felt Alvaro mede him standup and then he ended being carried over his older bro friend shoulder.

Javi felt something strange in his stomach, like when he was ride in La Medusa in Six Flags. A few moments later he ended lying over Pablo’s bed, and his friend at his side.

You know brats, if you can release by yourself I pay 500 pesos each one. Good luck and sleep tight.

The kids hear the sound of Pablo’s room switch were turning off. The 2 kids weren’t know they were head to head lying on the bed. But they try to speak with the other but they only can hear the mphhings from their gagged mouths.

At some time at the night they understood they must turn around to stay back to back ato try to help each other to release his bindings. And although they tried everything for several minutes, they couldn’t loosen a single knot.

So several minutes passed and the kids began to got to tired and at the end but ended up sleep.
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excellent story just a pity it's already over lol
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The slave wrote: 2 years ago excellent story just a pity it's already over lol
thanx you!!! hope you were enjoy it...

and I hope you have also had fun to know a little how they are mexican mothers... 😅😅😅😅
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Great story :) I really liked it!
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squirrel wrote: 2 years ago Great story :) I really liked it!

thanx man!!!
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