Best Robbery Ever! M/F

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Nice work! Hope for a future continuation!
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This was a very interesting and cute story. Maya comes across as a coy girl, and Jack is a bit too trusting on account of the "hots" that afflict him. It's always a good story, regardless of length, when it doesn't necessitate a sequel but could easily get one.
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Love this story, especially as she is wearing boots. I hope we get more adventures of Maya.
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Really enjoyable story, I think Maya and Jack complemented each other well. I especially liked the reveal that the insurance fraud plan was mostly just a ruse on Maya's part, it seemed like you were hinting as much early on without giving it away, so the story progressed nicely. Great work!
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Sergioo wrote: 9 months ago Nice work! Hope for a future continuation!
Thank you for the kind words! I hope to write more!
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AlexUSA3 wrote: 9 months ago This was a very interesting and cute story. Maya comes across as a coy girl, and Jack is a bit too trusting on account of the "hots" that afflict him. It's always a good story, regardless of length, when it doesn't necessitate a sequel but could easily get one.
I appreciate the insight! Glad you enjoyed!
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Rtj65 wrote: 9 months ago Really enjoyable story, I think Maya and Jack complemented each other well. I especially liked the reveal that the insurance fraud plan was mostly just a ruse on Maya's part, it seemed like you were hinting as much early on without giving it away, so the story progressed nicely. Great work!
So glad you enjoyed it! The encouragement means a ton!
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Dpsiic wrote: 9 months ago Love this story, especially as she is wearing boots. I hope we get more adventures of Maya.
The boots were certainly a great part of the attire :D
I'm glad to see people want more, I'll do my best!
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I would love another story with Maya as a willing captive and the boots and skirt really added a great visual appeal to the whole thing.
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GagFan96 wrote: 9 months ago I would love another story with Maya as a willing captive and the boots and skirt really added a great visual appeal to the whole thing.
I'm glad to hear you liked it! She is certainly a fashionable damsel :D
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Well written! Very enjoyable story!
Hope to see more from you soon!
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CaptorDM wrote: 9 months ago Well written! Very enjoyable story!
Hope to see more from you soon!
Thank you! I hope so too haha.
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Very nice story!
Nothing like good ol' insurance fraud to earn some quick money!
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potato wrote: 9 months ago Very nice story!
Nothing like good ol' insurance fraud to earn some quick money!
Haha thanks!
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