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Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 9:31 am
by SquidIncMaster
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Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 2:03 pm
by Sergioo
Nice work! Hope for a future continuation!

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 2:09 pm
by AlexUSA3
This was a very interesting and cute story. Maya comes across as a coy girl, and Jack is a bit too trusting on account of the "hots" that afflict him. It's always a good story, regardless of length, when it doesn't necessitate a sequel but could easily get one.

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 6:03 pm
by Dpsiic
Love this story, especially as she is wearing boots. I hope we get more adventures of Maya.

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 8:58 pm
by Rtj65
Really enjoyable story, I think Maya and Jack complemented each other well. I especially liked the reveal that the insurance fraud plan was mostly just a ruse on Maya's part, it seemed like you were hinting as much early on without giving it away, so the story progressed nicely. Great work!

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 10:09 pm
by SquidIncMaster
Sergioo wrote: 10 months ago Nice work! Hope for a future continuation!
Thank you for the kind words! I hope to write more!

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 10:10 pm
by SquidIncMaster
AlexUSA3 wrote: 10 months ago This was a very interesting and cute story. Maya comes across as a coy girl, and Jack is a bit too trusting on account of the "hots" that afflict him. It's always a good story, regardless of length, when it doesn't necessitate a sequel but could easily get one.
I appreciate the insight! Glad you enjoyed!

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 10:11 pm
by SquidIncMaster
Rtj65 wrote: 10 months ago Really enjoyable story, I think Maya and Jack complemented each other well. I especially liked the reveal that the insurance fraud plan was mostly just a ruse on Maya's part, it seemed like you were hinting as much early on without giving it away, so the story progressed nicely. Great work!
So glad you enjoyed it! The encouragement means a ton!

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2023 10:12 pm
by SquidIncMaster
Dpsiic wrote: 10 months ago Love this story, especially as she is wearing boots. I hope we get more adventures of Maya.
The boots were certainly a great part of the attire :D
I'm glad to see people want more, I'll do my best!

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2023 2:52 pm
by GagFan96
I would love another story with Maya as a willing captive and the boots and skirt really added a great visual appeal to the whole thing.

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2023 5:07 pm
by SquidIncMaster
GagFan96 wrote: 10 months ago I would love another story with Maya as a willing captive and the boots and skirt really added a great visual appeal to the whole thing.
I'm glad to hear you liked it! She is certainly a fashionable damsel :D

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2023 5:11 am
by CaptorDM
Well written! Very enjoyable story!
Hope to see more from you soon!

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2023 5:12 am
by SquidIncMaster
CaptorDM wrote: 10 months ago Well written! Very enjoyable story!
Hope to see more from you soon!
Thank you! I hope so too haha.

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2023 6:56 am
by potato
Very nice story!
Nothing like good ol' insurance fraud to earn some quick money!

Re: Best Robbery Ever! M/F

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2023 9:09 pm
by SquidIncMaster
potato wrote: 10 months ago Very nice story!
Nothing like good ol' insurance fraud to earn some quick money!
Haha thanks!