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Keep up the great work, [mention]mpphsox[/mention]. Can't wait to read part 2!
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[mention]mpphsox[/mention] Superbly written, mate!
This was an excellent first chapter, one that has us on the edge of our seats waiting to find out what happens next.
The details about the bathroom lights being bright and hard to adjust to, given the darkness in the rest of the house, doesn't go by unnoticed and definitely adds some realism to the story.
Well done!

There's something in here for everyone.
The handgag scene should be right up [mention]handovermouth[/mention]'s alley, and the tickling scene should prove very enjoyable for my friend [mention]Tickler1079[/mention].

I look forward to finding what happens to Mikey now.
Don't keep us waiting too long, and remember to add this to the Story Catalogue section when you have the chance.
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[mention]mpphsox[/mention] this is a really good story. Thanks for writing and sharing your writing talents with us. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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...starts silent chant, builds in intensity...

"mikey" "Mikey!" "MIKEY!!!" "MIIIIIIIKKKKKKKEEEEEEEYYYYYYY!"

Kudos! Nicely evocative, all.

Now let's go snatch that kid from the basement!

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Good intro! Quite intriguing! Let's see Mickey getitng kidnapped too! :mrgreen:
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Excellent start. More please.
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I really like this start too.
The cruelty of the kidnapper, the two hot athletic boys...
Beautifully written, too.

Keep up the great work, yeah!
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A big US home where you can get kidnapped without waking everyone, puts me back into my teenage daydreams ( family of five in 90 m²/970 square feet, Old World standards... )
The nightly atmosphere is well described, with that late, eerie intrusion...
Hope you have nice ideas in store after this great start.
And forgot another good point: sockgag with fresh out the drawer, clean, spotless socks...
don't run ! I'm friendly ...
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Great first chapter!!! :)

[mention]bondagefreak[/mention] You were right, handgag and duct tape... right up my alley!
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LK3869 wrote: 5 years ago A big US home where you can get kidnapped without waking everyone, puts me back into my teenage daydreams ( family of five in 90 m²/970 square feet, Old World standards... )
The nightly atmosphere is well described, with that late, eerie intrusion...
Hope you have nice ideas in store after this great start.
And forgot another good point: sockgag with fresh out the drawer, clean, spotless socks...
Exactly what I’m going for :) means a lot coming from a great artist as yourself. I’ve followed you on here and on DeviantArt awhile. Hope to continue the story soon.
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Great story!
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Okay! A hooded kidnapper who knows how to truss up a trio of lads. What dastardly schemes does he have in mind for our hapless heroes?
Thank you for returning with an excellent chapter.
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Great! Keep going!
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Love this story it’s exciting
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Just for shits and grins, I've always wondered why kidnappers, crooks, etc., go for socks, instead of that sweaty red bandana on top of the dresser, that was used as a headband earlier in the day. :D

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[mention]mpphsox[/mention] Great writing, bud!
I had to go back to the first chapter in order to refresh my memory a bit, but I'll definitely be keeping tabs on this story from now on.

Very much enjoying these latest chapters.
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drawscore wrote: 4 years ago Just for shits and grins, I've always wondered why kidnappers, crooks, etc., go for socks, instead of that sweaty red bandana on top of the dresser, that was used as a headband earlier in the day. :D

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Sock gags- effective and dehumanizing!!
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Welcome back.
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Poor Kevin and his “baby blue”. Just wondering what color the other guys are wearing? And if they are all wearing briefs?
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[mention]Socalralphboy21[/mention] Welcome onboard Ralph-boi!
Always thrilled to see a new guy join the club.
Hope you decide to stick with us and become a regular commentator on here.
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Updates to this story are always appreciated. You're doing great - well written and edited. More please.
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First time I've noticed this story and love it! Keep up the great work
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