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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2019 1:21 am
by mpphsox
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Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2019 2:35 am
by GMen
Keep up the great work, [mention]mpphsox[/mention]. Can't wait to read part 2!

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2019 5:38 am
by bondagefreak
[mention]mpphsox[/mention] Superbly written, mate!
This was an excellent first chapter, one that has us on the edge of our seats waiting to find out what happens next.
The details about the bathroom lights being bright and hard to adjust to, given the darkness in the rest of the house, doesn't go by unnoticed and definitely adds some realism to the story.
Well done!

There's something in here for everyone.
The handgag scene should be right up [mention]handovermouth[/mention]'s alley, and the tickling scene should prove very enjoyable for my friend [mention]Tickler1079[/mention].

I look forward to finding what happens to Mikey now.
Don't keep us waiting too long, and remember to add this to the Story Catalogue section when you have the chance.
Cheers!

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2019 11:56 am
by fratboydanny
[mention]mpphsox[/mention] this is a really good story. Thanks for writing and sharing your writing talents with us. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2019 4:05 pm
by Deleted User 3263
...starts silent chant, builds in intensity...

"mikey" "Mikey!" "MIKEY!!!" "MIIIIIIIKKKKKKKEEEEEEEYYYYYYY!"

Kudos! Nicely evocative, all.

Now let's go snatch that kid from the basement!

:twisted:

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2019 8:42 pm
by cj2125
Good intro! Quite intriguing! Let's see Mickey getitng kidnapped too! :mrgreen:

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2019 11:42 pm
by MaxRoper
Excellent start. More please.

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2019 9:42 am
by sniffingyoursocks
I really like this start too.
The cruelty of the kidnapper, the two hot athletic boys...
Beautifully written, too.

Keep up the great work, yeah!

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2019 9:15 pm
by LK3869
A big US home where you can get kidnapped without waking everyone, puts me back into my teenage daydreams ( family of five in 90 m²/970 square feet, Old World standards... )
The nightly atmosphere is well described, with that late, eerie intrusion...
Hope you have nice ideas in store after this great start.
And forgot another good point: sockgag with fresh out the drawer, clean, spotless socks...

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2019 1:14 am
by handovermouth
Great first chapter!!! :)

[mention]bondagefreak[/mention] You were right, handgag and duct tape... right up my alley!

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2019 5:33 pm
by mpphsox
LK3869 wrote: 5 years ago A big US home where you can get kidnapped without waking everyone, puts me back into my teenage daydreams ( family of five in 90 m²/970 square feet, Old World standards... )
The nightly atmosphere is well described, with that late, eerie intrusion...
Hope you have nice ideas in store after this great start.
And forgot another good point: sockgag with fresh out the drawer, clean, spotless socks...
Exactly what I’m going for :) means a lot coming from a great artist as yourself. I’ve followed you on here and on DeviantArt awhile. Hope to continue the story soon.

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mm

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2019 8:30 pm
by Carnath
Great story!

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 12:35 am
by mpphsox
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Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 1:07 am
by MaxRoper
Okay! A hooded kidnapper who knows how to truss up a trio of lads. What dastardly schemes does he have in mind for our hapless heroes?
Thank you for returning with an excellent chapter.

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 3:04 am
by mpphsox
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Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 4:39 am
by orfeusz
Great! Keep going!

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 7:59 am
by Sockbound1234
Love this story it’s exciting

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 4:43 pm
by drawscore
Just for shits and grins, I've always wondered why kidnappers, crooks, etc., go for socks, instead of that sweaty red bandana on top of the dresser, that was used as a headband earlier in the day. :D

Drawscore

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 4:56 pm
by bondagefreak
[mention]mpphsox[/mention] Great writing, bud!
I had to go back to the first chapter in order to refresh my memory a bit, but I'll definitely be keeping tabs on this story from now on.

Very much enjoying these latest chapters.

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 6:32 pm
by mpphsox
drawscore wrote: 5 years ago Just for shits and grins, I've always wondered why kidnappers, crooks, etc., go for socks, instead of that sweaty red bandana on top of the dresser, that was used as a headband earlier in the day. :D

Drawscore
Sock gags- effective and dehumanizing!!

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Tue May 07, 2019 7:54 pm
by Xtc
Welcome back.

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Wed May 08, 2019 9:20 pm
by Socalralphboy21
Poor Kevin and his “baby blue”. Just wondering what color the other guys are wearing? And if they are all wearing briefs?

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Thu May 09, 2019 2:51 am
by bondagefreak
[mention]Socalralphboy21[/mention] Welcome onboard Ralph-boi!
Always thrilled to see a new guy join the club.
Hope you decide to stick with us and become a regular commentator on here.
Cheers!

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Thu May 09, 2019 6:40 pm
by MaxRoper
Updates to this story are always appreciated. You're doing great - well written and edited. More please.

Re: Sleepover 'napped M/mmm

Posted: Thu May 09, 2019 9:44 pm
by harveygasson
First time I've noticed this story and love it! Keep up the great work