Really great chapter [mention]bondagefreak[/mention] I really love how you drag the story out. Here I was expecting to find josh mercilessly in the jocks hands being tortured, only for the chapter to have a calm reflective tone. Steven thinking about his captors and reminiscing about his experiences and only slightly introducing Josh’s demise.
I shouldn’t be surprised though this isn’t new to the story you have a knack for describing the action without actually having to describe it. The details you give set it up but the emotion behind it makes the imagination tell the story.
I’m happy you belayed my fears for Josh with the playfulness of the scene, especially when you talk of Shawn’s coldness towards Steven I once again tensed you with what would unfold. I was originally worried as other than Josh and a small extent Mike none of the beefy jocks had showN any lighter fun side.
I foolishly assumed it would be like reading about Steven and Brad back when camping. Reading about the fear and harshness. Josh has been hanging with these guys for ages and definitely loves the attention I’m sure whatever the jocks have planned Steven will get to enjoy equally.
I’m still the only signature on that petition to free Josh so I guess I will have to go with the crowd. Just don’t hurt him
Great work can’t wait for the next chapter