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[Deleted User 1005]

8 chapters is a good size story. Each chapter was well written and descriptive. You never dragged on, each chapter told a part of the story perfectly. You have gift when it comes to writting at only 15.

[Tieup1]

Totally agree with the post above. It was a good fun story, good idea though, to end it there.

You can always write another story, with the same characters.


Well done, and thanks for letting us take part.

[radarlove67]

I liked the interaction, and I agree it was the perfect length.