Personal opinion: don't force yourself to write a continuation if you think that's where the story should end.
You can then put your efforts into another story to which you might be better committed.
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- 3 hours ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: A Little Fatherly Help M/m
- Replies: 5
- Views: 178
- 1 day ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
At the risk of being serious for a minute. the current prison system is crap. Too much recidivism that indicates its lack of effectiveness. And as for the number of remand prisoners . . . .
- 1 day ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Ah, but Red86 , you must rememeber that, if he had not been guilty, Patrick had the opportunity to contest the sentence at the time of his arrest. Not to be able to do so would be uncivilised, now wouldn't it? The discovery of Patrick's stash, however would have been almost impossible to contest. Yo...
- 2 days ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (13) Enteract [/b] Unlike Bobby, Curtis was obviously not going to be released immediately. The message said that it was, "Due to further reliable evidence having been received". That was all the Corporals needed to know. Since the introduction of the Progr...
- 2 days ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Thanks for checking in, @Red86 . That, indeed, should be the attitude but I sometimes fear that our Lords and Masters would happily implement such harsh laws for real.
- 4 days ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (12) After the Lath Connor Curtis was next on the Corporals' list. He must have been slow on the uptake because he was still giving it some through his gag and he was obviously already not going to be treated as leniently as his erstwhile fellow juvenile delinquent. T...
- 1 week ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
As long as he doesn't believe it was his right, I suppose.
- 1 week ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Jumpin' around (M/m)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1188
Re: Jumpin' around (M/m)
Nicely told so far.
- 1 week ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (11) Time to Relax [/b] The young vandal who was serving his Community Payback sentence carried the two brimming coffee cups as carefully as possible, not an easy task while shackled even though they were lidded. The carrier bag containing sandwiches that was looped o...
- 1 week ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Why should they mess around? The regime seems to work.
I suppose I have an ironic point to make concerning the type of unpleasant politicians on the "flog'em, hang 'em" side of the political argument.
I suppose I have an ironic point to make concerning the type of unpleasant politicians on the "flog'em, hang 'em" side of the political argument.
- 1 week ago
- Forum: Suggestions and Comments
- Topic: Delete account
- Replies: 18
- Views: 17222
Re: Delete account
I tend to agree @Scottstud94 but, ultimately, the content is the poster's own.
Also, if we don't just remove the account, determined leavers will simply delete their content post by post leaving devastated threads all ove the place.
Also, if we don't just remove the account, determined leavers will simply delete their content post by post leaving devastated threads all ove the place.
- 1 week ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (10) Three in Waiting [/b] The two Corporals went about their business. The strap drawing the youths' necks towards the pole was first unbuckled and then re-buckled again but only around the stake and the darker boy's neck. Judging from his reaction, he seemed to thin...
- 1 week ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Surely you are not suggesting that we have a household of habitual criminals just to sustain the story ?
Surely not ?
Surely not ?
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
It's a question of "sort the little things and then the larger tings won't occur"
Yes, I did warn people right up front that it's not like the kind of light-hearted stories I usually write. Shall we say it lacks the 'game' element of TuGs?
Yes, I did warn people right up front that it's not like the kind of light-hearted stories I usually write. Shall we say it lacks the 'game' element of TuGs?
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Well, let's hope it goes the way you want it to. Or do such offenders deserve the worst?
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (9) The Visit [/b] No one bothered to explain his function to Patrick as a chain was clipped onto the front of the visitor's collar but the two youngsters were simply pulled along with Patrick not being able to see to facilitate his progress. It was just as if the yo...
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Thanks for the encouragement, @Jb99 . Such responses are comforting.
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Yes, @gag1195, I wonder if he has changed his mind about rehabilitation since the opening of the story.
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (8) A Change in Situation Patrick was desperate to ingest sufficient nutrition by the time the Warder returned with more equipment. This time Patrick saw what was obviously a collapsible water bottle with a tube protruding from it being fastened at about head height t...
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Surely you are not implying that our (I mean, 'the') guardians of the law might abuse their powers? After all, that has never been known anywhere else, has it?
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
I think you'll find that they have to be sticklers for the rules.
After all, they wouldn't want to get into trouble, would they, @blackbound ?
Thanks for the reply.
After all, they wouldn't want to get into trouble, would they, @blackbound ?
Thanks for the reply.
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Serves him right for not behaving himself.
Thanks for continuing to follow Patrick's misfortunes, @Red86 .
Thanks for continuing to follow Patrick's misfortunes, @Red86 .
- 2 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (7) The Return Journey [/b] Eventually the Transport Corporal got lazily to his feet and inserted a new cable tie into the hood that he’d retrieved. The idle conversation between the two corporals hardly even faltered as he prepared his charges for transport. At least...
- 3 weeks ago
- Forum: TUG Talk
- Topic: Fictional vs. True TUG stories
- Replies: 9
- Views: 15671
Re: Fictional vs. True TUG stories
Or, as professional journalists say: never let the facts get in the way of a good story.
- 3 weeks ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
- Replies: 71
- Views: 9064
Re: THE STATE NEVER MAKES MISTAKES (Several M/M)
Thanks for your support, @Red86, I appreciate it.