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- 1 year ago
- Forum: TUG Talk
- Topic: Rollercoaster Bondage
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3507
Re: Rollercoaster Bondage
Can't say I've had feelings towards roller coaster safety restraints, but I do like the idea of combining the thrill of bondage with the thrill of rushing through the air. I've even looked to see if there was any kind of "acrophobia" fetish. Didn't find anything, but it's still an intrigui...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Tale of an Archer (M+/F+ F+/F+ F/M m/f f/f), Chapter 38 - Aftermath and Epilogue - 11/24/2022 - Complete
- Replies: 376
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Re: Tale of an Archer (M+/F+ F+/F+ F/M m/f f/f), Chapter 24 - Maddie Wants A Final Courtship, 09/15/2022
I like this way that even though the two protagonists were the main focus this chapter, you can tell the conflict is building in the background. There are so many ways of looking at the future, @Shotrow. I appreciate your comments very much. They take me back to a conversation that I had with the SF...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
- Replies: 212
- Views: 79549
Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 13 + New Illustration Posted 2022-09-16
[mention]Mineira1986[/mention] - Thanks! It means a lot to me how much support you've given me publicly and privately. I'm so glad you're still invested in this plot. [mention]Caesar73[/mention] - Hehe, I don't know what it is, but somehow "<adjective> <name> <object>" names just sound wes...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Tale of an Archer (M+/F+ F+/F+ F/M m/f f/f), Chapter 38 - Aftermath and Epilogue - 11/24/2022 - Complete
- Replies: 376
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Re: Tale of an Archer (M+/F+ F+/F+ F/M m/f f/f), Chapter 24 - Maddie Wants A Final Courtship, 09/15/2022
That stone and pond analogy actually seemed pretty insightful. Very interesting. Not related to these recent chapters, but I've been kind of thinking a bit about the differences between the ways you and I portray the future in our story. There's a lot of ways to describe it. Civilization being outwa...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Kidnapping By Laura & Holly (FF/M)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 10118
Re: Kidnapping By Laura & Holly (FF/M)
Pretty nice. There's something to be said for short, straightforward stories like this.
Different scenarios and targets... what if they manage to dox and track down a notorious internet troll? Or what about a case of mistaken identity?
Different scenarios and targets... what if they manage to dox and track down a notorious internet troll? Or what about a case of mistaken identity?
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW *CARMEN* NEW 21/10)
- Replies: 70
- Views: 20774
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Wonder what Lucille's up to now. Those girls are certainly not making it difficult for her.
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Wire-more (M/F) [Complete]
- Replies: 25
- Views: 10167
Re: Wire-more (M/F) [Complete]
Definitely a bit on the hardcore side, but very well-written and well-described.
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW *CARMEN* NEW 21/10)
- Replies: 70
- Views: 20774
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 003 *Sammy* 14/09)
Well, that description of Beth goes a long way to addressing my earlier complaint.
They're definitely not taking this ghost thing very seriously. Kind of funny they left her tied up though. XD
They're definitely not taking this ghost thing very seriously. Kind of funny they left her tied up though. XD
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
- Replies: 212
- Views: 79549
Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 12 + New Illustration Posted 2022-09-06
Sorry, I'm not sure what you mean. Enough storylines where? Balance between what?
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
- Replies: 212
- Views: 79549
Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 12 + New Illustration Posted 2022-09-06
[mention]Caesar73[/mention] ,[mention]trainer[/mention], and [mention]RopeBunny[/mention] - Thank you. I'm really glad that you're all still reading and enjoying this tale. It's nice to know that my silly ideas are appreciated. :3 Today's update comes with another wonderful illustration by Parassaux...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 39
- Replies: 237
- Views: 116697
Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 12
It was not so much that Giselle was lazy, she was just lucky. Her strategy was not to make any choices and don't base her strategy on her opponent and just hope the coin flips in the correct way. Oh, I thought that it was because she wasn't making any choices that her opponent couldn't discern any ...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW *CARMEN* NEW 21/10)
- Replies: 70
- Views: 20774
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW 002 posted 11/09)
And now we finally meet the ghost of the manor. One down, four to go.
One problem I'm having is telling the five girls apart. Might have been nice to spend a little more time establishing their individual personalities and motivations.
But either way, I'm excited to see where this goes.
One problem I'm having is telling the five girls apart. Might have been nice to spend a little more time establishing their individual personalities and motivations.
But either way, I'm excited to see where this goes.
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 39
- Replies: 237
- Views: 116697
Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 12
Nice introduction to probability theory, @Beaumains. I have lost the bubble (a submarine sailor's term) on why Willet gets to wrap Giselle, But it didn't matter. I still enjoyed this chapter very much. Glad it's not just me. I was confused about that as well. Interesting contest of wits here. It's ...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW *CARMEN* NEW 21/10)
- Replies: 70
- Views: 20774
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+)
A found footage story? I don't believe I've ever seen that here before. Interested to see where this goes.
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
- Replies: 212
- Views: 79549
Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 12 + New Illustration Posted 2022-09-06
Nice part. Good to be back with Sweet Becky. I am curious what you are planning with the forced labor. Mini games? Or true labor? The latter, I suppose. I figure it's like one of those mobile games where you expend energy to clear obstructions, except it takes actual time and effort. Probably more ...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
- Replies: 212
- Views: 79549
Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Mini Update (illustrations!) posted 2022-08-25
Thanks for the comments. I got an amazing commission from Parasaux. https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/31220d03-542c-4463-b081-d10128e3cf5d/dfcqzkz-ce37322a-a97a-4b6a-ae18-abdd47df47b7.jpg/v1/fill/w_1280,h_1475,q_75,strp/commission__stuck_in_the_barn_by_parassaux_dfcqzkz-fullv...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 39
- Replies: 237
- Views: 116697
Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 11
Well, she took her captivity better than expected. It sounds like she's finally adapting to the camp.
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Tale of an Archer (M+/F+ F+/F+ F/M m/f f/f), Chapter 38 - Aftermath and Epilogue - 11/24/2022 - Complete
- Replies: 376
- Views: 121104
Re: Tale of an Archer (M+/F+ F+/F+ F/M m/f f/f), Chapter 21 - Dr. McTavrish Meets Healer Wise, 08/31/2022
I don't know if I'd want to be named after the dead spouse of someone I know, but I'm glad Maddie 2's happy about it. XD.
Good to see some more cooperation between the Colonists and Bandits, but it looks like things are coming to a head in terms of their relationship.
Good to see some more cooperation between the Colonists and Bandits, but it looks like things are coming to a head in terms of their relationship.
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Wire-more (M/F) [Complete]
- Replies: 25
- Views: 10167
Re: Wiremore (M/f)
Looks like a promising start. Loved the programming talk at the beginning. :3
Just a quick note about your gender codes. Around here, lower-case letters in gender codes mean the character is a minor. Since both characters are adults in this story, it should be M/F.
Just a quick note about your gender codes. Around here, lower-case letters in gender codes mean the character is a minor. Since both characters are adults in this story, it should be M/F.
- 1 year ago
- Forum: November 2020
- Topic: Two Cursed Childhoods (m/f, M/F)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 38467
Re: Two Cursed Childhoods (m/f, M/F)
Oh wow. Just came across this. I'm not normally a fan of creepy stories, but this just hits all the right notes for me. Very emotional and relatable. Good job!
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: A Little More then I Bargained For (M/F) *Completed*
- Replies: 24
- Views: 9183
Re: A Little More then I Bargained For (M/F) *Chapter 4 Posted Aug 28th*
Continues to be a very steamy story with a lot of underlying sweetness. Is this the end, or are you planning even more?
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Welcome to the Board!
- Topic: Tips For Beginners: Storywriting
- Replies: 42
- Views: 122438
Re: Tips For Beginners: Storywriting
Here's something that may help in making your stories more immersive: Keep in mind how humans experience the world. That is, through the senses. Don't write what happened. Write what your POV character saw , heard , and felt . It can really help your reader feel like they're there. If your character...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
- Replies: 212
- Views: 79549
Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 11 posted 2022-08-18
While we wait for the next chapter, with the permission (and some encourage) from the author [mention]Shotrow[/mention], I present the concepts for three characters from this great story! Tons of work, but also tons of fun while drawing them =) https://wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/c2b...
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: A Little More then I Bargained For (M/F) *Completed*
- Replies: 24
- Views: 9183
Re: A Little More then I Bargained For (M/F) *Chapter 2 Posted Aug 23rd*
For someone who initially "took a lot a lot of convincing" to play these games, Mark does play the disciplinarian well. Another good chapter!
- 1 year ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
- Replies: 212
- Views: 79549
Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 11 posted 2022-08-18
Indeed, it was far from a critique. I hope I have not discouraged you in any way to continue with this universe. Oh no, not at all. Things have been pretty busy for me lately, so I'm not sure when I'll get out the next chapter, but it's coming and I haven't lost interest. You raise some good points...