Stories of Tie Up Games

Good start. The perspective in the first paragraph is messed up, though. I'm guessing you planned to write this in third person but then changed your mind and switched to first person and forgot to edit some phrases. "...her younger sisters..." and "Their mother..." Cute story in...

Ah, there's no need to be insecure about the kind of story you choose to write. There's more than enough room here for different types of stories. I'll keep reading as long as it's well-written (which it is), and I'm sure there are plenty of people who have been wanting something more grown-up and r...

Very intriguing! It's very realistic, and I can feel the intimacy between the two characters. Reminds me very much of my limited real life experience in a good way. This kind of intimate, down-to-earth story isn't normally what I go for, but after seeing some of the intelligent feedback you've left ...

[mention]Mineira1986[/mention] - Ah, that's fair. Glad it has your interest. [mention]Beaumains[/mention] - Thanks! I have to admit, I really had to think about the second part of your comment. I understood it to be a neutral observation, but it made me wonder if I had let this story get away from m...

Gotta say, I wasn't sure Singing Laura's story could be interesting, but this is great. It starts from the last time we saw her (tied up with no much of help to Sweet Becky) and now we saw her struggles with daily tasks. How she will have to prove herself now that Sweet Becky is away. I'm surprised...

Well, that was an unexpected twist. Seems a rather impulsive decision on Muddy's part without knowing what the bots will do. Wondering what her plan is that she needed to knock him out when he was already incapacitated by the insect.

Looking forward to the next part.

Chapter 11 "Get off! Get off!" cried Singing Laura as the rat creature pinned her to the soft grass, baring its huge teeth as it hissed fiercely. She jammed her charm shooter into its side and pulled the trigger, causing it to scamper off. Singing Laura sighed and brushed off her tunic. O...

Exciting chapter. We now see Giselle captured fully against her will by a hostile party. Gonna be interesting to see how she gets out of this and how it changes her when she does.

Probably depends on the dom. Communication is very important in a D/s relationship, and you should definitely make it clear what you're wanting to get out of it.

I did read some of the Gor books back in the 1970's and I did enjoy the original Star Trek. There was no thought of emulating either here. Rather, these stories are my very first attempt at writing fiction and I expect you are just detecting my lack of skill. In this story, @Nainur is a coauthor an...

Just finished reading this story. Noticed it awhile ago, and it sounded like a very interesting premise, but I have trouble with long stories on screen. When I heard through the grapevine about the issues raised by this story, I finally made the effort to download it to my e-reader so I could catch ...

[mention]Beaumains[/mention] I appreciate this comment! It actually gave me a lot to think about regarding why I chose to go the way I did with this story. I'm glad you like the concept!

[mention]Mineira1986[/mention] Thanks! I appreciate your encouragement over the course of this story.

Yeah, it sounds like you were looking in TUG Talk, but it's actually in TUG Links.

I quite enjoyed the game myself. The world felt very expansive, with a lot of different encounters.

Quite a fun story. Definitely a mean aunt, but quite an exciting twist for the young protagonist.

This one? https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=30&t=13450

[mention]Caesar73[/mention] Most astute. :3 [mention]Ovi1[/mention] Funny you should say that, because I definitely enjoy writing adventure stuff a lot more than torment stuff. I'm not sure why; I often enjoy reading those scenes well enough. But I figured since some people were looking forward to i...

I'll be sure to take that feedback into account when I continue the scene. =P

Huh, good point. I didn't think of that. I'm not really into feet, so it wasn't something I paid attention to. I probably thought that she would look sillier with them on, and Happy Georgia would have to risk getting kicked in the face while taking them off. But you're right, she would have had to t...

Chapter 10 [/b] Dear Sweet Becky Marigold, I'm told that this telegram won't reach you until tomorrow. I don't know if you'll be back at Gingersnap Ranch or in jail somewhere else. If you're back, please ignore this. I'm so sorry I couldn't do anything. I was stuck in the cantina for a really long ...

Thanks for the comments everyone! I actually didn't intend for this to be a dystopian world, necessarily, but I can see how people see it that way. If anything, it was more an attempt to make a future world that's like the real world, which I guess shows my cynicism towards the real world. I can't b...

Oh, I remember you told me the idea for this story privately. Glad to see you put it to paper! Nicely done. Cute with a bit of humor.

Not a bad start! Sometimes it's nice to read something short and straightforward.

Very interesting and creative story! I assumed while reading the first chapter that Mandy's special ability was to access other universes through the internet. XD

Going to be really interesting to see how Giselle evolves as a character. Her antipathy not only to the spy games, not only to the other campers, but even the tie up games puts her on the path of the greatest resistance within this camp. Look forward to seeing how she proceeds.

[mention]Beaumains[/mention] Thanks! I wasn't sure if this kind of shift would play well or not, but I thought it would be a good way to suggest the passage of time before the next night. Maybe I didn't make it clear enough, but the world isn't in a civil war. The nation of Grand California is. Pola...