Stories of Tie Up Games

houdinincfm wrote: ↑10 months ago Absolutely brilliant story! Please keep going

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you like it, and I'm currently working on the next part

Great story, it sounds like a really enjoyable experience all round. I liked the reflective tone you took with it, though I do wonder if you were selling yourself short. Did you really know for sure how Rachel felt about it all or was it just your gut feeling? Sometimes things can happen when you l...

I get to see him deal with deception and trickery on multiple fronts. And I'm excited to see how he reacts in both instances. The first is from Louise within the setting of a kink game. I'm regularly willing to forgive such deceptions based on the context of the relationship and the accepted dynami...

Great update, it's good to see you having fun with these characters. Considering that Trent couldn't see most of what happened in this part, you described what was going on extremely well from his perspective. I'm curious to see what Abbie has to say in private in the next part, but also how Trent r...

Part 16 May 2019 The apparent return of Louise does little to dissuade Rachel from her current course, as she continues to dig her finger into my sides mercilessly. The gagged laughter that I produce in response is part involuntary, part desperate plea for Louise to hurry up and take Rachel’s place...

Seeing the different parts of this story connect to one another is what really makes this story brilliant, I think. After seeing so much of Julie and Lexi individually, it was great to see their dynamic when they are together. I'm sure the final part of this chapter won't be the last we see of them ...

Great story, it sounds like a really enjoyable experience all round. I liked the reflective tone you took with it, though I do wonder if you were selling yourself short. Did you really know for sure how Rachel felt about it all or was it just your gut feeling? Sometimes things can happen when you le...

I can't stress enough how good this is. The current scene is one of the best you've done so far, and I think it's made even better by the work you've put into developing these characters. If the people involved were just basic names and descriptions, it would be fun, but having got to know this cast...

GreyLord wrote: ↑10 months ago This is a complex plot, well written.

Thanks for sticking with it, I appreciate the feedback. There's plenty more to come!

Lexi comes across very well in this part, she was very understanding about the whole thing as expected, but didn't push Julie too much when she wasn't forthcoming about what had happened. I feel like she's going to milk this though, which is fair enough considering that she's doing Julie a huge favo...

Act 1 Chapter IV – The Point of No Return The room was already booked, but Lucas went through the motions of arranging somewhere for them to stay as though he was doing it in the spur of the moment. After all, he had told her that his shared house was ‘busier than the Tube’s Central Line at rush ho...

I loved this part, there's a lot to unpack here. Abbie has clearly come a long way from where she was at the beginning, and I really like this side of her. Once again though, Jackie isn't as innocent as she seems - she's complicit in the new direction this has taken. We're starting to see the charac...

I find situations where the attraction is one-way rather than mutual super interesting, and it can add an extra layer of excitement to proceedings, whether it's the person doing the tying, or the person being tied, who is attracted to the other. It's a dynamic that I'm exploring a bit in my current ...

Nice update, I was wondering when things would connect back to Lexi. She seems like a safe enough pick for Julie, but knowing what we know about Lexi, I'm sure that the interaction between the sisters will be an interesting one. Seeing the 'daughter' nickname appear again was funny, that would be a ...

Brilliant stuff as always, I love the tone you've taken with this - it was exciting to see what was going to happen, and whether the detectives would succeed in catching the culprit or not. Plus it was pretty funny in places as well, and I especially liked the case file at the end, that was a nice ...

I like the fun, light-hearted tone you've struck with this story. I'd definitely be interested in seeing what happens when Linda returns

The only suggestion I'd make would be to separate your paragraphs to make it a bit easier to read, but good stuff otherwise!

I'm glad that I've caught up with the latest chapter, it was just as fun and creative as the previous two. You've set up a really nice dynamic here, so I'm looking forward to seeing what's to come next.

Chapters like this one are where first person narration really shines. As I read this chapter and just think about the physical things that Rachel is doing and the way that she is teasing the narrator, I have to think to myself that it SHOULD be sexy. She's trying. She has a plan. She's trying to e...

What a start to the chapter! The battle for control between Jackie and Abbie is fascinating, and it's great to see them being assertive here. We're starting to see a different side to Abbie now, which I really like as it seems like she's coming into her own now. As for Jackie, this isn't the first t...

An excellent continuation, I like how Brendan is keeping Julie on her toes throughout and giving her a taste of her own medicine. The descriptions were fantastic as always; you conveyed Julie's nerves and embarrassment at her appearance especially well, I could picture it all very clearly. This chap...

Part 15 May 2019 My eyes are narrowed disdainfully, though not enough to avoid catching a glimpse of the sight in front of me. Reflected in the screen of Rachel’s phone, my aggravated expression is in stark contrast to Rachel’s. Positioning her head directly next to mine and pouting her lips, Rache...

Brilliant stuff as always, I love the tone you've taken with this - it was exciting to see what was going to happen, and whether the detectives would succeed in catching the culprit or not. Plus it was pretty funny in places as well, and I especially liked the case file at the end, that was a nice t...

Some nice development for Erica there, seems like that's given her some food for thought. There was a lot to enjoy in this chapter, I like that Trent really let his creativity shine through here, and I liked how all three of the girls threw themselves into it - especially Erica. If Trent is smart, h...

Great part, I enjoyed that a lot. Brendan might have gone about things in a slightly questionable way, but it gave Julie a taste of her own medicine. It's telling that she assumes there must be a catch to Brendan's offer, so we'll see what it takes for her to look past that.

I always feel the need to apologize and set expectations also. But you certainly don't need to apologize to ME. I think I went 10,000 words in a chapter recently without any physical tie-ups. I find that establishing relationships makes the actual tie-ups a lot more enthralling and charged. Thanks,...