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The Guys In White (M/m)
Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2018 4:59 pm
by heybro
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Re: The Guys In White (M/m)
Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2018 5:26 pm
by MaxRoper
And now for something completely different. A good start, well written with an interesting premise. Looking forward to more. Thanks for posting!
Re: The Guys In White (M/m)
Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2018 6:14 pm
by Xtc
Good style and an original appoach. I'm looking forward to seeing if you can maintain the intrigue.
The origianl style makes the very few gramatical slips unimportant.