Roped into a Relationship (MF/M) (F/M) -- New Part 5/13

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Post by FabianStr2016 »

What can I say except I'm still interested in the story. Maybe Jason will get his reward finally ;)
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I just caught up with the last chapters... love this! Jason never gets a break, does he? :lol:
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Thank you for the comments! I know this story is getting pretty long... there could be a little unexpected development soon, stay tuned!
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I loved the foot kissing scene. And the vodka-soaked gag was really clever. Props for that. This is still a really enjoyable story. It's neat seeing Hailey embrace her dominant role. The descriptions of the bondage are so very detailed that it's easy to envision everything you write. Looking forward to reading the next installment!
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Post by JS_Photo »

I've definitely enjoyed the action in this story ... but ... it's also a little bit disturbing. The way Hailey is presented here she is, without a doubt, 100% psychotic and dangerous. Maybe you don't intend to continue the natural flow of the story, but it's definitely progressing in the direction of Jason ending up dead or seriously injured.
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[mention]JS_Photo[/mention] thank you for the honest feedback. Honestly I probably continued this story longer than I should have, and made it too extreme. You bring up good points. I haven’t added anything lately because I’ve been extremely busy. I’m also a little stuck with the story.

If I start another story the tone will definitely be lighter. Thank you again for the honest feedback.
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