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GreyLord wrote: 2 years ago Moments ago, I found that my account is active once more. For this, a big thank you to chadmc90.
The chapter title still needs an update, I could not change it to reflect chapter 11.
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slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago > You showed me how very good it can be with you in total control of me. Yes, I want you to tie me up.

Interesting, this chapter showed that Carmen was more in control than Ralph. Tying her they way she wanted. Yes, she might have been helpless and it looked though, but it was her own idea. Hard to complain if you selected the position yourself. Very nice update.
Thanks for the comment, [mention]slackywacky[/mention]. Neither Carmen or Stella hesitate to top from the bottom.
Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago
slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago Interesting, this chapter showed that Carmen was more in control than Ralph. Tying her they way she wanted. Yes, she might have been helpless and it looked though, but it was her own idea. Hard to complain if you selected the position yourself. Very nice update.
Yes I found that interessting too: The bindee in control of the situation and very creative bondage I have to say. Carmen is guiding Ralph - and I liked the Katana-Part as well. All in all beauifully written and pretty intense! Let us hope, that @greylord can return soon!
Thank you, [mention]Caesar73[/mention]. I am very happy to have returned. More about the making of katana blades ahead. And yes, this is supposed to be intense. I hope not too intense.
Nainur wrote: 2 years ago heavy, but intriguing stuff!
The sub is in the lead and that's what's defining consensuality, after all! Good job!

And I support @Caesar73: "Let us hope, that @greylord can return soon!"
Thank you, [mention]Nainur[/mention], it is good to be back, indeed. Carlos and Ralph have led sheltered lives in terms of contact with women. Stella and Carmen are finding it necessary to lead them a bit.
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There were comments discussing my problem being locked out. They certainly were supportive and gave me encouragement to stick things out. The problem is that we are calling on people to do troublesome and sometimes time consuming things without pay. Bus I suspect that if we were a pay site, the costs would drive away both readers and writers and we don't want that.

[mention]slackywacky[/mention], thanks for saying that I am well established now. From you, that is an honor.

[mention]Nainur[/mention], I am sure competent help is available. Maybe it is just hard to recognize for some reason.

[mention]Caesar73[/mention] , thanks for seconding [mention]slackywacky[/mention]'s claim.

[mention]Red86[/mention], your comments are very true and [mention]Caesar73[/mention] agrees with you.

[mention]Beaumains[/mention], you were thinking about this hard enough to offer an alternative suggestion. Thank you.

And yes, Carmen will continue to play a big role as more develops. I never intended for her to just be a filler to get more tugs in the story, although she does that nicely, doesn't she?

Then you continued with more analysis, [mention]Red86[/mention]. Thanks.

One last read of Chapter 12 in the morning and hopefully it will be ready to submit. You can look for more steam from Stella and Ralph. And perhaps something that will be a surprise.
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I like how Carmen has to take control of the situation even though that's exactly the opposite of what she wants if she wants to get the most out of Ralph. It makes for a very fun to read dynamic between the characters that serves as a nice break from Carlos and Stella who a different dynamic of their own.

Also I'm glad to see that you managed to get back your account and that slackywacky made the effort to post chapter 11 for you.
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banshee wrote: 2 years ago I like how Carmen has to take control of the situation even though that's exactly the opposite of what she wants if she wants to get the most out of Ralph. It makes for a very fun to read dynamic between the characters that serves as a nice break from Carlos and Stella who a different dynamic of their own.
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Thanks so much, [mention]banshee[/mention]. The dynamics of these four are fun to write about. When I see Frank Stevens next, I will have to thank him again for telling me their stories.
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I hope you will enjoy Chapter 12. A question on gender tags has been bothering me. Any comments that you may care to submit on this subject will be of interest. If a story has a M+/F+ situation and also has a M/F situation, are both tags needed or does M+/F+ include M/F?

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Chapter 12 – Final Courtship Continues

Carlos entered his tent not knowing what to expect even after all of Medico James’s explanations. He rushed to the bunk and removed Stella’s gag. She had not been gagged long and immediately said,

“Carlos, you do not have to free me. You know that we are in the Final Courtship. You can do with me as you wish, it will be not just with my permission but with my blessings. My father has accepted that I love you and want you to be my mate. Unless you end the Final Courtship, you will be my mate."

Carlos was continuing to untie her as fast as he could. "Stella, my love. I adore you. I want you for my mate and will do whatever is necessary to make that happen. But we must talk freely. I do not want you just as a submissive. Don't misunderstand, your submission is wonderful beyond my ability to describe and I will always want that. But I also want a partner. Someone that can help me with life’s decisions. I’m very good at some things. But not so good at others. I want a partner that can help me in those areas where I am weak and will let me help her where she may be weak. In public, I can play the dominant role. But in private, what we do must always be consensual. Is this acceptable to you?”

By then, Stella was free. She threw her arms around his neck and kissed with all of her passion. She said, “Carlos, I have dreamed of something like this but never believed that it could be possible. How can this be? We were thrown together to be enemies yet fate has made us lovers. And you are the lover of my dreams. Oh, Carlos, I fear that fate will interfere again to prevent this happiness that I am feeling.”

Carlos said, “If it does, we will deal with it. Right now, I have a naked woman with her arms around me. I think that if I don’t tend to that I would not be worthy of future happiness.”

Stella answered, "Carlos, please take your clothes off. I want to feel your skin on mine." He undressed and reached for her. She continued, "I elect to be submissive. Does that meet with your approval?"

“It does. Lay down on the bunk face down and place your hands behind your back.”

Stella did and said, “It’s funny. Like most kids, I got tied up sometimes. But I never knew there was a sexual component to tying up and being tied. But there surely is.”

Carlos was looping a rope around her wrists being careful to make it completely secure without being tight. When he was satisfied, he turned Stella over and helped her sit up. He sat with his back to the head of the bunk and pulled Stella until she was leaning her right shoulder against his chest.

He said, “Now this is near perfection. With my left hand I can feel your back down to your butt. I can run my fingers through your hair. I can bunch your hair and pull your head back for a kiss,” as he demonstrated that move to her.

His right hand was enjoying her tits, especially her nipples. It also enjoyed the ripped muscles of her abdomen and the freedom to play in the bush of her pubic hair. His fingers rubbed her labia and her clit. He hooked a finger over her clit and pulled on it as pushed the finger back and forth stimulating her entire vaginal area. They were both pleased but not surprised when she began breathing deeper and pushing her pussy into his hand. Suddenly she climaxed taking a piece of his shoulder in her teeth. But she was ever so careful not to break the skin. As she calmed and regained control of her breathing, Carlos said, "That's one."

Stella said, “In the morning, the Bucks team will enter unannounced at sunrise. They must find me bound much more thoroughly than this. I do love this. I am bound yet have enough control for a lot of movement. You knew it would happen like this, didn’t you?”

“Stella, I had hoped, but I am feeling my way here. I have had some sexual experience but it has been limited. My life has been very isolated from women, a semi-monastic existence. Do you mind that terribly?"

“No, Carlos. I am completely content that we explore and learn together. Let me pose a question. If you hogtied me with my ankles crossed and then turned me on my back, wouldn’t that give your cock access to my pussy?”

“Why Stella, I believe that you are topping from the bottom. But yes, I think that it might but there is only one way to be sure.”

He moved her off of his chest and laid her on her back beside him. Just as he had carefully bound her crossed wrists, he carefully tied her crossed ankles. He was even slower in tying her ankles because he kept taking time to massage the bottom of her feet. But finally, it was done and he turned her onto her belly and cinched her ankles to her wrists. He took some extra time to knead the twin globes of her butt before turning her over again to her back.

He started licking her upper thighs working his way to her mons. There, he spread her lips with his fingers and licked around her labia until he settled on her clitoris. On the clit he licked and nibbled, and even shook it with his teeth. It did not take long before another wave of passion crested in Stella and she was having to cinch her jaws to keep from screaming.

Carlos said, “That is two.”

As soon as she could, she said, “I almost bit my tongue to keep quiet. You really should help me here by gagging me.”

“I love hearing you talk. I might love your scream too. The time will come that we have a place of our own and won't have to worry about making noise. But you are right. Hearing your passion would not be fair to the other men here. I will re-gag you. Let’s see if we can do a better job of packing your mouth.”

Carlos took a square of cloth and worked almost all of it in her left cheek and between her molars. It surely helped the process that Stella did everything she could to assist. Another one went into her right cheek. A third one was rolled up in a short tube and placed against her tongue. There was still room to spare in her mouth so he continued with others until the packing pressed from the roof of her mouth to her tongue. A large bandanna was folded and knotted in the center. He pressed it between her teeth and against the other packing cloths and was wrapped around her head. The bandanna was long enough that he could wrap both ends again between her teeth and behind her neck where he tied it off.

Alright, we should test it. You have permission to yell. Stella thought she was to yell and inhaled in preparation and was caught by surprise when he pinched a nipple hard. "Hmmph!" she said making only a little noise despite her effort to yell loudly.

“Well, I would say the gag is working,” and began sucking on the outraged nipple. “Now you don’t have a balanced set. Shouldn’t we fix that?” as he took her other nipple between thumb and forefinger.

Stella shook her head no and he smiled and changed to kissing and sucking on the other tit. Stella smiled as much as she could with the gag. Had she not been gagged, she would have been wearing a huge grin.

Carlos’ arousal dictated that he take Stella once more. Fingering her pussy, he found that she was more than ready also. He took his position between her legs and carefully inserted his cock into her. He started moving his hips with very long slow strokes, moving back until almost withdrawn and forward until his balls hit her perineum. Stella fell in with the rhythm, lifting her hips to meet him as Carlos entered and lowering her hips as he withdrew. Carlos sensed the wave starting to build in Stella but cautioned her,

“Try to hold off. Let’s try to make this last as long as we can.”

But in the end, nature had its way and the orgasm of each plunged them to the edge of consciousness. With the last of his strength, he put both arms around her and rolled so that she was resting on top of him. This took the pressure off of her crossed ankles. They lay there for long minutes as the waves of pleasure receded and their breathing returned to normal. Carlos said, “That is three.”

He picked at the knot in the bandanna tied behind her neck. He pulled it loose and started ungagging her saying, “When I was at Unihold I heard a saying. ‘Once a king always a king. But once a night is enough.’ I think that we have demonstrated that to be a false saying.”

Stella gained the ability to speak once again. “This surpasses anything in my limited experience for sure. I agree, more than once is wonderful.”

Carlos was sliding her off of him and onto the bunk so he could get to the knots in the ropes binding her. The hogtie was released and then she was freed of her other ropes one by one.

“That was fun, Carlos. No, it was more than fun. It was as staggering an experience as our session before the feast. Was that only a day ago? I love being tied up by you but it also feels very good to be free again. I need to go outside to visit the latrine and then we both should get some sleep. Remember, the Bucks will be here at sunrise."

Carlos said, “I need to make that visit too. I will wait for you to return.”

“You don’t need to wait. I am yours and you are mine. I do not need any privacy from you.”

They went and attended to their business and returned to the tent. Stella said, “It is late and I expect to sleep hard. If we overslept and I am not bound when the Guardians enter in the morning, the Final Courtship would be broken. You should tie me up now. Do it well. Then Bucks must be satisfied that I am completely secure.”

“Stand up with your arms at your sides," he said as he formed a lasso and put it around Stella at her pelvis. He encircled her several time at the pelvis and then continued encircling her making a spiral up her body until the loops were above her tits and around her shoulders. Then he tied the rope off. Next, he cinched her left wrist to the bands around her pelvis and continued up her arm cinching her arm in the encircling rope. When he had gone all the way up her left arm in this manner he repeated the process with her right arm.

She commented, “At first, I thought this was something that I would be able to pull out of easily. Not so!”

Carlos knelt before her and tied her legs at the ankles and above the knees. Then he scooped her in his arms and lifted her to their bunk. He tied a short rope from her ankles to the foot of the bunk. With another rope, he threaded the ends between her arms and body at the armpits and pulled it through until the bight of the rope was at her chest just above her tits. Then he took the ends of the rope and tied it to the head of the bunk. The ropes at her top and feet had enough slack that she could have some movement in the bunk but she was surely not going anywhere.

He turned off the lamp, got in the bunk, pulled the covers over them, and gave Stella a gentle kiss.

“Good night, darling,” he whispered.

“Good night, my love,” she whispered back.

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As dawn approached, Carlos and Stella awoke as was their habit. Carlos turned toward Stella and pulled her to him. After moments of just holding her, they kissed. He could not resist playing with her breasts. Unfortunately, sunrise was near and they would have visitors so Carlos broke off his fondling and got up and dressed. Just as he finished, the four women Guardians marched in and told Carlos, “You go on the breakfast. Stella will join you in just a few minutes.”

Carlos left and the Guardians excitedly surrounded the bunk and pulled the covers down. They tested the ropes holding Stella and were satisfied that she was secure. “Tell us, was it good? Are you satisfied? Do you want to continue the Final Courtship?”

Stella answered, “Yes, yes, it was good. And I am very satisfied. Do any of you think you could free yourselves from this tie? This Final Courtship will go to its completion.” The Bucks giggled and lifted her to her feet. With four sets of hands, it was only moments before she was free. The Guardians were not surprised at her answers. Stella happily hugged the Guardians and they hugged her back. She dressed in her buckskins and the Guardians escorted her to the latrine and guarded her privacy there. Then they escorted her to Carlos and breakfast.

She saw Carlos talking to Ralph who had Carmen by his side and the Medico. Both Ralph and Carmen were wearing big smiles to match the smiles that she and Carlos were also wearing. As Stella took a seat next to Carlos, Ralph announced, “I have asked Carmen to be my special assistant during the Katana Project. To accept, she will have to agree to give up her duty to escape. She told me she would give me her answer this morning. Carmen, can I have your support?”

She answered, "This is not an easy thing that you ask. All of my life, the Comanche and bandit codes have been drilled into me. I have never had cause to question them. Now, everything has been turned upside down. There are two major factors in my decision. First, my father agreed to work with Chief Brooks on a new order. I do not have the experience or the wisdom to know if that is a good thing or not. I have faith that my father is doing the right thing. He was willing to die but has decided to live and work with the Bucks. Second, with just two nights with Ralph Rider, my heart tells me that he is a good and honorable man. I have faith in that just as I had faith in what Stella had said to my father and me while tied to a stake at the feast waiting to be burned alive. Before I answer you, Ralph, I would like to ask Stella a question." Turning to Stella, she asked, "How did you come to love an enemy, Stella?"

Stella answered, “Carmen, I can only tell you what we have told each other and my father. It did not and does not make sense. But we simply recognize that it is. Now, of course, we are not enemies but allies. Could you and Ralph be the same?”

Carmen continued, “That is as good an explanation as I can think of. Ralph, I am falling in love with you and pledge that as long as you want my help, I will serve faithfully and will not escape. Does that satisfy you?”

Ralph put his arms around her, gave her a brief kiss, and replied, "It more than satisfies me, Carmen, it makes my heart sing. Medico, you no longer have to keep Carmen tied up. She will not escape."

The Medico asked, “Carmen, you have been tied for more reasons than just to prevent your escape. You are sharing a tent with Ralph Rider and have access to the senior people in this endeavor. Does your pledge include not only not harming them but actively protecting them as a warrior if the need arose?”

“I said the I will serve faithfully. That includes all that you have said,” Carmen answered him.

“Then this is settled. Will you join my Bucks team in protecting Stella and managing the Final Courtship rituals? That will make you a Guardian. I will explain that to you later. Boss Rider, if she agrees would that have your approval?”

“Ralph said, “That will be fine until we are back at the ranch. Then she will be fully in my service.”

Carmen said, “I owe multiple debts to Stella and would be honored to serve.”

Stella hugged Carmen and soon they were mounted for their second day of the return trip.

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The Comanche had a Camp Commander to manage ordinary affairs of the Comanche. When reports of the capture of the Bucks’ bandit scout, Stella Brooks, by Ralph Rider got to the Comanche camp, the Commander thought there might be some opportunity they could exploit. It was clear that the Scout had taken something of great value to Rider. Whatever it was, it was not recovered when the Scout was captured. Most likely, it was hidden in the badlands.

The Commander picked a team of four of his best trackers and observers, supplied them with equipment and goods to meet many different possible situations, and sent them to the Rider Ranch. Their primary objective was to find and recover whatever the Scout had taken from Ralph Rider. The secondary objective was to gather intelligence on the Rider Ranch. He designated his team the Rider Expedition.

The Commander had not reported his actions with the Rider Expedition to Chief Gomez because the Chief was busy planning his raid on the Bucks and the Wagon Train. This could be sorted when the Chief returned.

The four Comanche send by the Camp Commander were in position before Ralph Rider left to catch the Wagon Train. Their riding horses and pack horses had been left up an out-of-the-way arroyo at the edge of the badlands. They had found spots near the Ranch where they could hide during the day and still keep a careful watch on Rider Ranch. Before a day had passed, they decided to split and the two of them that were the best at tracking would try to trace Stella's path through the badlands.

By the time Ralph lead his group to catch the Wagon Train, the trackers had found where Stella had stopped running up the arroyo and began crossing the ridges. It took an entire day to find Stella’s path across the first ridge. She had covered her tracks well. Another day showed them signs of her passage over the second ridge. They did not continue to the third because the second ridge was ideal for an ambush. They believed that Ralph Rider would return the Scout to the Ranch and force her to retrace her steps on the night she had stolen from the Ranch.

The north side of the second ridge that she would have to descend was a cliff except for one narrow place where an agile person could climb down. Sometime in the past, the cliff had collapsed at this point and left a steep but not sheer drop to the bottom of the arroyo. They found signs showing that this was the way that Stella had come before. The trackers were not pressed for time and were able to use the time to be extra careful that they did not leave any indication of their passage.

They had reasoned that she would eventually return to recover what she had taken from Rider Ranch. They planned to capture her and force her to tell them the location of the booty. Now they had to design their trap. They decided that a net could be camouflaged on the ground where Stella would have to traverse the narrow slope that avoided the cliffs. The hard part would be rigging it to snare Stella without giving her any warning that it was present. But that was the kind of thing the Comanche did well.

They left the ridge taking a route well away from the route Stella was expected to take and returned to their companions to tell them what they had found.

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The day's travel was uneventful. Ralph called a halt midafternoon announcing, "We should have traveled a couple more hours. We are making good time and I promised The Medico time for a formal Martial Arts class. Any that wish to join should ask the Medico for permission.”

It quickly became a large class. During the day’s ride, Carmen asked the Medico if she could participate. More than a dozen from the Mounted Troops and a handful of the Rider Hands joined. And all of the Bucks wanted to practice. They had been in the Medico’s classes back in the Bucks camp.

Medico Stevens started the class, "In the class, you should address me as Sensei. This comes from the old Earth orient and means teacher. Line up in three rows. Experienced students, scatter among the new students, and help where needed.

“Take the seiza position and we will bow in to start the class.” As this was done, “For the new students, I will tell you a bit of Martial Arts history. On Earth, there were many different Martial Arts. It was difficult to know which art to follow. In Earth’s 20th Century, a new martial art was born, aikido. It was the most elegant of the arts but was not successful in combat. MMA or mixed martial arts combined techniques from martial arts and combat sports from all over the world. In time, it was found that fighters that incorporated aikido training in their mixture tended to excel.

“Pure aikido was defensive only. Tonight, we will practice some pure aikido moves. Stella, would you assist me?”

Stella came up to the front of the class and bowed to the Sensei. He told her, “Attack me with muni tsuki.”

Muni tsuki was a strike with a fist to the midsection of the torso or chest. As Stella first attacked with her left fist, Sensei stepped forward and to his right while swinging his right hand in an arc making contact with Stella’s strike as it was moving toward him. He ran his hand over the top of her arm with his fingers loosely sliding over her arm until he reached her wrist. He pivoted on his right foot bringing his left foot 180 degrees around putting his back to Stella. He took a grip on her fist with his fingers on the meat of her thumb and his thumb on the back of her hand under her little finger. He pushed her hand forward slightly more than Stella had intended and pulled her hand around and down to his left. By keeping his grip, Stella's wrist bent and rotated fingers up. Sensei added to that rotation by placing his open left hand against the tegatana of Stella's left hand as he reversed the direction he was leading her hand.

If you make a blade with your hand with the thumb on top, the bottom edge of the hand is the tegatana. As Stella's hand was moved around to Sensei's left, of course, her body followed. Then when he reversed direction while torquing her wrist, Stella was unable to change the momentum of her body. This was an untenable situation for Stella that she could only solve by going to the ground or having body parts dislocated. Stella chose to rotate her body faster in the direction it was already going and to dive over the top of her left hand landing on her back. That was an escape technique called a breakfall.

Sensei said, “I could have held onto her hand and executed a pin that could cause great pain. We will add that in a later class.” They demonstrated the technique three more times. “For now, get a partner and practice.”

After two hours of class, the students were happy to have class dismissed and to be able to clean up for supper. At the meal, most were quiet because they were tired after the day's ride. Some were even more so because of Sensei Stevens' workout.
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first of all, Greylord: for a one doing such a great job you shouldnt care about "If a story has a M+/F+ situation and also has a M/F situation, are both tags needed or does M+/F+ include M/F?", you have my permission to headline "reptiloids vs. hedgehogs", just carry on! :D

Lovely mating and another twist upcoming! Love it! Great stuff!
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Much happening in one chapter! First the 'mating' scene, which was bondage sex with formalities. I think it is still peculiar how they converse during such moments while the descriptions of what is actually happening are far more raw. And then there is the build-up for the next battle. I am curious whether Stella will end up in the ropes again or whether the trap will fail. Peace is still an option but far from guaranteed.
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I suspected a twist was on the horizon and it appears I was correct 😁. You are definitely keeping this story very, very interesting!!

In my opinion, a story that features both M/F & M+/F+ work under the one tag of M+/F+. I seen many authors just list their whole story as +/+ even if not every chapter includes +/+.
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Those leads and teases to the bigger story at play were nice additions that didn't at all detracted from the more character focused last chapters and it served as a good break for the great extensive bondage that you've written in the last few chapters, not saying that I mind, In fact quite the contrary, but I think that its good to have story focused moments too.
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This is quite the intriguing tale you are presenting us with [mention]GreyLord[/mention] - and it gets more and more complex. what I liked especially in this one is its composition: First the Time Stella and Carlos spend together - nice gagging sequence by the way, then the development of the storyline and then the finish with the Martial Arts Class!
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I did not like this chapter, the bondage was too tight, the gags too loose, the sex too hot, the story line too unreal, it would never happen in real life.

Oh, what am I saying, stupid me, it was GREAT. Great bondage, great gags, great sex, great story! And since it is fiction and playing in the future, it would indeed never happen in real life... just yet.

Wonderful update.
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Nainur wrote: 2 years ago first of all, Greylord: for a one doing such a great job you shouldnt care about "If a story has a M+/F+ situation and also has a M/F situation, are both tags needed or does M+/F+ include M/F?", you have my permission to headline "reptiloids vs. hedgehogs", just carry on! :D

Lovely mating and another twist upcoming! Love it! Great stuff!
Thanks for your input, [mention]Nainur[/mention]. Starting with the next chapter, I will use M+F+/M+F+ for the story and tag the chapter just for its content. I'm glad you are happy with the contents.

Beaumains wrote: 2 years ago Much happening in one chapter! First the 'mating' scene, which was bondage sex with formalities. I think it is still peculiar how they converse during such moments while the descriptions of what is actually happening are far more raw. And then there is the build-up for the next battle. I am curious whether Stella will end up in the ropes again or whether the trap will fail. Peace is still an option but far from guaranteed.
Thank you for your post, [mention]Beaumains[/mention]. I am trying to keep the story moving along. I wouldn't want to divulge what is coming. But it certain that Stella will be in ropes again and again.

And peace is not guaranteed on Newhome or here on Earth.

Red86 wrote: 2 years ago I suspected a twist was on the horizon and it appears I was correct 😁. You are definitely keeping this story very, very interesting!!

In my opinion, a story that features both M/F & M+/F+ work under the one tag of M+/F+. I seen many authors just list their whole story as +/+ even if not every chapter includes +/+.
If I am keeping your interest, [mention]Red86[/mention], then I am being successful. I appreciate your post.

banshee wrote: 2 years ago Those leads and teases to the bigger story at play were nice additions that didn't at all detracted from the more character focused last chapters and it served as a good break for the great extensive bondage that you've written in the last few chapters, not saying that I mind, In fact quite the contrary, but I think that its good to have story focused moments too.
The Final Courtship is a bit time consuming but at least has a lot of bondage. The women Guardians and Carmen keeps the tugs moving too. [mention]banshee[/mention], I surely wish to keep my readers entertained. Thanks for your comments.

Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago This is quite the intriguing tale you are presenting us with @GreyLord - and it gets more and more complex. what I liked especially in this one is its composition: First the Time Stella and Carlos spend together - nice gagging sequence by the way, then the development of the storyline and then the finish with the Martial Arts Class!
Variety is the spice of life. Or was that something else? Anyway, I wanted a story that might even be interesting without tugs. Thank you for your remarks, [mention]Caesar73[/mention]. I hope I can keep it complex enough to keep your interest.

slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago I did not like this chapter, the bondage was too tight, the gags too loose, the sex too hot, the story line too unreal, it would never happen in real life.

Oh, what am I saying, stupid me, it was GREAT. Great bondage, great gags, great sex, great story! And since it is fiction and playing in the future, it would indeed never happen in real life... just yet.

Wonderful update.
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GreyLord wrote: 2 years ago
Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago This is quite the intriguing tale you are presenting us with @GreyLord - and it gets more and more complex. what I liked especially in this one is its composition: First the Time Stella and Carlos spend together - nice gagging sequence by the way, then the development of the storyline and then the finish with the Martial Arts Class!
Variety is the spice of life. Or was that something else? Anyway, I wanted a story that might even be interesting without tugs. Thank you for your remarks, @Caesar73. I hope I can keep it complex enough to keep your interest.

Believe me [mention]GreyLord[/mention], you are doing very well, and I will enjoy every update - of that I am sure :) Indeed Variety is the spice of life :)
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[mention]Caesar73[/mention] and [mention]FabianStr2016[/mention], it is gratifying to get your comments.

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Chapter 13 moves the story a little further. Bondage abounds. I intend for it to be appropriate for the story and not gratuitous.

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Chapter 13 (F+/F M/F) – Comanche Moving

Ralph, Carmen, Carlos, Stella, and Frank were having a last cup of coffee after the evening meal. The four women Guardians came to them. The Guardians asked if Stella could go with the Guardian. Of course, permission was given. Like the previous night, the women Guardians, now augmented with Carmen, escorted Stella to Carlos' tent. Once inside the tent, Carmen went up to Stella and enveloped her in a big hug. "Thank you again, Stella. I owe you more than I can ever repay."

June, the senior guardian, said, “If I am not mistaken, this Final Courtship will end soon. Am I correct that you are still enthusiastic about being the mate of Carlos?”

Stella answered, “Oh, yes!”

“How would you like to be tied to await Carlos?” June asked.

“Do you want me naked or clothed for this?” Stella asked.

The guardian replied, “As you wish, I think.” There was a gleam in her eye. The Bucks women, like other women, loved to be involved in the mating process, whether their own or someone else.

Stella said, “Even after the meal, I am still hot from the workout. And we are back in the lower plains in late spring. I would like to undress for this if you don’t mind?”

Carmen said, “You have seen me buck naked. Now it’s my turn to see you.” Carmen grinned.

There were no objections from the guardians and Stella slipped off her buckskins. “Tomorrow, I’m going for shorts instead of long pants. It’s almost summer. Now, you asked for a suggestion. I think Carlos would be happy to see me tied up with my hands behind my back but pulled high, bending me over. Can we do that?”

Jane saw there was a ring at the top of the tent pole. "Sure we can. We will take it from here. Carmen, show us your rope skills by tying her ankles and legs above the knees. June, tie her hand behind her back with a double column tie. Janet, get that stool and bring it to the pole. Then climb up and thread this rope through the ring on top. Susan, when June finishes, tie her elbows. Now, there is the question of a gag. Carlos did not have you gagged this morning, Stella. Would you like to be gagged or not?"

With the team working on her restraints, Stella said, “Carlos likes for us to talk. I would say no gag unless you think it best otherwise.”

“Let’s do what Carlos will like,” Jane decided.

When Stella’s arms and legs were tied, Jane ordered, “Pick Stella up and stand her in front of the pole. Janet, take one end of the rope going through the ring and make another cinch around her wrist ropes.” Then, Jane took the other end of the rope through the ring and said, “Carmen and Susan, take her arms and start lifting them. Stella, give us some feedback. You may be in this position for a long time. Maybe not, but we don’t know, do we.” Stella bent at the waist and lowered her head as her hand raised higher than her shoulders.

The point soon came where Stella said, “That is getting pretty tight now. But I want it to look good for Carlos.”

They stopped lifting her hand when she spoke and even lowered them a little. Jane threaded her end of the rope between Stella's forearms and stepped up on the stool to thread it through the ring again. Then she made a couple of hitches to keep things in place. Stepping back and looking at Stella, Jane said, "Okay, we are going to do two more things. First, Carmen, tie her legs to the pole and the thighs, just above the knees, and the ankles. That is more restrictive but will help prevent any mishap with you losing your balance. It should not add to your discomfort. The last thing might be uncomfortable but will improve your appearance. It is natural for you to be face down with your hands pulled up this way. June, get her hair and make a high ponytail. Then tie this rope to the ponytail."

June finished and Jane said, “Now thread the end of that rope through the ring.”

Jane continued, “Carmen, lift Stella’s head. We want her to look forward. June, pull the rope tight and tie it off on her hands.”

While the rope was being tied around her hands, Stella said, “You ladies are very good at this, you know. I am sure that this is going to thrill Carlos. Thank you. I am well tied. When Carlos arrives, I will be here just like you are leaving me.”

Jane said, “You are a wonderful sport, Stella.”

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The day's ride had taken some energy from Carlos. The martial arts practice had taken much more. Nonetheless, he was eager to see Stella and wondered how the Guardians had left her for him tonight. He entered his tent and found things were beyond his greatest expectations. Stella's hands were high behind her back toward the top of the tent pole. Her back was bent parallel to the ground and the Guardians had tied her hair to her hands, lifting her head so she was looking at him. She was naked and inviting. Best of all, she was smiling for him.

Carlos strode over to her with big steps and knelt in front of her face. He took her face with both hands and pressed his lips against hers. Stella parted her lips and pushed her tongue against his lips. Carlos responded by parting his lips and pushing his tongue against her tongue. More minutes passed while their tongues did a timeless dance back and forth.

He moved his hands away from her face and cupped her breasts as they hung below her chest. Her tits were always enticing. Tied in this position, they were even more so. Their tongues continued their dance as he manipulated her breast. He took her nipples and twisted and tweaked them. He pulled them in all directions: forward and back, left and right.

Next, he let one hand leave her tits and move to her belly, where he circled his fingers around her navel. Later, he continued that trip, moving his hand to cup her vulva. Finding some moisture there, he inserted three fingers in her vagina and circled pressure against the walls. Specializing on the forward wall, he kept pressure and movement on her clit, and soon Stella's rate of breathing increased until she had to break off the tongue dance to pant. She cried out with a loud long, "Ah!" Her climax made her strain against her ropes.

Ralph stood and freed her hair. He gave his attention to her ropes and untied her legs from the tent pole. Then he lowered her hands and freed her from that rope. This left her arms and legs well tied. Carlos picked her up with one arm under her knees and the other under the small of her back. He carried her to the bunk and lowered her onto it.

“Carlos, it is time for you to strip and climb in here with me. I owe you an orgasm and I know how I want to repay my debt.”

Carlos did not waste any time complying with Stella’s wishes. He stretched out beside her and resumed fondling her body.

“I love what you are doing. Would you continue later? Right now, please sit up at the head of the bunk and adjust me so my mouth can reach your cock.”

The moment she could, she took him deep in her mouth. By arching her back and neck, she moved her head up and down on his member while sucking as hard as she could and massaging him with her tongue. From his fondling of Stella, Carlos was very much on the edge, and it seemed as if Stella had barely started when spasms of pleasure overtook him and he spurted his load into the back of her mouth. Without hesitation, Stella swallowed and continued sucking, licking, and swallowing until he softened and there was no sign of his passion left.

“Stella, if I didn’t already know your background, I would swear that you trained as a courtesan, not a scout.”

He slid lower in the bunk and pulled Stella under his arm and on his chest and she nestled into him.

Carlos fondled her while he talked, telling her how they would make katana blades. He explained how they would talk to other Ranches, Plantations, Mines, and Towns and convince them to join their alliance. Wagon Trains would spread out to all of those in the alliance. Carlos talked about something called science and how it could be taken out of Unihold and spread over the alliance. He spoke of individual freedom and noticed that he still had Stella tied up.

As he reached for the first knots to untie her, she said, "Carlos, you don't have to untie me. I am free already. Maybe for the first time in my life. I am content. I will be content as long as we are doing what you wish."

“Right now, I want you to be free. You can choose to be with me or not be with me. It has to be your choice as much as it is mine."

He continued untying knots and unwrapping rope until she was free. Stella said, “You had already given me freedom. Now you have reinforced it. I want to be with you as long as you will have me.”

“Let's get this Final Courtship finished and be mates," he said. "Stella, tying you up and fondling you has been the greatest excitement I have ever had with a woman. Sex with you restrained has given me the greatest orgasms of my life. I hope that it has been good for you because I'm sure that as long as we are together, we will play a lot of tie-up games." He turned off the lantern and pulled up the cover.

“We are still in the Final Courtship ritual, Carlos. Tie my hands together behind my back and I can sleep knowing we are following the ritual. And, yes. I've tried to tell you, it is like you give me freedom by tying me up. I have never had climaxes to match the ones you have given me. But I need to tell you, I only want to be tied by you."

Rope was all over the bunk. Carlos took a piece and tied her hands as she asked. They went to sleep with Carlos holding Stella in his arms.

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After the Guardians left Stella in Carlos’ tent, Carmen bade them goodnight. “Thank you for making me one of you. I never realized that work could be so much fun. Unless you have something else for me to do, I will leave you now and go to Boss Ralph’s tent.”

They hugged goodbye the Carmen went to Ralph’s tent with a light footstep. Ralph was lying on the bunk waiting for her. She smiled at him, saying, “Preparing Stella for Carlos was a lot of fun. I will say that she is a very tough lady. She took pretty extreme bondage for him.”

“Carmen, I'm sure that Carlos won't leave her that way for long. You know tie-up games do not have to be extreme or painful. Light bondage can be fun too."

“I'm afraid my sexual experience as an adult is very limited. Most of my time tied up, except with you, was by the Bucks and more like punishment or control. With you, I didn't think of it as extreme. It was just giving you full access to me. So what would you like me to do now?”

“Let's have a slow and gentle night. The Medico is a hard taskmaster. Shall we undress?”

Carmen answered, “Yes, Sensei was tough. No wonder the Bucks beat the Comanche. Being able to train most of your life under the Medico is an enormous advantage.” By the time Carmen said this, her clothes were off and she was climbing into the bunk.

After they were both in the bunk, Frank crossed Carmen’s wrists behind her back and started with a horizontal lark’s head followed by several wraps. The several more vertical wraps and a cinch. He asked, “Is that too tight or does it pinch anywhere?”

“No, it is comfortable. What shall I do now?”

“Wiggle over here under my arm,” as he held up an arm for her. As she wiggled into the position, he turned her on her side so that her head rested on his shoulder and her upper tit rested on his chest. Her lower knee slid under his thigh when he raised it, and her upper leg went across his pelvis. He played with the tit on his chest. He rubbed the nipple, twisting it clockwise then widdershins. With his other hand, he rubbed her back between her arms, sometimes reaching down and squeezing the globes of her rear end. He lifted her hair to make it fan across his stomach. He asked Carmen what she wanted out of life.

“Ralph, I had never thought of being a hostage before. Everything is new to me now. I think that I should be unhappy at being a hostage, being a prisoner. Yet I have never been so happy as I am right now in your arms. Your touch feels so very good. But it is more than just your touch. It is that it is you doing the touching. I am here with my hands tied behind my back, but I have never been this comfortable before. Your playing with my nipple is making my pussy tingle. It would not take much to set me off right now.”

Ralph rolled her onto her back and kissed her. The hand that had been playing with her nipple went to her labia, rubbing and slipping fingers in and out of her pussy. The rubbing included her clit, and soon she was bucking against his hand. Her orgasm built, and she grabbed a chunk of his shoulder with her teeth. She was careful, even in the throes of her passion, not to bite and break the skin.

Leaning back, Carmen fought to control her breathing. She sensed that Ralph moved between her leg and inserted his cock into her well-lubricated pussy. But when he started pumping in and out, and her full awareness returned. She started moving her hips in rhythm to his and an orgasm came crashing down on her. The walls of her vagina contracted around Ralph as she tensed every muscle in her body. She was straining for release and straining to prolong the orgasmic bliss. Ralph continued to pump in and out. A third wave reached for her and this time it reached for Ralph, too. They groaned together as the release came.

Later, after Ralph slid to the side and turned to rest his head on her breast, he moved to untie Carmen. She told him to go to sleep. He murmured, "Thank you, Carmen, for everything." They both fell fast asleep until the dawn.

Ralph and Carmen both stirred at first light. Carmen asked, “Ralph, would you free me now. I should join the Guardians for my morning duty.”

Coming awake, Ralph released her and watched her dress and dash out of the tent.

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The first of the early morning light trickled into the tent. Stella and Carlos began to stir. He freed Stella, and they had a quick wash. Carlos dressed while Stella tidied up the tent. Stella reminded Carlos, “It is almost sunrise and the Guardians will be here.” She climbed back into the bunk and settled on her stomach. She placed her hands behind her back.

Carlos tied her hands, elbows, and feet. He used another rope to tie her feet to her hands, then paused to caress her beautiful tight rear end. The Guardians entered the tent and the lead Guardian, at least, saw what he was doing. Trying to suppress a smirk, the lead Guardian said, “Carlos, your breakfast is waiting. Stella will join you soon.”

Carlos said, “Thank you, Guardians,” as he left the tent.

The Guardians surrounded the bunk, freed Stella, and helped her up and into her shorts and halter. The Lead Guardian, Jane, asked Stella, “Carlos had you secure again this morning. That speaks for his intent. Do you still wish to continue the Final Courtship and become Carlos’ mate?”

“Yes, I do!” Stella answered.

“Then join your future mate for breakfast.”

Carlos was sitting with Ralph and the Medico drinking a mug of coffee. Stella sat beside him and slipped her arm around the small of his back. “Good morning, Boss Ralph, Medico Frank. I hope everyone had a good night.”

Ralph replied, “Thank you, Stella. I did and hope you had a good night too.”

Frank Stevens nodded his head and smiled. Carlos slid his arm around Stella’s shoulder and squeezed.

Sausages and hash-browned potatoes were soon ready and disappeared fast into hungry mouths. Ralph rose first, saying, "Let's hit the road folks."

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The Comanche rushed back to their camp. It is a longer distance to their camp than from the big meadow to Rider Ranch but they arrive the day before Ralph Rider returns home. Chief Gomez called an all-hands meeting to explain their new situation to the Comanche. He tells them that they can no longer act as bandits and will have to learn other trades to support themselves. He offered to step down as Chief. The Comanche reject that saying no one else could have done any better.

Within the Comanche, there are individuals with just about any trade skill. The Chief assigned the Commander the task of determining just who knew what and to set up classes for others to be taught. Garcia is surprised to see that most of the Comanche do not seem to be adverse to this.

The Commander asked for a private meeting. He tells the Chief he assigned four Comanche to watch Rider Ranch and look for opportunity even before the Chief had left for the Bucks attack. Chief Gomez ordered a group of ten Comanche to prepare to ride with him to Rider Ranch. His objective was to warn Ralph Rider about the four Comanche working against him and to help Rider find and order home the four sent by the Commander.

Although tired from the ride back from the mountains, they now have fresh horses and soon are on the way. Garcia hoped he might see his daughter. He didn’t think that the four Comanche would be able to cause a lot of harm.

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Ralph couldn’t help picking up the pace of their travel because they were nearing home. He knew they could have finished the trip in the early evening if they continued. But he had told the Medico they would make an early stop for the martial arts class. The only urgency in their return was the retrieval of the Katana Documents. He did not see the difference in their arrival time at the Ranch as significant.

Carmen had been a delightful companion for the ride. She and Ralph talked, and she asked lots of questions about the Ranch and its operation. There was no question that he enjoyed talking about the Ranch. He also went into a lot of detail about katanas and why they were so difficult to make.

Ralph stopped the Convoy and their camp was soon set up. Sensei Stevens called for the start of his class and most of his students from the last class returned. Sensei noted Carmen was back. Watching her progress was going to be interesting. He thought her potential was well above average and she had worked hard in the class yesterday.

In this class, he stressed ukemi, the response to an attack. He taught how to take falls to escape from untenable situations. Like many things, the subject was like an onion. There was a surface that was easy to see. But the surface was a thin skin that could be peeled off, leaving a new surface. A lifetime could be spent learning more and more about a subject, always leaving more to be learned.

Frank again worked the class hard for the two-hour class. The class breathed a sigh of relief to see the end of the class but made sure that Sensei did not see it. They were ready to get washed up for the evening meal.

At the meal, there were a lot of special treats. Since this would be the last night, they served anything special that the cook had held back. It wasn’t the feast at the Bucks camp, but it was well above ordinary.

Ralph talked to the cook, and they decided that the chuck wagon would continue to the Ranch that night. They would prepare a big brunch for the Convoy's arrival the next morning. The Chuck Wagon had left coffee, sausage, and biscuits for the Convoy's breakfast.

No one noticed Gus Sloan from the Chuck Wagon crew staring at Stella at every opportunity.
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First of all, again great, consensual bondage.
And new action arises. Superb saga!
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Slowly but surely the political promises are being fulfilled. So far, save for the last paragraph, there is no cloud in the sky that could let it rain and ruin the treaty. Again, it all seems to be good to be true, and now the mating ritual is complete I expect another source of tie-ups will become necessary. I can't even imagine in which direction the story will go, but I will certainly follow it closely.
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This made me chuckle. I wonder whether the typo is accidental or foreshadowing something is going to have effect in nine months.
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Beaumains wrote: 2 years ago Slowly but surely the political promises are being fulfilled. So far, save for the last paragraph, there is no cloud in the sky that could let it rain and ruin the treaty. Again, it all seems to be good to be true, and now the mating ritual is complete I expect another source of tie-ups will become necessary. I can't even imagine in which direction the story will go, but I will certainly follow it closely.
Sex with you restrained has given me the greatest organisms of my life.
This made me chuckle. I wonder whether the typo is accidental or foreshadowing something is going to have effect in nine months.
The Final Courtship hasn't quite ended yet. But it is close. Some things are looking good. However, chapters 10, 12, and 13 contained hints of trouble to come. Please keep following [mention]Beaumains[/mention].

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I love the layers of this story. Politics, some action, romance, bondage and it all fits effortlessly and never feels forced.

This is great.
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Nainur wrote: 2 years ago First of all, again great, consensual bondage.
And new action arises. Superb saga!
Thank you, [mention]Nainur[/mention]. I'm glad you are enjoying the tale.
wolfman wrote: 2 years ago I love the layers of this story. Politics, some action, romance, bondage and it all fits effortlessly and never feels forced.

This is great.
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[mention]GreyLord[/mention] Hi. And, wow.

Picked this up earlier, so all I've read so far is chapter one. I'm quite a way behind, but wanted to comment.

Great story, loving all the detail you've put into thinking this world/story out. I like backstory, even if it has nothing to do with TUG's I've always felt it's worth making the effort to think about and then write it in.

Good work, keep it up.
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Interactions between Carmen and Stella were more fun than I expected and I hope we get to see them tie each other up again in the future, maybe Carmen wants to do the final courtship too and needs Stella to tie her up or something like that
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So the Courtship is going along nicely :) A group of fascinating characters you created here @greylord, especially Stella and Carmen :)
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RopeBunny wrote: 2 years ago @GreyLord Hi. And, wow.

Picked this up earlier, so all I've read so far is chapter one. I'm quite a way behind, but wanted to comment.

Great story, loving all the detail you've put into thinking this world/story out. I like backstory, even if it has nothing to do with TUG's I've always felt it's worth making the effort to think about and then write it in.

Good work, keep it up.
Coming from you, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention], I am especially delighted by your reaction. I do hope that you will continue reading the story and will let me know what you think about it. One of my goals was to write a story that would be interesting sans TUGs. Thank you for your comments.

banshee wrote: 2 years ago Interactions between Carmen and Stella were more fun than I expected and I hope we get to see them tie each other up again in the future, maybe Carmen wants to do the final courtship too and needs Stella to tie her up or something like that
Thanks [mention]banshee[/mention]. Girls like to have fun too. Carmen does seem to have fallen for Ralph and she did enjoy tying up Stella. The Final Courtship is a Bandit ritual but it may take different forms in different Bandit tribes.
Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago So the Courtship is going along nicely :) A group of fascinating characters you created here @greylord, especially Stella and Carmen :)
Thank you, [mention]Caesar73[/mention]. It is nice the see that the affection that I feel for them is shared.
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