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slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago Great to see alliances being forged and people working to make live better for all. It will be hard work and there will be setbacks, but I do hope all ends well (eventually).

Let's see what Ralph and Carmen will be up to ;)
exactly! looking forward to seeing it happen...
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Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago I liked the feast, or the two feast very much - it was nice of Stella to give Carmen clothes. The story line is developing nicely. Carry on @GreyLord - the characters grow with every chapter!
Your comments are appreciated, [mention]Caesar73[/mention]. It makes me very happy that you continue to like the tale.
Beaumains wrote: 2 years ago This is an interesting development, seeing the ways and customs of Stella's people, and how they softened up under the recent diplomacy. Only, the recent peace is fragile, and I would not be surprised if the Comanche would be more humiliated by this decent treatment as it assumes their weakness. Let's see how long it will last.

I think it was a good choice to leave some details on the Comanche women to the reader's imagination as it would be a very gross read that might not have suited the rest of the story.

Don't forget to update your chapter title
I am afraid that peace is always fragile, [mention]Beaumains[/mention]. And the Comanche certainly have mixed feeling about their defeat. Hopefully only a few will cause trouble.

Thank you for your comments. I am glad that we are in agreement that some things are better left to the imagination. The bandits are a brutal people by our standards.

slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago Great to see alliances being forged and people working to make live better for all. It will be hard work and there will be setbacks, but I do hope all ends well (eventually).

Let's see what Ralph and Carmen will be up to ;)
Indeed [mention]slackywacky[/mention], as Medico Stevens told me the story, there is much more for me to reveal to you about the politics of Newhome. Concerning Ralph and Carmen, I know from personal experience that a quick courtship can lead to a happy life time marriage. We will see how things work out for them
banshee wrote: 2 years ago Nice calmer chapter than the last ones but I can be sure that this calmness wont last for long, whether it be the comanches, the alliance getting shaky or a new threat I'm sure something will come up.
You can be sure the more steamy scenes are on the way, [mention]banshee[/mention]. As for threats, possibly an old threat will reemerge. As always, your comments are appreciated.

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slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago Great to see alliances being forged and people working to make live better for all. It will be hard work and there will be setbacks, but I do hope all ends well (eventually).

Let's see what Ralph and Carmen will be up to ;)
exactly! looking forward to seeing it happen...
To be sure, [mention]Nainur[/mention], there will be much more about Ralph and Carmen. Thank you for commenting.
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Chapter 10 - Final Courtship


When they entered his lodge, Ralph asked, “Now what am I supposed to do with you? I can’t trust you enough to turn you loose.”

Carmen said, “Except for part of the feast, the Bucks kept me tied up since yesterday afternoon. I think I had better get used to it. What do you think, Boss Rider?”

“I think you are the most beautiful woman that I have ever seen. With you here alone with me and your hands tied behind your back, the temptation is more than I can handle. I want to put my hands on your tits and twist your nipples until you are gasping. My fingers want to comb through your hair. I want to stop babbling like a first-week student at Unihold."

Carmen felt a tingle in her groin as he talked. She said, “There is a bow tied at my back under my shoulders and another behind my neck. I think you should pull those strings and remove this halter. Then you should do what you said.”

Ralph stood behind her and removed the halter. He reached around and cupped her breasts and pulled her back and arms into his chest. He tightened his grip on her breasts and then relaxed it. Ralph repeated that action, kneading over and over.

"Oh, Ralph. That feels so good. I have fooled around with boys, but never with a man like you. What is wrong with me? You are my captor. I am just a prisoner. Weren’t you going to twist my nipples?”

Ralph answered by taking each nipple with a thumb and forefinger and rolling the nipples first one way and then the other. It was only moments before Carmen gasped. He spun her around and sucked hard on one tit while manipulating the other. Then he switched tits.

Carmen moaned. “I did not know that being a hostage would bring me feelings like this. Please take my shorts off. Can you tie my legs so that you will have access to my pussy? Do you want to do that? I want you to so very much.”

A moment later, Carmen was naked and being marched to the bed. Ralph opened a few drawers and found there was plenty of rope. He placed her in a kneeling position on the bed with her back to him. He started by tying her elbows closer together. Next, he made a chest harness and cinched her arms to her back. It took a long time because, after every loop of rope, he fondled her breasts or kissed them, or both.

“Carmen, I don’t know how it would be possible. But if you want me to stop, I will. What do you want me to do?”

“Boss, please oh please do not stop. If you change anything, please pay some attention to my pussy. It is aching from your lack of attention.”

Ralph finished the last knot in the cinch and pushed her to the side so that she fell over on the bunk. He pushed her to the center of the bunk and took her left ankle and pulled it toward the bottom left corner. With a piece of rope, he tied her ankle to the bunk’s left corner with two hand lengths slack. He did the same with her right ankle and the right corner. Ralph removed his clothes and knelt between Carmen’s knees. With one hand, he cupped her mons, the other he stroked her body higher and higher until he was cupping a tit.

“I will tell you that if you do not stop me now, in moments, you cannot stop me. You are close to your last moment of control, Carmen.”

Carmen shook her head and cried, “No, Boss Ralph, I do not want control. All I want is for you to take me as you should take a woman. This is new to me. I know what to expect but I have not done this before. Put your cock into my pussy and make me a complete woman.”

Ralph paused when he heard Carmen was a virgin. He said, “You are offering me a splendid gift. I want to be sure this is what you want?”

She answered, “Please don’t stop. I do want this with you, now.”

Then he said, “You are mine!” and he relieved her of her virginity as gently as he could. Afterward, he asked, "Carmen, I am sorry if that hurt you. Are you alright?"

She answered, “Boss Ralph, there was a pain as expected. It was fleeting. Other feelings were quickly more important.”

Later, he untied her ankles. Carmen said, “Now cross my ankles and tie them that way. Then finish by making it a hogtie. I hope that from time to time during the night that you will want to reach out a stroke me. A chill is moving in. These mountains are cooler at night than I am used to. Will you get under the cover and pull me with you? And the night passed with Carmen hogtied under the cover with Ralph. She felt contentment that she had never felt before. Occasionally, Ralph reached out to stroke a tit or rub a hand over her vulva, or to finger her clit. Or to rub her back. As dawn broke, Ralph showed Carmen that he could tighten the hogtie, arching her back and moving her crossed ankles over her butt, making her vagina accessible to his cock.

Later, the sunrise found them having simultaneous orgasms and starting on a fresh path for both of them, together.

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After breakfast, Ralph tied Carmen’s hands behind her back and turned her over to the Medico and the Bucks. They all joined Carlos McTavrish, Stella Brooks, and Walter Holt on the ride with the Chief to the big meadow. Walter Holt was the senior Bucks Blacksmith Apprentice.

The sun was still low in the morning sky when they arrived at the meadow. On the ride from the Bucks camp, he had told the Medico that he was declaring Stella and Carlos to be in Final Courtship status and that the Medico would be the Courtship Judge. Chief Brooks assigned a squad of ten Bucks to the Medico as Courtship Guardians and to assist with the escort and protection of Stella. These Bucks and the Medico were the Guardians of the Final Courtship. The squad had six men and four women. They were among the Bucks’ finest fighters and had trained under the Medico. The Chief charged the Medico with the duty of explaining the custom to Carlos and with continuing his martial arts training.


Ralph split from the Chief’s group to meet with his Mounted Troops and Hands that would return with him to the Ranch. He also wanted to say goodbye to Capt. James and Lt. Daley who would take the Wagon Train to Kennedy. Carlos split with him to make the last inspection of the Wagon Train before it continued to Kennedy.

Chief Brooks rode up to the Comanche. The Comanche were ready to mount to begin their trek home.

“Chief Gomez, I bid you farewell. I hope we will be better friends in the future and that the Comanche can find their way in the new order of things.”

“My thanks to you, Chief Brooks,” answered Gomez. “Our lives were in your hands, and you are giving us another chance. Let there be peace between Comanche and Bucks from this day forward. And between the Comanche and the Rider Ranch and the Wagon Train.”

The Bucks had abused the women Comanche last night. But the Comanche in that situation would add whippings and floggings. And worse, burning prisoners at the stake. They thought maybe they shouldn't hold grudges for this. They wanted to hear what the Chief had to say.

The Comanche started following the trail to the west.

Chief Brooks joined Ralph and Carlos. He spoke. “Ralph, your mission is the critical element of our alliance. Walter Holt is close to becoming a Master Blacksmith. I am sure that he will be an asset in your efforts, as will Medico Stevens. The Bucks I have assigned to the Medico will also be able to assist you. And you have the use of Carmen, as you requested. We will use riders to keep in touch. I suggest contact once each week for now.”
Ralph replied, “That sounds about right. We can change it if need be.”

“Then I bid you farewell then," said the Chief, and he and his guards headed back to their camp.

The Wagon Train began its trek north toward Kennedy. Lt. Daley’s Mounted Platoon led the way down the mountain and the remaining switchbacks with Capt. James as Wagon Master. Capt. James anticipated no further hostilities. On Newhome, survival required vigilance, and so they proceeded as if they were expecting another attack.

Ralph Rider started his convoy. It began the climb back to the gap. He was leading the remaining two platoons of Mounted Troops, about 50 Ranch Hands, the Medico with his ten Bucks plus Walter Holt, Carmen, Carlos, and Stella. Ralph asked the Medico if it was necessary to keep Carmen bound.

The Medico answered, "Ralph, a hostage is honor-bound to escape if possible. We must prevent that."

Ralph asked Carmen, “Carmen, will you pledge to stay with us and not to escape?”

She said, “No, Boss Ralph, I must escape if I can.”

Ralph said to the Medico, “Will you see to it she gets frequent breaks. Untied so she can stretch? Riding tied up is very stressful. We have a responsibility to take care of Carmen.”

Stella rode next to Carlos. She thought about the previous night with Carlos. Stella had been free the entire night. While she loved being tied up by him, it was also nice to stroke his body and move as she pleased. She believed the future would bring them plenty of both.

On horseback, the switchbacks were much easier to negotiate. The only wagons with them were the chuck wagon and a few supply wagons. There were plenty of men to help with the wagons at the tough parts of the trail. One of the Bucks led Carmen’s horse. Before noon, they had reached the gap and headed down the south side.

Ralph set a pace that was more leisurely than the pace they had set coming. Three nights on the road and they should arrive at the Ranch late the following day. They were still coming down the mountain from the gap when they stopped for the night.

The Hands raised tents for Ralph, Carlos, and Medico Stevens while the Chuck Wagon crew started cooking fires. Soon the smell of traveling stew was reaching everyones’ nose. While the stew was heating, Medico Stevens took Carlos and Stella to the side and asked them to show Martial Arts techniques. The Medico would call out a technique. Carlos would attack four times with the technique, switching his lead from left to right each time. Stella would show the defense. Where appropriate, she would do the omote version twice and then the ura version twice.

Many defenses had two versions. One in which the defender, or nage, would move to the front of the attacker, turning the attacker’s body. This was the omote version of the defense meaning in front. In the ura version, meaning in back, the defender would step behind the attacker. Then they would switch and Stella would attack and Carlos would defend. When the meal was ready, they stopped.

The Medico said, “Carlos, you have been practicing hard with Stella. Your movements reflect your efforts. I will ask Ralph to stop us earlier tomorrow and we will start formal classes. When we get to Rider Ranch, we will have a formal dojo to use with proper tatami mats.”

Ralph Rider was watching and wishing he could join them. The Medico asked, “Boss Ralph, can we stop earlier tomorrow so I can hold a formal class. You can join us if you wish?”

Ralph replied, “We can do that. And I would like to join your class.”

As the Chuck Wagon crew served the food, Ralph freed Carmen. Two male Bucks kept their eyes on her. Gus Sloan stood near the Chuck Wagon. He watched Stella with an intense gaze as she sat next to Carlos. He was careful not to let Stella see him. He was thinking, “I must bide my time. For now, I will wait and stay out of her sight.”

As the meal ended, a Guardian told Carmen to rise and two of them escorted her to Ralph’s tent. A Guardian ordered, “Kneel with your back to the tent pole. Put your hands and feet behind the pole.”

As a hostage, she would do what she was told until she could escape. She assumed the position and had her hands and feet bound. A Guardian tied her feet to her hands, putting her into a kneeling hogtie. Another presented a bandanna to her mouth, which she opened. The Guardian stuffed the bandanna inside her mouth. Then she knotted a long bandanna in the center, passed it between Carmen’s teeth, and tied it behind her neck.

These bonds were firm but not stressful. Carmen thought she might work her way free with enough time, but she was where she wanted to be, in Boss Ralph’s tent. She knew her wait would be short and she was content. As they were leaving, one of the Bucks patted her on the shoulder and told her it was alright for her to have fun tonight.

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While the Guardians took Carmen to Ralph’s tent, two other things were happening. The four Guardian women approached Carlos and Stella and asked Carlos if they could use his tent to talk to Stella. They asked Stella if she would join them for a meeting. As the Guardians walked Stella to Carlos’s tent, Medico Stevens asked Carlos if he would join him in his tent so that he could relay a message from the Chief in private.

Carlos thought that there were a lot of meetings going on but joined the Medico. In the Medico’s tent, they took their seats in two camp chairs. The Medico began.

“The bandits have courtship rituals that differ from anything that you have likely seen Carlos. Bandits, including the Bucks, believe that a woman can be a warrior but that she must still be submissive to her mate. These rituals, or traditions, came about to assure that the male would be a worthy mate.

“The first step is the ‘Right to Courtship’. To enter this stage, a male makes a public declaration of his interest in a woman. If the woman agrees, we schedule a series of personal combat contests for the male. These contests determine the male’s combat capability and the strength of his character. For over ten years, I have been in charge of these contests for the Bucks. At the end of the contests, Chief Brooks and I determine the candidates’ suitability to enter the Right to Courtship for the woman he has chosen. If, after two months, the male and the female are still in agreement, Chief Brooks moves them to Final Courtship status.

"It has not been the practice of the Bucks to have combat contests between men and women. It would not be fair. As you know, biological differences between the sexes prevent equal opportunity of outcome.

“Stella Brooks has been an exception. She developed her fighting skills with a passion and dedication that I have never seen in anyone else. Her physical strength, coordination, and reaction time are exceptional. Because of those capabilities, she became the youngest scout ever. She asked the Chief to let her be the opponent in the first combat contest for someone that wanted to court her. After a few contests, there were no more potential suitors.

“I am to tell you that Chief Brooks has declared that you and Stella are in Final Courtship. I am the judge of this Final Courtship and the Bucks with us are its Guardians. I have judged your fighting skills as worthy. Your recent actions have shown your character to Chief Brooks and me.”

Carlos answered, “Somehow, I don’t think that it is as simple as that. You understand I want Stella to be my mate for the rest of my life. But, Frank, I would like to know what you have not yet told me.”

Frank continued, “Stella knows nothing about this. I did not know until the Chief told me this morning. Stella is being informed and prepared by the women Bucks as we speak. We test men before they enter Right to Courtship. I told you that bandits believe that a woman must be submissive to her mate. A woman’s test is during the Final Courtship. She is tested for her submission and her desire to mate the man. When you return to your tent, you will find Stella naked and tied spread eagle on your bunk. She submits to this. At any point, should she not be willing, the courtship ends. It is Stella’s duty to please you for tonight and each night until the Final Courtship has passed. You can untie her and retie her as you please. But you must have her helpless in bondage by sunrise. You may make love, or have sex, as you will. The Final Courtship will continue only if you both agree each morning and you present Stella restrained to the Guardians.

“At sunrise, Guardians will enter your tent to ensure that you both still desire to continue the Final Courtship and to free Stella. During the day, she will proceed as normal until the evening meal, after which the Guardians will again return her to your tent or quarters and bind her. Each night the bondage will get more restrictive. If you have not restrained Stella by sunrise, that is your signal that you do not wish to go on the Final Courtship. Guardians will ask Stella if she wishes to continue. Do you have any questions?"

Carlos asked, “Will it always be the women Guardians?”

“Yes, Carlos, we will be careful that no man will see Stella naked. I know this Final Courtship is foreign to your thinking. You and Stella should find this fun. Try to keep that in mind. The men Guardians are security for Stella.”

“Oh, I will. I will. How long does the Final Courtship last?” The Medico answered, “Until I judge that you and Stella are right as mates. If the man and the woman show conviction in their desire to mate, it could be as short as three nights. If neither party has called the courtship off but the guardians or the judge sense a lack of dedication from one party or both, it can continue. I saw one Final Courtship continue for ten days and the Chief called them in for a talk. After the talk, the Chief declared the Final Courtship was over and they did not mate.”

“Carlos McTavrish, do you want to pursue this Final Courtship with Stella Brooks?”

“Medico Frank Stevens, I do with all my heart,” Carlos replied.

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In Carlos’ tent, the Bucks had told Stella that the Chief had declared that she and Carlos were in Final Courtship. Stella did not need explanations. She stripped and looked questioningly. They gestured toward the bunk and Stella climbed in. One of the Bucks murmured, “Spread eagle,” and Stella assumed the position. The Guardians tied her with considerable tension in her arms and legs to the corners of the bunk.

The Bucks giggled as they gagged her, and if her mouth had not been packed with cloth, Stella would have giggled with them. She was thrilled with this unexpected turn of events.
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That is one interesting courtship. Nothing like that happened when I proposed ;)
Great read, thank you yet again. I have this vision of Stella in my mind now, spreadeagled on the bed...
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slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago That is one interesting courtship. ...
Have to agree: most interesting development. The set-up in general is so very much my cup of tea! :)
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Currently I am several chapters behind. Work has been insane the past several weeks. I'll hopefully catch back up in the next few days.

While it doesn't matter if I'm tagged or not since I'll see the stories I comment on pop in the "your posts" link in the top left corner, I'll see the tagging quicker. So by all means, tag away!!
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we will be careful that no man will see Stella naked
This has never happened, of course. Interesting rituals.
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Two things about this chapter:

First I really liked that you wrote about Carmen and Ralph, its always good to see side characters getting their time and its even better if you write such great bondages sequences like you did with them.

Second, I really like the the idea of the "Final Courtship" thing, it may be pretty simple but considering what it is there's nothing I don't like about it.
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:o hope that can be sorted out soon! :shock:
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Fully caught up now. Since I was so far behind, I may have started over and binge read it this evening 😁. I must say I like this futuristic yet old west theme style of story!

Hopefully you won't be locked out of your account for to long. Looking forward to seeing this tail continue!!
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Right, I’ve binged for an hour this morning and not quite caught up yet, but still great progress from chapter 3 where I last saw it…

I echo all the positive comments you’ve received Greylord, and I’m looking forward to continuing reading it. Again, thank you for tagging me in each time. It’s a pleasure reading the TUGs element, but also the story. And a particular thank you for the pole tie and suncream orgasm. That was unique and holds a special place in my memory…

Not sure whether you’ll get back in or whether I’ll read the final chapters first, but posting this now in case it’s the former!
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Great Stuff @greylord! I have some catching up to do - and read the last Chapter more thourougly!
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For now, enjoy continuing the story.

Note from slackywacky: I can't update the title as I do not own the story, but at least we have a new chapter! Tnx.

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Chapter 11 – Ralph Rider Courts

As a good trek leader should, Ralph toured the entire spread out encampment, checking on the welfare of all. He visited the Hands, the Mounted Troops, and the Bucks. Carlos went with the Medico so he skipped the Medico’s tent and Carlos’ tent. It perplexed him that he had not found Carmen on his tour. The Bucks were to turn her over to him for the night. He stopped by his tent to review his actions before going to look for her. She had been in the custody of the Bucks but was not in sight as he had visited with the Bucks. He had noted that they seemed to be in very good moods, all of them.

Ralph entered his tent, startled by what he saw. His beautiful long-haired blonde lashed to a tent pole and gagged. The Bucks must have arranged this present for him.

“Hummph hummpph humm hummph,” Carmen said.

Ralph answered, “Let me get that gag. I think I can understand you a lot better then.”

He knelt in front of Carmen and reached behind her neck to untie the cleave gag. He removed the gag and reached in her mouth with his thumb and fingers to pull out the bandanna used to pack her mouth.

Carmen took only a moment to flex her jaw, gave Ralph a brilliant smile, and said, “Thank you, Boss Ralph. I promise not to complain. If my talking bothers you at all, you can gag me again.”

Ralph kissed her with one hand grasping her butt and the other hand grasping her breast. He could tell that she hungered for him, just as he hungered for her. He said, "Carmen, this pole interferes. Let's get you loose from it."

Soon she was free, and it took little time for her to remove her halter and shorts. She looked at him and questioned, “On the bunk? Or do you want me somewhere else?”

“I think that the bunk would be a wonderful place for us to continue,” Ralph answered. Carmen moved to the center of the bed and knelt, placing her hands behind her back.

“Carmen, do you want me to tie you back up?”

“You showed me how very good it can be with you in total control of me. Yes, I want you to tie me up.”

Ralph moved close behind her, cupping her breasts. She said, “That feels so fantastic. I may not know what the future holds for me but I wish that our time here could go on forever.”

Ralph started using his fingers to comb her hair, stopping occasionally to manipulate a breast or to tweak a nipple. Carmen could not stop a soft moan from escaping her lips now and then. Those little moans were music to Ralph’s ears. She asked, “Is my hair long enough for you?”

He answered, “Your beautiful hair hangs below your butt. Yes, it is just perfect. What would you like to do? Why don’t you pick what we do next?”

That was unexpected, Carmen thought. She said, “Okay, would you start by tying my ankles to my thighs?”

Soon, her ankles were tied to her thighs. "Now divide my hair three ways. Let the middle hang down my back. Take the left part and put it over my left shoulder and put the right part over my right shoulder.

Ralph took the left strand and did as she directed. He played with her left tit through her hair and then let it dangle between her legs. He did the same with the right strand. With his fingers, he combed the strand down her back for a while and then reached around and held her breasts again.

“Now what is next?”

Carmen had kept her hands behind her back so far. She said, “I trained very hard for the Comanche and I am very limber. Look how I can move my hands.”

She crossed her wrists and moved them until her forearms were parallel. She kept moving them higher until her hands were crossed between her shoulder blades. She said, “Pull my head back and wrap the middle strand of my hair around my wrists vertically. That will keep my hands high between my shoulders and keep my head pulled back.”

This left her looking almost straight up. She said, "Cinch the tie with the rest of that strand and then use string to tie the ends of my hair around a wrist so things won't come undone before you are ready to free me."

He complied and she said, “It is almost time for me not to be in charge any longer. Would you apply the gag now and take control?”

Ralph said, “Carmen, I will gag you. But first, while I have you here at my disposal, I want us to talk. Can we do that?”

“Yes, Boss. I am good for whatever you want.”

“Okay, you understand the Chief has assigned you to me. You probably do not know why or what I want you to do. We need to clear the air on this. Since I left Unihold, I have been trying to perfect the forging of a true katana blade. Do you understand why that is important?”

Carmen answered, “The few katanas that have survived from Earth are the most potent weapons on Newhome. They don’t break and are incredibly sharp. If you could make blades like that, you would control Newhome.”

“I knew you were a sharp cookie! Rider Ranch, the Bucks, and the Wagon Train have entered an alliance to make this happen. Medico Stevens says that Unihold will support us. Stella stole documents from me that are necessary for all of this. She is with us to recover and return those documents we call the Katana Documents. I think she is the key player in all of this. With those documents, I am close to being able to forge a true blade.

“But I need help. I will focus my attention on making blades. I need help with many routine things and that is why I asked the Chief to assigned you to me. The things that I need will not be difficult but you will have to learn new things. But this will not work if you are just looking for your chance to escape. I want you to commit to becoming my assistant.

“You follow the Comanche and bandit culture. I understand that calls for you to escape if you can. But you remember that Chief Brooks talked to your dad about new ways of doing things. And your dad agreed to try. One change must be for you to agree to help us. Will you do that? It will be for the Comanche and the alliance. And it will be for me.”

Carmen thought before responding, “Boss Ralph, I think I see your point. Can you give me until tomorrow morning to answer you? Until then, I pledge not to escape. Not that I have any chance of that right now, anyway. You have me tied up pretty good.”

“Yes, but it was at your instructions,” Ralph murmured, “There is one more thing I need to say. From the moment I saw you, I knew I had to make you mine. You are the most beautiful woman on Newhome. And I am finding you are intelligent as well. You are everything that I want. Think on that as you are making your decision.”

“I will, Ralph. Your feelings are not one way. After all, no one has tied me up with my hair before. You are a special man and I have not dared hope to be more than your slave. Now go ahead a gag me. I've talked too much."

Kneeling beside her, Ralph gave her a long, lingering kiss with one hand on her throat and the other on her back. Then he inserted the bandanna in her mouth and cleaved it with the other one. He eased her down until she was reclining on her back and arms. Carmen was limber and could do this with her knees and shins flat on the bunk.

“Carmen, there can be no further delay in fucking you.” He spread her legs apart to facilitate entry and inserted his cock into her very ready pussy.

Carmen was not in the best position to respond to Ralph’s thrusts. But she did what she could with joy and abandon. The pleasure spreading from her core overcame any discomfort in her arms, shoulders, and neck from the stringent bonds. Soon a crescendo of pleasure cascaded over both of them as a powerful orgasm shook each with emotions that were private yet shared.

Ralph stretched out beside Carmen and untied her gag while his strength returned. When she could talk, Carmen said, “That was a wonderful orgasm that you gave me, Boss. Do you have any more like that?”

“It will take a few minutes to recover. Then I hope to continue our play. Let’s turn you on your belly so I can free you from this reverse prayer hair tie.”

Carmen replied, “I want you to be in charge. Can you leave me tied like this a little longer?”

Ralph asked, “Doesn’t being tied like that hurt? I know you are a tough lady, but I don’t want to punish you. I want for us to both have pleasure.”

“Yes,” she answered. “This is not a comfortable tie and I feel the strain. But I think it has given you pleasure, and that gives me pleasure. You can massage my shoulders, arms, and neck. And anything else that pleases you. When your shaft stirs again, let me know.”

Ralph turned her on her stomach and sat up in the bunk with Carmen between his legs. Carmen's face was looking right at his cock but when he started massaging her trapezius muscles and her deltoids, she closed her eyes in pleasure. He encircled her triceps and biceps with his fingers and thumb and rubbed them up and down. Then he went to her forearms and did the same. He returned to her trapezius and repeated the process over and over. Carmen made those soft moans that drove him nearly crazy. He would break the pattern by sliding his hands between her back and arms and pressing down with the heel of his hands as he moved down to her butt. There he would knead her glutes before starting all over again. It was not long before he was erect once again, but he did not stop massaging her.

Carmen was almost groaning with the pleasure of his massage. That pleasure was much stronger than the discomfort of her hair tie. Finally, Carmen asked, “Haven’t you recovered yet?” after some time had passed. She opened her eyes and saw the answer in front of her. “Boss, I asked you to let me know when you had recovered.”

“Carmen, you seemed to enjoy what I was doing. I didn’t want to stop.”

She said, “That’s alright. I need your help now. You have me tied up and very helpless. Will you help me?”

He replied, “Of course, I will always help you. What do you want me to do?”

“Sit up and lean forward. Lower your cock to me. As you do that, take my arms to lift me and pull me forwards onto your cock. Once I have you in my mouth, you just relax and enjoy."

It took some experimentation, but they got it right. Carmen could only achieve a small amount of head motion. Moving her head forward pulled her hands even higher on her shoulders and they were already near their limit. He had already pulled her head back, just about as far as it would go. Her head motion was only centimeters. She made up for that by encasing his shaft with her lips and sucking as hard as she could. While doing that, she did everything that she could with her tongue to fondle and caress him.

In his state of arousal, it did not take long for his orgasm to erupt. Carmen swallowed, looking Ralph in the eye as she did.

Ralph untied the string fixing her hair in place and began unwrapping the loops of hair from her wrists. It was not until he removed the last loop that she could straighten out her neck and lower her hands. Ralph moved to her side and made sure her face was resting on the bunk. Then he lowered her hands to her butt and moved them to her sides on the bunk. Carmen could not help letting a groan as her arms straightened out.

She saw by the look on his face that it distressed him that he had hurt her. She said, “Boss Ralph, it is natural to have stiffness being held in one position like that. But I am not harmed. I am a Comanche and we are made of stern stuff.”

“Carmen, it bothers me that I enjoyed something so much that caused you distress. I don’t like that about myself.”

“Boss, you just have this wrong. A little groan doesn't mean distress. The Bucks had me in a tight spread eagle for hours before Stella had them tie me differently. That was getting to be distress. By the end of the day, it would have been. I think I need to show you, Boss, that I am not delicate. I can't do this without your help once more. Will you help me?"

“What do you want me to do?”

“First, tie my hands and elbows again. When you tie my elbows, I want you to pull them close together. Use some of that strength of yours. Will you do this?"

Ralph answered by doing what she asked. Then Carmen said, “Now pick me up and set me on my knees on the ground with my back to the tent pole.” When he did she continued, “Now take a long rope and tie one end to my hands. Put the other end through the ring at the top of the pole. Pull the rope through the ring and keep pulling until I ask you to stop.”

Soon most of the rope had passed through the ring and all the slack was out of the part of the rope from her hands to the ring. When he pulled more, it lifted her hand behind her and bent her forward at her hips. "Keep going," Carmen encouraged. Carmen was very limber, and she did not ask him to stop until the angle between her arms and her back was well over 100 degrees. "Tie the rope off to something to hold me in this position. You can see I am helpless with my ankles tied to my thighs, my elbows jammed together and my hands pulled high. The focal point of the stress is in my shoulders and the best that I can do is not move at all. Any movement adds to the stress. What I want now is for you to play rough with me. I have seen how much you love to play with my breasts. You have them completely exposed and available to you right now. Would you come and kneel in front of me? I want you to slap my tits around. Not as hard as you can, but hard enough to make me cry out and groan or gasp.

“Yes, it will hurt me. But I am sure that you will not hit me hard enough to harm me. It will hurt good. Please, Boss. Kneel in front of me."

“You must be a witch! You say do something and I do it, even if I don’t want to,” as he took the seiza position in front of her.

“Thank you, Boss. Now, play with my tits. Play rough.”

Ralph’s hands seemed to have minds of their own as each hand grabbed a tight grip on a tit and squeezed. He looked at her eyes, expecting to see a wish for him to stop. Instead, he saw a face that radiated joy and heard a soft moan. This made no sense to him.

His right hand released its prize and delivered a sharp open-handed slap to the side of her tit. His left hand twisted her nipple, pinching hard as it did. Carmen gasped at that.

“Carmen, you have made your point. This is not me! I admit I love to have you in bondage, even stringent bondage like you are now. I love playing with your bound body. But I don't like brutality either in others or myself. And that is what you are asking. So I am drawing a line that I won't cross."

“But Boss, even with that little rough play, you are erect. You see now that I am not delicate. I promise I will tell you if something you do hurts bad.”

“Okay, Carmen. You are not delicate. I love your body and I love your mind and spirit.”

“I love you, Boss Rider. Can I give a few more instructions? Let’s make the best use of this wonderful restrictive bondage you’ve put me in.”

He wondered what could she be thinking and said, “Tell me what you want.”

“Help me rotate so the pole is to my side and not my back. Then lift my outside leg and slide your hips under me and put your tool in me."

When he impaled her on his member, he found that the lift of her hands positioned her chest perfectly for him to fondle her breasts while he hunched his cock back and forth. Her ties prevented her from being anything but his receptacle but she was happy with that. He felt his climax approaching, and her breathing and moaning told him she approached as well.

He was lightly kneading her breasts as they recovered from their organisms. Carmen said, "If we do this tie again to make love, I would change one thing. I would have you put a quick-release on the rope that is holding my hands up. Then I could fold over you, resting my tits on your chest and my head on your shoulder while we regain our strength. But this was fine too!"

Ralph lifted her leg so he could withdraw. He lowered her hands and untied her elbows and hands.

Carmen was content. She was going to rethink her situation as a hostage. Somehow, this had become something more than she had ever anticipated. Ralph was such a strong, kind, and considerate man. She thought he might love her and she might be falling in love with him.

Next, after he untied her legs and lifted her to carry her to the bunk, he rubbed her arms and back and neck until she was fast asleep. He pulled the cover over her and climbed in and lay next to her.

He reached to the table beside the bunk and turned off the lantern. He was thinking, this wonderful woman is not a hostage. She is the woman for me for the rest of my life. I don’t know how I will work this out, but I know I will. I will convince her to commit to this project. Then I will convince her to commit to me.
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> You showed me how very good it can be with you in total control of me. Yes, I want you to tie me up.

Interesting, this chapter showed that Carmen was more in control than Ralph. Tying her they way she wanted. Yes, she might have been helpless and it looked though, but it was her own idea. Hard to complain if you selected the position yourself. Very nice update.
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slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago Interesting, this chapter showed that Carmen was more in control than Ralph. Tying her they way she wanted. Yes, she might have been helpless and it looked though, but it was her own idea. Hard to complain if you selected the position yourself. Very nice update.
Yes I found that interessting too: The bindee in control of the situation and very creative bondage I have to say. Carmen is guiding Ralph - and I liked the Katana-Part as well. All in all beauifully written and pretty intense! Let us hope, that @greylord can return soon!
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heavy, but intriguing stuff!
The sub is in the lead and that's what's defining consensuality, after all! Good job!

And I support @Caesar73: "Let us hope, that @greylord can return soon!"
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Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago Let us hope, that @greylord can return soon!
Would be nice if there was a reaction from the Admin at all :?: I can understand life gets busy at times and this board is probably not high on the list of things to maintain, but at least check messages sometime...

And it is not like a newby on the board asking stupid questions, GreyLord is well established by now.
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slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago
Would be nice if there was a reaction from the Admin at all :?: I can understand life gets busy at times and this board is probably not high on the list of things to maintain, but at least check messages sometime...

And it is not like a newby on the board asking stupid questions, GreyLord is well established by now.
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slackywacky wrote: 2 years ago
Would be nice if there was a reaction from the Admin at all :?: I can understand life gets busy at times and this board is probably not high on the list of things to maintain, but at least check messages sometime...

And it is not like a newby on the board asking stupid questions, GreyLord is well established by now.
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Sounds like a prime example of topping from the bottom 🤣. Though, is that a bad thing? Atleast it's 100% consensual that way 😀

I am glad Slacky and Greylord worked out a way to post new chapters for the time being. Though without a doubt, it'll be nicer once Greylord can resume control of his account.

On that note, I can understand the frustration of some believing admin is not fixing this quickly enough. However, we do not know what's going on in the admins lives. This is a not for profit site therefore this is not a high priority when everyday life is busy. With me being self employed I can truly understand that. Work and life in general for me during this pandemic has gotten super busy. Even not during a pandemic, pending on what I have going on, I can literally disappear from this site for weeks to months. So let's just hope admin will fix this soon and they find someone to help out with any other issues that may arise!
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Red86 wrote: 2 years ago On that note, I can understand the frustration of some believing admin is not fixing this quickly enough. However, we do not know what's going on in the admins lives. This is a not for profit site therefore this is not a high priority when everyday life is busy. With me being self employed I can truly understand that. Work and life in general for me during this pandemic has gotten super busy. Even not during a pandemic, pending on what I have going on, I can literally disappear from this site for weeks to months. So let's just hope admin will fix this soon and they find someone to help out with any other issues that may arise!
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It is really a shame yout got logged out of your account. Could you also (temporarily) make a new one? I would think the admins would understand that. Otherwise, who have you mailed? It seems like a pretty small problem that perhaps also a mod can resolve, and I cannot imagine all of them not logging in.

Then onto the story: It is curious to see that Carmen now plays the lead role in a chapter and will be developed into a full character. This story seems not to stop soon.
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Beaumains wrote: 2 years ago It is really a shame yout got logged out of your account. Could you also (temporarily) make a new one? I would think the admins would understand that. Otherwise, who have you mailed? It seems like a pretty small problem that perhaps also a mod can resolve, and I cannot imagine all of them not logging in.
While that would be an idea, unfortunately I highly doubt that'll work. I'm pretty sure it's the emailing system that's not working. In order to register, you need a valid email address that the system uses to email you the verification link. That's what's broken. It's the same way you would reset your password which I believe is why some users are getting locked out. I also think the email that's listed on the main page is monitored by only one individual (I could be wrong), therefore you have to wait for that admin to check their email. I'm assuming there's a glitch in the system that the main admin doesn't know how to fix which why they posted the message on the main screen looking for someone to help with troubleshooting.
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Hello, [mention]TayDay95[/mention], [mention]Caesar73[/mention], [mention]wolfman[/mention], [mention]Beaumains[/mention], [mention]slackywacky[/mention], [mention]banshee[/mention], [mention]NotSeen[/mention], [mention]FabianStr2016[/mention], [mention]Red86[/mention], [mention]tickletied84[/mention], [mention]Boundcurious[/mention], and [mention]Nainur[/mention]

Moments ago, I found that my account is active once more. For this, a big thank you to [mention]chadmc90[/mention]. Also another big thank you to [mention]slackywacky[/mention] without whom I wouldn't have been able to send Chapter 11 to you.

I was able, of course, to read your posts and they have been heart warming. Tomorrow, I will strive to make more specific replies while getting Chapter 12 ready to post.

My thanks to you and all of my readers for sticking with me during this glitch.
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