The Officer's Wife, Parts 1-5 (M/F)

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Re: The Officer's Wife, Part 1 (M/F)

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Great start. I look really forward to the continution!
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Can’t wait for the next instalment
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[mention]Keeperquiet[/mention] what a great job! Love it!
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This was a really great beginning, well done! Look forward to the next part :)
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[mention]Keeperquiet[/mention] Good that you posted the two chapters in one thread - and as I wrote you are doing a good job : Looks like Bill has plans for the Officer´s Wife, the question is, what they might be? Just continue the good work!
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You are looking good, [mention]Keeperquiet[/mention]. Excellent writing and a fascinating tale. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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[mention]Keeperquiet[/mention] Two Thumbs Up! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Wow, you created a really creepy atmosphere: the rain, the fear of the hostage and exquisite descriptions [mention]Keeperquiet[/mention] - you do a very good job, keep up the good work! And the cliffhanger is a fine one: what is she seeing?
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Post by Bigballgag1 »

Just caught up with this one and I just wanted to say it is really good so far. I like the pathetic fallacy effect of the weather matching the mood. I wonder what twisted ideas Bill has in store for Kate? Looking forward to the next part. :)
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Caesar73 wrote: 1 year ago Wow, you created a really creepy atmosphere: the rain, the fear of the hostage and exquisite descriptions @Keeperquiet - you do a very good job, keep up the good work! And the cliffhanger is a fine one: what is she seeing?
Thank you, [mention]Keeperquiet[/mention], for your continuation of this story. I second @Caesar73, you have packed in the atmosphere and given us a wonderful DID. Looking for the next installment with great anticipation.
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Nice. Looking forward to seeing what happens to Kate next. What her husband and his colleagues will do to find her. A Wild West shoot out only after Bill has had his fun. At her expense. Weeks, or even months as a captive. The option are so many. The fun so tempting. Keep it up
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Keeperquiet wrote: 1 year ago @GreyLord thank you! Your feedback is my motivation to keep it coming. :D
Keep it going :) You are doing a great job!
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[mention]Keeperquiet[/mention] Great storytelling! It’s so much more than “here’s how sh was tied up”. It’s an enjoyable read. Suspense is building nicely!
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Wow, this is truly a very well written story! Love the dual perspective and the suspense you manage to build up throughout! Looking forward to the next part!
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Wow! That was a tense chapter and one must feel sorry for the poor captive! Three years in the hands of this scoundrel ... beautifully done! We learn finally what the bad Guy is up to! Please continue [mention]Keeperquiet[/mention] !

I noticed that the title still reads Parts 1 - 3 :) That happens at times, so no trouble
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That was super charged, [mention]Keeperquiet[/mention]. Kate is in dire straights. I hope this ass makes a mistake and Kate can reverse the roles.
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I’m truly enjoying this tale. The thought of twisted revenge. On someone much loved but truly innocent. While out in the storm her husband desperately seeks out her abductor. The man he quite rightly put in jail where he belonged. The tension. The cliffhangers. Awesome [mention]Keeperquiet[/mention]
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Well done, [mention]Keeperquiet[/mention]. You wrapped up the story, maintaining tension and interest to the very end. You have left the door open for a sequel, which I hope you will write. Mitch and Kate are great protagonists.
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Post by Caesar73 »

That was the perfect way to wrap this story. This finish was intense. It was dramatic. And there was that last paragrpah, when Kate reflected above her ordeal and the consequences.
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