The Saleswoman’s Deal M/F

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JulieG wrote: 1 year ago Thanks @Bigballgag1 I rather hope the next episode,will not explain everything but just heighten the mystery. I’d also love to see someone join Jenny tied up in underwear. But Karla or Danny, who,knows?
Thanks glad you enjoyed! There are plenty of twists still to come i assure you, who knows what can happen and what further mysteries there may be to come! ;)
CarouselCowboy13 wrote: 1 year ago This is a great and awesome chapter. Can't wait to see and read what happens next
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it! :)
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[mention]Bigballgag1[/mention] Fascinating story! I am enjoying it very much!
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Mr Underheel wrote: 1 year ago @Bigballgag1 Fascinating story! I am enjoying it very much!
Thank you! Glad you are, next part should be out soon! :)
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Hi all, thanks once again for all the comments and support it is much appreciated! This next part is slightly shorter as it seemed the perfect place to stop. Hope you enjoy! :)


Karly parked up in a lay-by roughly 10 minutes from the office. The glare from her phone screen and the dull faint taps of her fingers broke up the otherwise dark, lonely surroundings. She was sending a text to Danny hoping for further instructions.

She was still digesting exactly what she had just done. Part of her still felt guilty and worried. Had she really done all her homework? What if she is pulled over? What if Danny never replies again? This could all potentially have been for nothing.

Then there was the feeling of shame. Was she really doing all this just to satisfy some guy who tied her up and she happened to like it? She used to have pride. Maybe it was the unique situation and attention she was attracted to.

On the other hand Karly couldn’t help breaking into the occasional smile with her new found confidence. This had been fun in a dark kind of way. This could potentially be her only opportunity to kidnap somebody and see how it feels. She had certainly realised films and tv shows do not depict how much work would really have to go into a kidnap.

5 minutes went by and Karly was beginning to get that uneasy feeling in the pit of her stomach. Something felt off. Maybe he was busy?

Wanting to stretch her legs she stepped out of the vehicle and proceeded around to the back. She opened the trunk as quietly as she could to peek in on her captive and check she was ok.

At least, thats what she thought she would do. Her face grew increasingly pale at the sight before her or rather the lack of a sight. Jenny was gone. In her place was a briefcase. What was going on?

She carefully unfastened the two clips on the exterior of the black suitcase and took a step back at what was inside. She welled up. Reaching in she picked up several bundles.

Karly had never seen so much cash. After counting each bundle she worked out there was 25k in there. Her mouth was open.

She began to feel queasy. What had she done? Sure the cash would solve her problems financially for a while but this was not the deal. She feared for Jenny’s safety and increasingly her own.

Taking her phone she rang Danny repeatedly hoping he would answer. Did he know? Or had Jenny been taken by a third party? Whatever the answer Karly could not help feeling completely played.
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Oh, this is interesting. Any number of things could be going on. Karly could be getting played by all parties involved, and, yes, this also includes Jenny. This is a fun read thus far. Depending on what happens next, though, Karly might want to consider getting out of commission sales.
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Things just got really interesting and scary! And Business certainly has picked up! Great and Awesome chapter
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Well I’ve been away for a little while and then returned to discover this finely written little tale with more twists and turns than your average race track. Great read. Looking forward to seeing what may occur next and what life has in store for the currently confused and bewildered Karly
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The G-Man wrote: 1 year ago Oh, this is interesting. Any number of things could be going on. Karly could be getting played by all parties involved, and, yes, this also includes Jenny. This is a fun read thus far. Depending on what happens next, though, Karly might want to consider getting out of commission sales.
Thank you! Indeed there are many angles this could be spun with some more harmless than others :)
CarouselCowboy13 wrote: 1 year ago Things just got really interesting and scary! And Business certainly has picked up! Great and Awesome chapter
Thank you! It certainly has, its a nice bonus in a time of need if you excuse how it was obtained! :)
Bandit666 wrote: 1 year ago Well I’ve been away for a little while and then returned to discover this finely written little tale with more twists and turns than your average race track. Great read. Looking forward to seeing what may occur next and what life has in store for the currently confused and bewildered Karly
Glad to see you back! Thank you :) I love the analogy :lol:
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Loving this story
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This story just keeps getting better
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0Kay wrote: 1 year ago This story just keeps getting better

Indeed is does. Yes, there is a play underway. It is just not clear what that play is yet.
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Dpsiic wrote: 1 year ago Loving this story
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying :)
0Kay wrote: 1 year ago This story just keeps getting better
Thank you! Glad you think so :)
GreyLord wrote: 1 year ago [quote=0Kay post_id=137549 time=<a href="tel:1662066950">1662066950</a> user_id=92611]
This story just keeps getting better

Indeed is does. Yes, there is a play underway. It is just not clear what that play is yet.
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Thank you! There would appear to be but as you say it depends what the play actually is :)
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Still not getting an answer Karly cut her losses and returned home. She parked on her driveway as she would do normally and walked in. It was a still, cold night. Not a sound could be heard.

She walked in and slipped her shoes off. She put the case of money in her coffee table and took a seat on her sofa. For now she just stared at it. She was unsure what to do. She reached down to her nylon clad feet and massaged her arches. She was unsure just what she had become embroiled in and what the end result could be.

Pouring herself a glass of wine she steadied herself. Her hands shook a little. Her mind racing to unlikely scenarios. What if someone had seen her take Jenny? With the large volume of cash and a police raid it would not take too long to piece together a compelling case. Then of course there is the idea that an opportunist struck lucky watching Jenny being kidnapped and decided to intercept the deal.

Reasoning with herself that there was nothing else she could do about the events of this evening for now she retired to her bed to get some sleep. She hid the money in a safe place.

Karly had a long warm shower, something she felt she needed to help her relax. She dried herself down with a towel just as anyone would normally do. It was then she thought she saw something out the corner of her eye through the open bathroom door. She paused. Reflected. Then she shrugged her shoulders. She assumed it was her mind playing tricks on her as it had already been a long day.

Wrapping the thick white towel around her body she made her way into her bedroom. Her instinct kicked in. Something wasn’t right here. It may just be paranoia. It may just be fatigue. No, this was different.

As she paused in thought in the middle of her bedroom she soon got her confirmation something was amiss.

A gloved hand clamped over her mouth from behind. Before she knew it or could even put up much of a defence she had been pinned facing a nearby wall.

“Make a sound and i hurt you.” The voice whispered as Karly nodded. She was scared but also inwardly getting excited about the exchange. Who was this? Her heart raced but she did not put up much of a fight. There was also the absence of knowing whether her attacker had a weapon.

Karly felt the gloved hand remove itself from her lips. She had just enough time to remoisten them with her tongue before a purple ballgag was slotted between her teethe expertly and strapped tightly behind her head.

Her body was pushed forward again roughly. Her face being squeezed against the wall as her arms were brought behind her back. She could feel a coil of rope being secured tightly around her wrists. Soon her elbows were also tied together.

A black blindfold was the next item used on her before she was spun around. Everything was being done at speed but also with intricate care to get it right.

“Mpppphh” she finally protested. This was due to the towel, the one item covering her intimate areas, had been ripped roughly from her body leaving her naked.

Two ropes were soon being secured above and below her breasts before a couple more around the shoulders created a secure breast harness. Once the breast harness was complete she could feel a rope being secured around her waist. A strand soon went between her legs before being looped back again. It soon formed a neat tight crotch rope which was cinched into place.

Whoever this was knew exactly what they were doing.

In what was an inevitable act, Karly soon felt her ankles pulled together and the next rope cinching them into plsce. Ropes followed around her shins, lower knees, upper knees and finally around her thighs. When the final knot was secured the contemplation of movement was non existent. She was well and truly stuck.

“Hop” was the simple instruction that broke the silence. A firm spank on her ass indicated this was no time to mess about.

Karly could feel herself guided so she wouldn’t fall by the gloved hands. Humiliated and helpless to resist, Karly began slowly hopping and shuffling towards the landing. From there they slowly made their way down the stairs. Then it was left, through the kitchen going from Karly’s inner judgement of her house.

A cold very slight breeze brought a chill over Karly’s body. There was no pause for shoes. Instead she made her way hopping out to the back garden. She could feel the cold concrete slabs in her garden. Then followed the dew covered grass. Then the creak of her garden gate indicated she was heading out of her house.

The ground beneath her feet now was rougher indicating tarmac. She was gestured to pause finally as she heard the clunk of a car trunk door being lifted.

What puzzled her was that as she was lifted into the trunk of the car she could feel not one but two sets of gloved hands.

Once she was contained in the trunk one of her captors took a final act of putting her into a tight hogtie. She grunted and mpph3 in response but it was no use. She had been captured efficiently, expertly and made totally helpless.

The trunk door soon slammed shut. The music on the car radio was loud blocking out most other sound. The next thing she felt was the car driving off, taking her to her intended destination.
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Very Nice
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Beautifully written. Masterful continual buildup of tension. A great TUG. First rate work, [mention]Bigballgag1[/mention].
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Aha here we go! Loving it! Keep going!
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CarouselCowboy13 wrote: 1 year ago Very Nice
Thank you! :)
GreyLord wrote: 1 year ago Beautifully written. Masterful continual buildup of tension. A great TUG. First rate work, [mention]Bigballgag1[/mention].
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. We are hopefully getting to the stage where some answers will be revealed! :)
Switcher1313 wrote: 1 year ago Aha here we go! Loving it! Keep going!
Thank you! Glad to hear it. More revelations to come in the next part ;)
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My guess is a collab between Danny and Jenny. If so, their motive escapes me. Looking forward to the next part where things will be revealed...I hope. 8-)
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Switcher1313 wrote: 1 year ago My guess is a collab between Danny and Jenny. If so, their motive escapes me. Looking forward to the next part where things will be revealed...I hope. 8-)
Thank you! Indeed it will be interesting to see if your prediction is correct or not! :)
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The journey in the back of the car had been bumpy, rough and at the same time exhilarating. That familiar exciting feeling around being tied up was coming back. She didn’t know who had kidnapped her, why and what the plan for her was. However she tried to ignore this and enjoy the moment. It was all she could really do in her tight predicament.

The music was turned up loud limiting her hearing anything her captors might say. Eventually she felt herself thrown against the back seat as the car stopped suddenly. It then carried on a short distance further before screeching to a halt on a gravel driveway.

She lay there and expected to feel that cool night air on her skin but she was left waiting. She heard two doors clunk open and then shut. However to her surprise the car was locked from the outside.

This was unusual. Unsure just what was happening or where she even was she began to struggle snd test her bonds a little more seriously. It was futile though as no knots were in reach and every rope seemed to be tied perfectly.

Karly had soon lost track of time but it was around an hour before the car was finally unlocked. The trunk was opened. Karly could not see anything due to her blindfold still in place but she felt her purple ballgag lowered for the moment. A bottle held to her lips in silent. Trusting it was a drink she took the opportunity to quench her thirst.

At an estimate she must have drank around 500ml before the bottle was replaced by the ballgag once again. It was all done so she could not talk.

Two sets of hands once again lifted her from the back of the chair before placing her on some kind of flatbed trolley. This was certainly humiliating as she appeared to be carted about like a sack of potatoes. She was soon being wheeled across the rough terrain. The trolley provided little resistance to the constant bumping of the gravel underneath. One of the back wheels squeaked perhaps indicating this was not a new trolley or was not supposed to be for a person’s weight.

The gravel underneath soon abruptly ended being replaced by a less juddery surface. It was still outdoors so must be mud or soil, perhaps even grass.

The trolley soon stopped less than 5 minutes later. Karly’s ears, a heightened sense whilst blindfolded, heard the sound of a fairly large wooden door. It scraped slightly on what sounded like concrete. A second door did exactly the same. She was then wheeled inside whatever this building was.

The trolley soon stopped once again before the gloved hands picked up her body and placed her up in the air presumably on a sort of table. She was about 1.5 metres off the ground. Still hogtied. Fully on display.

She tried to reach for her bonds again. Not a chance. She began to breath deeply, the anticipation of the unknown settling in.

Nothing happened for a few minutes apart from the footsteps stepping away before they returned.

Without warning, Karly was thrust into a state of panicked laughter. She felt a set of fingers scrape across her bare soles. Those that knew her closely knew she was heavily ticklish.

“Noppph nppph plepph” Karly pleaded before the fingers did it again. Then again. Finally they tickled her feet without mercy. She bucked, struggled and strained but could do little to avoid it. She descended into manic laughter behind her ballgag. Tears of forced joy filled her eyes. It didnt take long for sweat to glisten on her body.

After around 10 minutes it stopped as abruptly as it started. Karly lay panting, sweating but having enjoyed herself even though it had been enforced. She was beginning to grow into her submissive state once again and noted she did not feel threatened. Surely if her captor had sinister motives she would have felt much more pain or unpleasantness by now.

She soon got her answer as her blindfold was untied and removed. It took her eyes a little while to adjust to her surroundings. As suspected she was in some form of converted garage. The light was not great as it was still night. Dim lights on the wall created an intimate setting. She then noted just what this room had been converted to.

One third of the room, about the size of a double garage, had been converted into a prison cell. Black metal bars ran from the floor to the ceiling. Inside was a nice bed, not your typical prison style bed but...oddly nice. It was a double with nice plump pillows and metal barred head and footboards. There was also a small bathroom. The decor of the walls too was oddly grand with expensive wallpaper and plush red carpet.

In the middle of the room was the table she found herself on. It was an oak dining table. On the floor next to it was a glass open bottom box. Her mind soon worked out this was some kind of top to a display case.

The final third of the room had a window, barred from the outside but still fairly large. Around the window was a series of shelves and storage boxes. The contents she could see gave a clue to the room’s purpose and perhaps why she was here. She spotted ropes galore, different tapes, vet wrap, ballgags, sex toys and other things. There was even a straight jacket hanging on the wall.

Finally her eyes looked up to the figure which remained by her head. It was joined by a second figure who wrapped their arm around the first. Karly’s eyes just could not calculate what she could see.

“Welcome home.” Danny smiled. “I’ll keep the gag in for now. Well done for capturing Jenny. You showed you were serious and loyal. I respect that.” His hand wrapped around the waist of Jenny who was wearing a black spandex catsuit.

“You did. I was really stuck, you really are serious about this aren’t you!” She grinned. She was oblivious to the humiliated contained rage rising from deep inside Karly. She couldn’t help feeling used, deceived and taken for a ride. How could she have been so gullible? Unless of course there was an ulterior motive here she was yet to hear. This was not what she had in mind.
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I had a feeling that it was a double cross. What does Jenny have in store for Karly. And will Danny save Karly
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I am no stranger to being wrong, [mention]Bigballgag1[/mention]. That they could all become best friends nags at my mind. Naturally there are countless other possibilities.
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Aha! I was right! But we still need to hear the motives of the two kidnappers. Whose plan was this? And why?

I love it! Keep going!

Oh and you inspired me to get started on a new story as well. Hope you'll check it out. :D

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CarouselCowboy13 wrote: 1 year ago I had a feeling that it was a double cross. What does Jenny have in store for Karly. And will Danny save Karly
Thanks for the comment! I’m sure all that will be revealed! :)
GreyLord wrote: 1 year ago I am no stranger to being wrong, [mention]Bigballgag1[/mention]. That they could all become best friends nags at my mind. Naturally there are countless other possibilities.
Thank you for the comment! That could well be too simple an ending but other circumstances and benefits may mean the three might be able to put aside at least some of their differences!
Switcher1313 wrote: 1 year ago Aha! I was right! But we still need to hear the motives of the two kidnappers. Whose plan was this? And why?

I love it! Keep going!

Oh and you inspired me to get started on a new story as well. Hope you'll check it out. :D

https://www.tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=18532
Thank you! I’m sure that will all be to come with a few more twists and turns to come!

Thats good to hear, the title sounds interesting and i’ll definitely give it a read when i have a spare moment! :)
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Yup, had a feeling Karly was getting played, and that Jenny might have one of the players here. Interesting to see what's in store for our saleswoman here now.
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