Re: Capture Club (F/M, FM/F, FM/F, M/F, F/M, M/F, MM/FF, F/F...etc.)
Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2023 3:13 pm
That was a very good update. Too bad Erica doesn’t untie poor Trent
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Questions are always welcome. Dale somewhat addresses this in chapter one. He says:GreyLord wrote: ↑1 year ago A question, if I may. A captor cannot interfere with an active escape attempt. Say a captive is being 'tortured' by tickling. The captive strains to loosen the ropes and stretches to reach knots. Does the tickling not interfere with the escape? NOT nitpicking. Just trying to understand this great game.
I'll admit that it's a bit of a gray area. They try to have a rule for everything but most disputes are handled in a friendly way amongst players. The rules are there to induce less adventurous people into feeling comfortable. The eventual goal is that as players become more comfortable with each other, the rules will be waived and more serious games can occur. Elisa is going to spend Chapters 14 and 18 trying to shed some rules."There's a line between the obligatory understanding that your captive gets to attempt to escape unimpeded and that you do get to try to torture and humiliate them. You can tickle your captive for the full three hours if you want. Whether their lungs can handle that...I guess that depends on them. However, you can't physically hold them or prevent their escape beyond what your ropework or tapework is doing."
[mention] S-BabyO [/mention]S-BabyO wrote: ↑1 year ago Just saw your recent question answer Fandango and already building up Elisa again by saying she is going to shed more rules in future chapters WOW (from memory she tied Abbie with the mean lotus tie with the dirty socks), can't wait to read them and I have a question of my own can the captors take away other senses from their capture? (EG- blindfold for sight but obviously not take away their escape potential)
That's fair enough I don't want to change your story as it is already very good and you are an amazing writer, I can't wait (but will with abated breath) to read all the upcoming chapters, and see this story earn the more adult side you alluded too.Fandango wrote: ↑1 year ago@ S-BabyOS-BabyO wrote: ↑1 year ago Just saw your recent question answer Fandango and already building up Elisa again by saying she is going to shed more rules in future chapters WOW (from memory she tied Abbie with the mean lotus tie with the dirty socks), can't wait to read them and I have a question of my own can the captors take away other senses from their capture? (EG- blindfold for sight but obviously not take away their escape potential)
Sure. Blindfolds are absolutely allowed. You'll see them entering the game in upcoming chapters. Chapter 16 has Trent blindfolding Erica. Chapter 17 has Abbie blindfolding Trent. And Chapter 22 has Sam blindfolding Courtney. The reason I don't use them that often is because I'm personally not a huge fan of blindfolds since I like seeing a captive's eyes. But they have their place. And I'm always interested in hearing what readers want to see coming down the pipe. I'm still writing chapters and am always interested to hear requests and thoughts and to see if they might work for the story. I know where I'm going with the major arcs, but I'll solicit ideas and suggestions eventually.
There is also an upcoming chapter where a captive is given headphones blaring music to disorient them. Not quite sensory deprivation. More sensory overload. But along the same lines.
As far as the "rules" go. The "rules" were always meant to be dropped eventually. As players become more comfortable, they'll make agreements and make their own rules. I just felt that it was not within my experience for players to go from 0-100 to start. There needs to be some semblance of trust to keep the game in the spirit that I want it to be in. Abbie getting mad over the sock gag was not because I don't like sock gags. It was more to establish that a player had a limit and see how other players respected it. Sock gags are definitely a thing that will be prevalent in this story. You'll see sock gags in Chapter 13 and Chapter 15. Some rules will stay for good. Others will fall by the wayside. This story will eventually get steamy enough to earn it's place in the "Fictional Stories for ADULTS" section. I'm just going to get there very slowly.
I could not agree more!charliesmith wrote: ↑1 year ago Great update. I am going to miss Courtney getting bound by Trent for 3 week ?! Or would we see her captured by other characters?
If inquiring minds need to know, then who am I to not inform them? [mention]charliesmith[/mention] is certainly onto something. Trent has promised not to capture Courtney for three whole weeks. I expect him to keep his word. But there is absolutely no rule against somebody else capturing Courtney and giving her to Trent as a present.
I’m glad you like her. By the start of Junior year, Capture Club will have ten members (4M / 6F) and if you strapped me into a lie detector…Courtney is probably still my favorite also.charliesmith wrote: ↑1 year ago Courtney is rivalling Elisa and Jackie for being my favourite female character in your story. She is quite the domme! I am loving it so far. Hoping the read the rest of the parts very soon, can’t wait
You’re 100% correct. Trent is VERY concerned with what people think of him. I like to think that all humans are. But for Trent it’s something that might weigh on him unnecessarily. My thoughts were that there is only so much embarrassment that somebody can suffer between two people. And public humiliation is going to remain an absolute No-No for Trent, even when other rules fall by the wayside. So the easiest way around this was to make his humiliation a public spectacle for those that he is legally allowed to be humiliated in front of. Having other characters there does also play into their motivations and development. Jackie is just happy to see two of her good friends getting along. And by getting along I do mean tightly binding, gagging, and mercilessly taunting each other. But this was also a show that was important for Abbie. She's used to absolutely hating her time in ropes. So seeing that there are captors in the game who possess a degree of nuance in how they deal with captives and that a player who has always enjoyed being dominant might actually like being on the other end of the ropes will give her a lot of food for thought. These people are going to be spending too much time tied up for all of them (minus Jackie) to not enjoy it on occasion.
Thanks for the compliment. I had initially planned this to be a full F/M chapter. I wasn't planning on bringing in Erica at first but decided to add her for three reasons. First, I wanted a way to show that Courtney doesn't treat all captives the same. It felt like an apt way to illustrate that she'll use your own actions against you. She's more fearsome that way, when you know that good behavior equates to leniency and bad behavior equates to increased torment. Second, I wanted to illustrate that not everybody in the club are friends yet. Erica betrayed Trent. And she really doesn't have any qualms about it. Trent is a guy that she plays tie-up games with. They don't hang out on the side. Jackie is Trent's friend. Dale is Trent's friend. Even Elisa is Trent's friend. But Courtney, Abbie, and Erica are still new to him. And he hasn't even met Sam yet. Third, I looked at my story and realized that if Erica didn't show up I'd be going 10 chapters without her (from 6-16) and I don't like to let any character fall by the wayside for that long. If you're in the club I want to have you involved (he says with a straight face while we still haven't seen Sam in 12 chapters).
Thank you very much. I want to be able to go anywhere with a chapter and it helps to have characters that give me that versatility. I've tried to base them all on relationships that I have in my real life and make sure that each person provides a different dynamic for Trent to explore.
This is great! And I love to hear it. I really hope that you do start writing your own story. I love coming to this board and seeing new authors getting started. I'm fascinated by how people view all aspects of tie-up games and bondage adventures. I have my way of seeing things, but I want to see how other people view this sort of thing. There are a lot of great stories on this site, but we can always use more. The more uniquely crafted content the better. I wish everybody wrote. I think that people think it's a lot harder than it is. And maybe it is. I don't want to tell you that it's easy. But I find it very relaxing and enjoyable. The hardest part for me is finding time to write. I don't want to paint a picture of story craft that isn't correct. So I'd like to say that I seem like I update a lot, but the truth is that I'd simply been banking stories for quite a while before I ever started posting. I probably only write one part of a chapter per week. Eventually I'll run out of runway and have to take a break to catch up. Life gets busy. And that's great. That's preferable. But I recommend working out a story if you've got the bug. And whether you decide to start posting it in three hours, three months, or three years...I hope you do decide that writing is something you'd like to take a crack at. I'm glad you're enjoying the board.
From our perspective, I do think it's easy to say that he should have seen it coming. But I also think that he knew what the reactions of the other girls would be if she did, so he thought that she wouldn't. Erica seemed oblivious to the vitriol that it would evoke. She broke an UNWRITTEN rule of Captive Code. Even if your fellow captive is not your ally...you free them if there was collaboration on escape attempt. I do enjoy the trope of people not obeying that rule in stories...but it does always turn me against the traitor. They become a villain. Erica has to bare that scarlet letter for now and I think she's a little ashamed of it.Rtj65 wrote: ↑1 year ago Courtney proving again why she's a great addition with the way she handled that situation. I think Trent should have seen that coming a mile off though - if he really wanted to cooperate he and Erica should have taken turns with each other's knots, but I think his overconfidence got to him here. He's long overdue some torture time though so I'm not complaining!
That's not a bad idea, GreyLord. I have stated what some of the player's majors are in future chapters. Dale is a chemistry major. Trent is a political science major. Jackie is a nursing major. But I haven't really given a thought to what Courtney would be. Pre-Law seems right up her alley. As for Elisa's position on Trent's list...I don't think he's too eager to mess with her. He's still in the red from Chapter 9 when he let Abbie shove four different people's socks in her mouth. He's going to let Elisa cool off a little bit before he goes and tries to capture her again.GreyLord wrote: ↑1 year ago Did you mention that Court is planning on becoming a lawyer? I am left wondering what Courtney really thought of her time as Trent's captive. I would guess the Elisa is at the top of Trent's list of women to capture. He certainly owes her substantially. Very well done, [mention]Fandango[/mention].
I think I agree with this sentiment and it's something that I'm certainly going to explore. It's easier to push harder on somebody in this type of game when both of you know that it's coming from a position of caring.DommeKirsten wrote: ↑1 year ago Great chapter. Its hard to switch personality up and down. Sometimes it's not easy to play the bitch
But for me it is,easier to be sadistic to those you like most...
Thanks. All of these characters should be pretty likeable...for now. Most characters will get their turn as the villain though. Trent, Abbie, and Courtney will certainly overstep some boundaries and find themselves in the hot seat for not obeying rules or mistreating other players in unacceptable ways. They'll all let you down eventually. Even Jackie has an arc this year where she lets jealousy and insecurity cloud her judgement. And we'll also get to see the more mature and compassionate side of Elisa before too long. I definitely appreciate that you are sorting the players into Good Guys/Gals and Bad Guys/Gals. I just hope that they don't get too comfortable on their given teams.
Thank you very much for the reply. No need to apologize for a lengthy reply. I'm always looking for feedback. I read and internalized the whole thing but I have clipped it down here for my response. First, I'm glad that you're excited for Abbie. She is trying to improve. She DESPERATELY wants to be a dominant player. She just needs to develop. And develop in a lot of ways. Trent has ropework skills. He can teach her those. And he will teach her those. That's Step 1. But she also needs to develop confidence and social shrewdness. Trent is probably not the one to teach her about confidence since he is constantly in his head as a second guessing nervous wreck. But Abbie is a long term project. I do want to transform her. She makes such a great submissive. And I want people to enjoy her on that level while they can. But she wants to be a domme...and I think that she can get there. I kind of introduced her in an intentionally pathetic state in Chapter 2. She was thoroughly helpless and angry at the girl she only marginally knew who had deceived her and terrified of the guy that she didn't know who got control of her. Elisa tied her up and didn't even bother to play with her herself. She was used as a reconciliation party favor. That has to be particularly humiliating. But by Senior Year I have a feeling that the other players might be telling new members..."Don't Fuck with Abbie Wolfe."S-BabyO wrote: ↑1 year ago the most memorable line for me in the chapter was Abbie saying she was watching Youtube to improve her rope skills so adorable in the fact that she is trying her best and hopefully comes out towards the end with some impressive captures under her belt...Erica or (& maybe) Elisa (i get them confused sometimes sorry ) 'breaks' Trent...feel free to say bugger off because your writing is already amazing if your ever find yourself in writers blog you could try a spin-off of capture club focusing on other characters with more of a focus from their POV other than Trent, E.g - Courtney takes control of Dale idk haha your writing is very impressive truthfully