Fantastic story!! I’m a big fan of blanket mummification and facesitting, so it’s nice to see a story incorporate both.
Keep up the good writing!
Snug and Warm (F/m)
No need to apologize! I think every story needs at least some detail added to it, you can’t just jump right to the tie ups off the bat.
You’re pace for the opening of the story and setting the scene was really good, it didn’t drag on. You built up some nice anticipation through the opening half of your story
You’re pace for the opening of the story and setting the scene was really good, it didn’t drag on. You built up some nice anticipation through the opening half of your story
This is great! Blanket mummification isn't usually one of my hot buttons but you've made it quite interesting.
Do I see little shards of writer's block lying in the gutter?
Do I see little shards of writer's block lying in the gutter?
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Very nice. Glad to be reading your works again,
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Great story!