Home Invasion ?/m

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Home Invasion ?/m

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Wanted to know if anyone could write a home invasion story where I‘m getting tied up.
To your information: I‘m 15, skinny and also not very strong. Brown hair.
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I‘m open for pretty much anything btw :)
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I wrote the first part of my story

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It‘s amazing, thank you so much!
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So you are interested to read a continuation?
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Yes, definitely. But it would be nice if you could describe a bit more detailed how Kim gets tied up.
But in the end is still up to you, you decide.
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Part two just written. (link see above)
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Very good, I like the twist, it‘s really good. Thank you so much for writing this
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Just posted Part 3.
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This is awesome. I don’t know if you included Kim‘s watch on purpose, but I love it.

The hogtie is amazing. I am so excited to see where this goes. I mean… if you plan another part
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@TuggyMale
Not to barge in, but I would very strongly encourage you to post your comments directly on @johopp's story instead.
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Oh, good idea, I‘m kinda stupid haha

Thanks
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Part 4 online.
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... and Part 5 too.
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Next part online.
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next part online
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johopp wrote: 1 week ago I'm always open to constructive suggestions :-)

Chapter 7

A sudden noise makes all three of us jump. I look out the window and see that several police cars are stopped in front of the house. "Damn it - which one of you bastards called the cops?". I get a knife out of the kitchen drawer and hold it to Kim's throat. "If you don't tell me in three seconds which of you two called the cops, the little girl here is dead! One... two...!" I press the knife a little harder against Kim's neck.

From your and Kim's frightened whimpering and your eyes wide open in shock, I can see that none of you is responsible for the police operation. Otherwise one of you would have confessed long ago to save the other's life.

I look around the apartment in a flash - and discover your mother's car keys. Then I untie you and throw you one of your girlfriend's pink princess dresses while I tie Kim's hands behind her back again, this time without thumbs. "Thank you!" she says. You first look at the dress, then at me with a questioning look. What I then say leaves you speechless!

"You're going to put the dress on now and then we'll go to the garage! Hurry up!" You want to object, but quickly see the knife at your girlfriend's throat and her pleading look! You have no choice!

When you've changed, you turn away in shame. I direct you both into the elevator at gunpoint and then to the garage. Thank God no one sees you!

I open your mother's car with the remote key and order your girlfriend to climb into the trunk of the car. There I tie her in a hogtie again - this time without thumbs, which she acknowledges with a grateful sigh. I slide a narrow board between the trunk floor and the lid to ensure the air supply and close the lid. Your heart breaks when you see the trunk lid close to the narrow gap.

When Kim is safely stowed away, I order you to climb into the passenger seat. After tying your hands behind the backrest, I sit down in the driver's seat and start the engine. We drive off to an unknown destination.

I answer the question before you can ask me. "Why should you wear Kim's dress? Because it fits you, of course! Besides, you'll be so embarrassed to be seen in it that you won't want to draw the attention of other drivers or the police. And now relax and pray that we don't get caught in a traffic jam or a police checkpoint, then we'll soon be in our new hiding place and you'll quickly be rid of the embarrassing dress, and no one except the three of us will ever find out about it - I promise!" With these words, I start the engine. We're leaving and for the first time since we first "got to know each other" you'd like to swap places with Kim.

Feedback is welcome again.
Uh you posted this on the request note
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Just correctet, Maybe you could remove your post then, @TulHakkar? And thanks for remembering me and for reading this story.
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Next chapter posted.
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Chapter 9 online.
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This was my first bondage fantasy so I'll have to check it out
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Next part online.
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