Caught (f/ff)
8 chapters is a good size story. Each chapter was well written and descriptive. You never dragged on, each chapter told a part of the story perfectly. You have gift when it comes to writting at only 15.
Totally agree with the post above. It was a good fun story, good idea though, to end it there.
You can always write another story, with the same characters.
Well done, and thanks for letting us take part.![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
You can always write another story, with the same characters.
Well done, and thanks for letting us take part.
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
- radarlove67
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I liked the interaction, and I agree it was the perfect length.