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Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2022 9:47 pm
by tieupfan
Great chapter! Can't wait for what's next!
Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)
Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2022 12:05 am
by harveygasson
Brilliant new post
Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)
Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2022 2:45 am
by charliesmith
GreyLord wrote: ↑1 year ago
It is very good to see you continue this tale, @charliesmith. It will be nice to have Laura get tied up again. She really needs a boy friend to take care of these things, doesn't she? Good work!
Interesting idea.
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Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)
Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2022 10:04 pm
by Mask6190
Just caught up with the story. Great Job charliesmith!
Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)
Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2022 3:14 pm
by jafib
Just read the first page so far, so I don't know if anybody mentioned it in the meantime, but the irregular switching between past and present tense can be quite irritating. Choose one and stick to it
Either way, starting out interestingly
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Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 9:05 am
by ninterz
I really liked the story.
Too bad it war just left as it is