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Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2021 6:06 pm
by FelixSH
I read a dialogue-only story years ago, somewhere. Always wanted to try it myself. No idea if it worked out, just consider it an experiment.


Initiation
„What are you doing? Let me go!“

„Sorry, can't do. Every new player has to be initiated.“

„No! Help!“

„Come on, cover his mouth! Can't have him scream around here.“

„Who brought the duct tape? Come on, he is strong!“

„Let me gmmmm!“

„Damn, what are you guys doing? Get the tape!“

„Ok, ok, here it is.“

„Mmmmph!“

„Let's gag him first. Get his socks too, while you're at it.“

„Can't we tie his hands, at least? He is struggling really hard!“

„Just put him on the floor, and hold him there. Wait, let me help you.“

„Aahh, damn, that hurt! He bit me!“

„Help! Coach, help me! Plemmph!“

„More socks! We need to stuff his mouth, so that he can't even bite anymore!“

„Mmmph! Grrmmmph!“

„That's you own fault. Should have just accepted your fate.“

„Mmm! MMMMMM!!!“

„Where is the tape?!“

„Fuck, I lost him. Get him!“

„Nmm! Mmm! Mmph!“

„Don't worry, I got him! But help me, he is hard to keep down!“

„Here is the tape. Grab his hands, put them together behind his back!“

„Come on! Try a bit harder, guys!“

„How about helping us?“

„Sure, see? Now, tape his hands together!“

„Let me go! That hurts!“

„He spit out the socks!“

„Don't worry, if anyone could hear him, they would have come already. Let's just tie him up.“

„Stop, you are hurting me!“

„That's your own fault. Just stop fighting!“

„Come on, please, let me go. Please! Ah!“

„Wow, you got his elbows really close together. I nearly feel pity for him, now.“

„But only nearly, right? Hehe.“

„Let me out, damnit! Help! HELP!!!“

„Ok, that's just obnoxious. Put the socks back in!“

„No, please, don't!“

„Now! I'm tired of this whining.“

„Sure, at it!“

„Just let mmmmpph!“

„God, finally. Here, tape his mouth shut. And do it right, cover the whole head, if necessary.”

“Mmmphh! MMMPH!!”

“Come on, you are too slow. Just wrap it around his head. Faster!”

“He's pushing the socks out again! Keep wrapping!”

“There, that should shut him up.”

“Do a few rounds from the chin to the top of his head too.”

“Great idea. Than he can't even try to open his mouth.”

“Mmmpph.”

“Not much fight left in him, is there? Less struggling in general.”

“Great, than let's finish him up. Tape his arms to the body.”

“He is starting to struggle again!”

“Doesn't matter, he is done.”

“Mmm.”

“I think he is whimpering now.”

“Not getting out of this one, bro. Just take it like a man.”

“Are you done with the legs, already?”

“We have two rolls, let's use them up. Tape up his whole body!”

“Oh, yeah, that sounds fun! Like a mummy!”

“Mmmph! MMMMM!”

“What did I tell you, about taking it like a man? Just shut up!”

“Pmmm! Pmmmmph!”

“Ok, that 's enough. Keep taping him up, I'll think of a punishment.”

“Mmph?!”

“That's your own fault!”

“Here, tape that to his face.”

“Awesome idea!”

“MMMMMMMPH!!!”

“Look at his eyes, haha. He really doesn't like that one.”

“Put a sock in it, before taping it to his face.”

“Here, take one of mine. I sweat a ton today.”

“Mmmmph! MMMMPH!”

“Whatever, dude. I hope the shoe smells nice. Looks good on your face, too.”

“Mmmmmmmm! MMMMMMMMPH”

“Stop exhausting yourself, you aren't going anywhere.”

“Are you done? I'll make a pic.”

“Right, we need something to remember this.”

“Look how pretty you are, man.”

“Mmmmph.”

“Yeah, sure, whatever. Anyone got the key to his locker?”

“MMMPH?!”

“Yep, here it is. Put him in.”

“Mm! MM!”

“Wow, he is still struggling.”

“Well, if we drop him, it's his own fault.”

“MMMMMPH! MMMMMMM!”

“And done. Was harder than I expected.”

“Yeah, I'm exhausted. Let's go home, I need some sleep.”

“MMMMMMMMMMM!!!”

“Don't worry, we will let you out. First thing in the morning.”

“See you then.”

“Mmm.”

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2021 7:13 pm
by Killua
For me it's the first time that I read a dialogue-only story. I'm more a fan of classic stories because I like them more detailed but it's something new and interesting to read. Even though you used only dialogues, I could imagine the whole situation pretty good, so you did a good job. I'm quite curious what he did to deserve spending the night in a locker. :lol:

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2021 9:40 pm
by Xtc
Yup, it worked.

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2021 9:55 pm
by xler479
Definitely got right to the point

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2021 8:18 am
by FelixSH
Thanks for the comments. I'm glad it worked out.
Killua wrote: 2 years ago For me it's the first time that I read a dialogue-only story. I'm more a fan of classic stories because I like them more detailed but it's something new and interesting to read. Even though you used only dialogues, I could imagine the whole situation pretty good, so you did a good job. I'm quite curious what he did to deserve spending the night in a locker. :lol:
Yeah, I only found one such story, but always found it a fun read. But that too was a scene, where someone was tied up against his will, and I don't think the format lends itself to anything but action scenes.

You're right, you lose a lot of details this way, but I feel like it makes the pace faster and more intense. It's an interesting tradeoff, I find.

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2021 11:34 am
by Xtc
Here's a sneaky link: https://www.tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=2273
Look for the second part of the story, "Summertime Blues".

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2022 10:41 pm
by The slave
I really love this story it's just perfect

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2022 11:52 pm
by Trammel
Very clever and it works!

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2022 11:09 pm
by Stormee
I have never heard of a dialogue only story before so it was interesting to imagine on how it goes during each speaking role. Makes me wonder what sport initiation it was. Baseball, football, soccer? Who knows. But it was pretty interesting to read still. Just let your imagination go free to see how it plays out. :D

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2022 7:09 pm
by FelixSH
Thanks for the comments, everyone, I'm glad you guys liked my experiment.

Re: Initiation (dialogue only) - mm/m

Posted: Tue Nov 08, 2022 5:41 am
by The slave
I want to be locked in the locker lol, awesome stories