A day of rest! (f/m)
Your story reads way better with all those paragraphs you made now. The ending seems to be a bit more realistic now. After such a long time tied to the tree, he surely walks a bit wobbly and needs a little help to get inside. You described it nicely. Good job!
Thank you for your kind comments. Bearing in mind I wear glasses for reading/writing/other close up work, I am slightly embarrassed I didn't pick up on the layout issue before.
Gemtie (Gemscot)
Gemtie (Gemscot)
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I really enjoyed reading the original posting and much loved re-reading the reformated version. Thank you for writing these wonderful stories!
Love to be tied-up I read and write stories for fun
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(I don't do roleplays nor story requests)
Thank you for your kind comments.
There was a couple of occasions around this age when I could have actually made this story a real story, and I did wonder what it would be like to do it. I didn't actually do it and now with a hopefully more mature head on my shoulders I wouldn't want to do it!
Gemma
There was a couple of occasions around this age when I could have actually made this story a real story, and I did wonder what it would be like to do it. I didn't actually do it and now with a hopefully more mature head on my shoulders I wouldn't want to do it!
Gemma
