From the sound of things from Sarah, it might take some "friendly persuasion" to involve her...
Well done update.
From the sound of things from Sarah, it might take some "friendly persuasion" to involve her...
Yes it may. We shall see...notsosinister wrote: ↑2 years agoFrom the sound of things from Sarah, it might take some "friendly persuasion" to involve her...
Well done update.
Thank you. Sarah does seem intrigued a bit but, well, we'll see. She sure is cute though!
All good questions. Let's just say I'm writing ahead meaning this probably isn't the end.GreyLord wrote: ↑2 years ago Yes, "Sweet dreams, Kenzie…" You are right, @Trammel, this does not feel like the end. It feels like the beginning. What new tug experiences await Kenzie? How much will she interest Sarah in giving things a try? If Sarah joins in the fun, will she be a top, a bottom, or a switch?
And we really know nothing about Kenzie's captor. Will we learn more about this person? I do hope that you continue this story for a long time.
Trammel wrote: ↑2 years agoAll good questions. Let's just say I'm writing ahead meaning this probably isn't the end.GreyLord wrote: ↑2 years ago Yes, "Sweet dreams, Kenzie…" You are right, @Trammel, this does not feel like the end. It feels like the beginning. What new tug experiences await Kenzie? How much will she interest Sarah in giving things a try? If Sarah joins in the fun, will she be a top, a bottom, or a switch?
And we really know nothing about Kenzie's captor. Will we learn more about this person? I do hope that you continue this story for a long time.
[mention]Caesar73[/mention] I would say that Sarah, like your Anna, has that look that would lend itself toward a kidnapping, if she could be convinced.
Your recapitulation is useful to Kenzie by giving her perspective on what happened to her. And to Sarah it introduces new concepts and ideas that she has not previously, as far as we know, entertained. Very well done once more.Elusive_Lady wrote: ↑2 years ago This is an interesting take on the whole kidnap scenario. Talking about it with a friend, as girls do about anything, very realistic.
It would seem like a waste if two cuties like that didn't get tied up, especially Sarah who has never had the experience and seems a bit reluctant.The G-Man wrote: ↑2 years ago The post-kidnapping dialogue between Kenzie and Sarah, it sounds pretty spot on about how a couple girls would discuss such a thing. Sarah seems pretty intrigued about maybe having an adventure with Kenzie. Wouldn't mind seeing these two cuties getting kidnapped next time.
Absolutely Never leave out a good opportunity!
I like the way it's going,. Thanks for the compliment. I just let it flow and see where it leads, with a little guidance of course! I like the discussion and dialogue. Most of the tie ups on this site include gags which is fine but it often precludes discussion which I think adds to the story. More to come but it may be a few days. I'm going hiking, perhaps in a snowstorm!
Could not agree more! Weaving another damsel into MacKenzie's bondage experience... Just awesome! Sarah seems to be getting every so slightly interested in the experience...Trammel wrote: ↑2 years agoI like the way it's going,. Thanks for the compliment. I just let it flow and see where it leads, with a little guidance of course! I like the discussion and dialogue. Most of the tie ups on this site include gags which is fine but it often precludes discussion which I think adds to the story. More to come but it may be a few days. I'm going hiking, perhaps in a snowstorm!