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Well this is a really cool beginning to a story. I love it, and you left a cliff hanger to boot! The descriptions and detail are wonderful.
One suggestion, add a gender tag.
Beyond that, just don't take too long to add the next part because I'm on the edge of my seat.
Great job!
One suggestion, add a gender tag.
Beyond that, just don't take too long to add the next part because I'm on the edge of my seat.
Great job!
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deleted, answered my own question!
Or you changed it, which you did!
Or you changed it, which you did!
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A Kidnapping For MacKenzie.
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A Kidnapping For MacKenzie.
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UNDiGuise
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gaggedbyawoman
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This is so HOT
I can't wait to read more.
I can't wait to read more.-
gaggedbyawoman
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Could you maybe describe what the mother looks, & what she is wearing please??
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UNDiGuise
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Incredible start!!! I can't wait for more from this family!
I guess I got a little confused as to how part 2 connected to part 1. Perhaps that will be sorted out.
Thanks for reading. Feel free to comment.
Active story:
The bully, the tree and me (mm/m): http://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=8 ... 967b8517c3
Recently finished story:
A Kidnapping For MacKenzie.
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The bully, the tree and me (mm/m): http://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=8 ... 967b8517c3
Recently finished story:
A Kidnapping For MacKenzie.