Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)

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Post by tieupfan »

Great chapter! Can't wait for what's next!
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Post by charliesmith »

GreyLord wrote: 1 year ago It is very good to see you continue this tale, @charliesmith. It will be nice to have Laura get tied up again. She really needs a boy friend to take care of these things, doesn't she? Good work!
Interesting idea. ;) [mention]GreyLord[/mention]

Thank you [mention]slackywacky[/mention] [mention]Mommy's Naughty Boy[/mention] [mention]tieupfan[/mention] [mention]harveygasson[/mention]
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Post by Mask6190 »

Just caught up with the story. Great Job charliesmith!
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Post by jafib »

Just read the first page so far, so I don't know if anybody mentioned it in the meantime, but the irregular switching between past and present tense can be quite irritating. Choose one and stick to it ;)

Either way, starting out interestingly :)
Meet Jessica in the Garage, Alica the baby-sitter, Phillip tieing up teen girls
Adult Stories: Naughty Tamara, Josefine the Model (all M/F)

Feedback motivates me to write more and continue a story :)
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Post by ninterz »

I really liked the story.
Too bad it war just left as it is
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