I like the atmosphere in this last part. Hannah at the begin of a journey, but not one she is coerced to to make, but out of her free will.Aren't we having fun (F+/F, F+/F+, F/F) COMPLETE
This final chapter fits the story perfectly. When I read the first Part, I would have never guessed that the story would unfold in that direction. I do like surprises though I like the atmosphere in this last part. Hannah at the begin of a journey, but not one she is coerced to to make, but out of her free will.
I like the atmosphere in this last part. Hannah at the begin of a journey, but not one she is coerced to to make, but out of her free will.
[mention]NotSeen[/mention], this story just came to my attention. I am almost glad that you had completed your tale before I started reading it as I was able to read to the end in one session. I must say that you have done a marvelous writing job. The plot was unique and written so that it was believable. I particularly liked the way that your final chapter tied back to the first chapter with the reference to Fifty Shades. I too would like to see these characters again in later stories.
A List of my stories:An Unlikely Savior Completed
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The Bandit Scout on Newhome updated 05/30/23
Many, many thanks for your comments. Every single time I read such kind words, I am still amazed by how much my work is liked.
I was worried that everyone could see the ending from a long way off, so it has been really pleasant to hear I managed to surprise at least some of you. It would appear that now I have to start thinking about writing a Berenice/Hannah story... then again, not long ago I was worried I was running out of ideas. So, I guess I should thank you for giving me this idea.
Till tomorrow - for the start of my next story, that is.
I was worried that everyone could see the ending from a long way off, so it has been really pleasant to hear I managed to surprise at least some of you. It would appear that now I have to start thinking about writing a Berenice/Hannah story... then again, not long ago I was worried I was running out of ideas. So, I guess I should thank you for giving me this idea.
Till tomorrow - for the start of my next story, that is.
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That was a wonderful story [mention]NotSeen[/mention] , I didn’t see the twists and turns coming, and the cliff hangers at the end of each chapter were a (good) trade.
Happy endings are the best, and your descriptions of the emotions were excellent.
Happy endings are the best, and your descriptions of the emotions were excellent.
Why, thank you! So glad you liked the tale.tickletied84 wrote: ↑3 years ago That was a wonderful story @NotSeen , I didn’t see the twists and turns coming, and the cliff hangers at the end of each chapter were a (good) trade.
Happy endings are the best, and your descriptions of the emotions were excellent.
WONDERFUL story!! Right up my alley! Loved it, and can't wait to read more from you!